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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: aliya666
fab update gargi just loved it sauray and manyta fight with each others like kids
and saurya made her hiv positive hillarious update soon
thanx for pm

Thank you aliya for liking it.😃...all the comments of my readers really encourage me dear😊

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: Jarin04
It was just hillarious nd the hiv part cracked me up

Gulab Jamun..Haven't talked with you for a long time baby..how are you sisi?😊...

Thanks you sisi for liking it...yes that HIV scene was to make it a bit unique and not just a hindi movie romantic scene😆

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: puggyy
Awesome update !!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved it baby😊 ...continue soon 😊

Pls small request - in next upadte want more of shaurya n chand 😛 😉 Plsss

HIV JIKE WAS HILLARIOUS 😆 😆 😆 🤣

Anisha sweetheart thanks for liking the chpater. SHaurya and Chand will have to pause a bit as the trip needs to be shown for now..So that Manyata can recollect her past soon. as soon as Manyata remembers everything, we will unravel the entire past story completely.

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Rapchik Update Gargi
oh teri
UV a.k.a Shaurya ka toh javab nahi
HIV +
instead of fighting he stayed cool and
calm and used his wit
amazing portrayal of UV's intelligence
love your writing

anu dear thank you 😊..Ya shaurya thora alag hai..halkat se bhi bara halkat!!😆😆

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: swetsurati
awsomeee...love it gr8 update👏
OMG...HIV positive that was hilarious... update soon thanx for PM.

sweat thank you dear for reading it and liking.will update soon😉

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: mahilove
it was awesome
love the whole update
love shaurya he is damn hot
continue soon

Thank you Mahi for liking it. Thanks a lot...Shaurya is hot and different from other princes😉

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: -Zina-
awesome chapter gargi👏
ManVeer nok-jhok was so funny😆manyata wants to go with him but still her ego doesn't allows her to ...haaww those rascals the were playing with her bras🤣 poor girl this is beyond embarrassing...but uday saved her O my God the mad her HIV positive haha😆 and she wasn't able to figure out whats happening! i hope she will thank him this time and wont do something like last time when he saved her...! this was a short update as u were at your relatives place but very nice i thoroughly enjoyed it!😆
good work i love this FF!😛
too deep and interesting! update soon and thanks for the pm😊

Zina baby..thanks for such a detailed comment..😃Made me smile really.🤗I just thought of this HIV positive idea while writing the entire scene...wanted to make it funny which will lead to more fights...He didn't want to fight with the goons for her, as last time she blamed him even after saving her

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Jarin04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Gulab Jamun..Haven't talked with you for a long time baby..how are you sisi?😊...
Thanks you sisi for liking it...yes that HIV scene was to make it a bit unique and not just a hindi movie romantic scene😆

hey barfi just pucho mat bohut bura hal hai mera. Ekdin mai 2 xams de rahi hu. Uggh. Nd i'm really sorry for this too short nd useless comment. I hope u'll understand my problem.

Edited by Jarin04 - 12 years ago