Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter - Page 35

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

omg this was one hot update☺️
actually speaking all ur updates r hot😊
loved d gym scenes.. 😳😳
flashback seems interesting...

continue soon😊😊

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

OH MY f**k GOSH THIS WAS TRULY AMAZING AND MIND BOGLING SIMPLY HOT humare pasine roke nahi ruk rahe my Phone is about to explode due to the hotness babe. You left me speechless ab main kia kahu. Firstly manveer man MANVEER aur should i say MAURYA Omg lile srsly saab GYM waalo ki to nikal padhi hogi Rated R cheeze muft main dekhne ko mil gaaye haaye kash hum bhi hote waha pe maaze hi aajate srsly and trust me after than up and down thing i srsly was like " dude shaurya how do controlled yourself from getting a boner " 🤣 that was hilarious right there i was kinda laughing at that part lolzz and uday staring at her ass and his line " you got a nice ass but don't think it will look good if its a little shaped and toned ?? " 🤣 all gym scene was really hot and trust me i didnt know that was coming !!! Uday ke toh sahi mai naaze aagaye and to my surprise manyata was really enjoyin his touch huh i see love comin on its way !!! But again i will give 100 points to MANVEER scene all alone it was just dreamy DREAMY an trust me the way you explained it is anazing for me you are my Nicholas Sparks man i love you baby you are highly talented just wow amazing need words to describe your work really i NEED some abhi se kaam par lagti hoon dictionary le ke word search par jana hai mekko . Hey its not over yet ye to mele manveer ke baale main tha ab aati hoon main uss sangeeta ki baachi pe But before that i am glad jay nahi hai cause i was sick and tried of Jay being the kabbab main haddi always now i got sangeeta to bash on yay lolzz weirdo right ?? Anyways this sangeeta is such a highly sofiaticated f**ked on bitch like srsly a BITCH such a like srsly get a life PISSED CAUSE THE GUY WASN't FLIRTING WITH HER and giving threats of closing the gym is height of dumbness. I am sure she should marry shakti kapoor cause wo usse sath hamesha flirt karega as she wants . But jokes apart ypu writing skills has that power tO make me hate a character almost calling her names which is NOT an easy task NOT AT ALL i mean we always hated Jay cause we knew bout her character very well but sangeeta was never in sight so applauses for making her character hateworthy !! And wait its not over yet <img src="http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m145.gif" alt="" /> Abhi kurwaki je baare main main kia kaho again her character is powerful too i feel pity for her really bechaari ko maut bhi naseeb nahi hue but she is doing her duty really well and i lOve her and chandralekha's bond to core also her bond with uday is great and i just love the way ypu write baby i know meri ghise pite line but still it never gets old you rock baby and as per kurwaki we always say one need to pay for it sins and i guess something she did which created a great impact whose resultant is the future. Its really thrilling and amazing baby hatsoff again baby you're a mastermind baby And i am still not over yet Chandralekha being aggrivating bout this prince shauray i mean THE KING so seems like she is already having hin in her mind 24/7 and so such an extent that she wants to know who is her prince charming and without any doubt i can tell its was shauray who was in the roung bowl and ahem ahem i see jealosusy and well shauray have a great effect on chandra.

Well once again great GREAT UPDATE GARGI u are truly a rockstar i love your FF so much its my fav baby and trust me on such a topic running an FF is difficult according to me well donno about you but it is really difficult to lead a story and potraying it this well is an ardous job and i am lucky to have a writer like you on this from. Man you inspire me alot gargi wheneve i read ur update i am like " man i wanna reach that level " you are such an inspiration for me atleast and i love you from thr core of my heart

Finally at last i wanna say one thing to you baby " thanx for inspiring me " Thats it for now ingnore spell mistakes typing from phone and its touch aur jaldi jaldi type karne main Galtiyaan hogayi hoon ho maaf karna
Muahh

Hey Gargi dear...sorry for late comment and I know my comment is pending for last two updates so here comes me...😳

Brilliant, mind blowing and an epic one👏👏👏

your updates just make me fall for your ff more and more...it is just spell bounded and intriguing na...out standing⭐️

So shaurya and kuwarki knows black magic and he has been using that on Manyata since 16th century...what a thought...I tell you😉

I just loved that line of shaurya

I will not die before making her mine this time....superb...

and all shaurya 's dialgoues in the gym😉

yaar tumharay toh dailogur hi itnay hot hotay hain...☺️☺️

and this update ...woah what a sizzling and fiery update👏

so just make an ordinary gym training so steamy na☺️ ☺️...I was like gyms bhi itnay dangerous hotay hain...😉😆

but who that women is?🤔 ...I know her dream she saw is shaurya but he is smiling to women other than manyata...nnnooo

seriously I don't have words to tell you how you have described that scene so perfectly⭐️...tell me yara do you know about these moves...lolllzzz😆

now I am thinking no gym training...lolllzzz🤣

thanx for the pm dear and update soon...tell me when🤗

I will comment regularly😳...but update fast deary

rana darling is getting really impatient for your mind blowing updates

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

OMG Andy darling...Touch se type karne ke baad bhi itna bara comment..Itne ache comments ka reply mei ache se dungi..tomorrow as now have to sleep for tomorrow's office which will be very hectic..I am too elated now to speak anything...

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Hey Gargi dear...sorry for late comment and I know my comment is pending for last two updates so here comes me...😳

Brilliant, mind blowing and an epic one👏👏👏

your updates just make me fall for your ff more and more...it is just spell bounded and intriguing na...out standing⭐️

So shaurya and kuwarki knows black magic and he has been using that on Manyata since 16th century...what a thought...I tell you😉

I just loved that line of shaurya

I will not die before making her mine this time....superb...

and all shaurya 's dialgoues in the gym😉

yaar tumharay toh dailogur hi itnay hot hotay hain...☺️☺️

and this update ...woah what a sizzling and fiery update👏

so just make an ordinary gym training so steamy na☺️ ☺️...I was like gyms bhi itnay dangerous hotay hain...😉😆

but who that women is?🤔 ...I know her dream she saw is shaurya but he is smiling to women other than manyata...nnnooo

seriously I don't have words to tell you how you have described that scene so perfectly⭐️...tell me yara do you know about these moves...lolllzzz😆

now I am thinking no gym training...lolllzzz🤣

thanx for the pm dear and update soon...tell me when🤗

I will comment regularly😳...but update fast deary

rana darling is getting really impatient for your mind blowing updates

RES

I'm quite behind will catch up soon then write a long comment