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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: urvashihiran
wo was the women whom chandralekha saw in the magic bowl with maharaj shaurya pratap singh.???????????????/

Urvashi. dear.That is the mystery..so can't reveal now..even Chandralekha doesn't know till then and is shocked thatswhy..when will show the past life again maybe can comment then...I think u can realise who she was..just think hard😆

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Awesome chapter Gargi
gym scenes were hot
poor people @ de gym
de must hav burned😆😆😆
thanks 4 de PM dear

hahaa..Ya everyone was burning...the scene was making them sweat more than the crunches and push ups!!...😆

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urvashihiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

got it ..😉😉😉 lets wait as "patience is a good virtue"

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: urvashihiran
got it ..😉😉😉 lets wait as "patience is a good virtue"

Thats like a good reader😃..But did u really get it who she was?😉

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urvashihiran

@urvashihiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

as you told me that i am a good reader i can really get your imagination before my eyes "akhir hum bhi sadiyooo purane silent reader hai haa nahi tooo... "

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Gargi ,

U know how much I love your ff and how obssessed I am about it ❤️. But this chapter has completely bowled me over. Every part you've written thus far was brilliant ... BUT - chapter 8 is MIND-BLOWING 👍🏼👏. It was such a treat and U have taken HOTNESS to a new level ☺️☺️☺️ . Who knew an ordinary gym -sequence😕 ... would look sexier than a s** OR a love-making scene 😉. I salute your writting skills!!!

Okay , now coming back to the update :

Sangeeta is a jealous bi*** 🤬 ... I don't like her!!!😡

Manyata's body is reacting (positively ) to Uday's touch 😳 ... irrespective of what she feels about him 😲. ( OF-COURSE , HE HAS NO QUALMS ABOUT ANYTHING ) 😆😉.

Have to say , poor Kurwaki - she has survived thousands of years ... just for the unification of "her dear lovers" .

I guess Chandralekha has seen Shaurya's face in the bowl of water as her "dream -man" ... BUT , SHE IS MORE IRKED ABOUT THE WOMAN WHO WAS PRESENT WITH HIM / THE WOMAN HE SMILED AT ... do we smell a tinge of jealousy ... ALREADY!!! 😈

Dear ,please update soon ... if day 1 @ the gym created such a hungama ☺️🥳 ; day 2 will probably be a major dhamaka 🤬 ... & I CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT!!!

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Gargi ,
U know how much I love your ff and how obssessed I am about it ❤️. But this chapter has completely bowled me over. Every part you've written thus far was brilliant ... BUT - chapter 8 is MIND-BLOWING 👍🏼👏. It was such a treat and U have taken HOTNESS to a new level ☺️☺️☺️ . Who knew an ordinary gym -sequence😕 ... would look sexier than a s** OR a love-making scene 😉. I salute your writting skills!!!

Okay , now coming back to the update :

Sangeeta is a jealous bi*** 🤬 ... I don't like her!!!😡

Manyata's body is reacting (positively ) to Uday's touch 😳 ... irrespective of what she feels about him 😲. ( OF-COURSE , HE HAS NO QUALMS ABOUT ANYTHING ) 😆😉.

Have to say , poor Kurwaki - she has survived thousands of years ... just for the unification of "her dear lovers" .

I guess Chandralekha has seen Shaurya's face in the bowl of water as her "dream -man" ... BUT , SHE IS MORE IRKED ABOUT THE WOMAN WHO WAS PRESENT WITH HIM / THE WOMAN HE SMILED AT ... do we smell a tinge of jealousy ... ALREADY!!! 😈

Dear ,please update soon ... if day 1 @ the gym created such a hungama ☺️🥳 ; day 2 will probably be a major dhamaka 🤬 ... & I CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT!!!

ehhehe😆😆...Navina darling u cracked me up with ur dhamaka words!!...ill try to update soon as this week after Wednesday m a bit free...but will have to think about Gym sequel...will have to search for some other gym equipments and then think out the steps😕😆...

Chandralekha's part is a suspense which will be revealed slowly...

Next chapter will be about the Trip..So will try to make more interesting!😛

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

ehhehe😆😆...Navina darling u cracked me up with ur dhamaka words!!...ill try to update soon as this week after Wednesday m a bit free...but will have to think about Gym sequel...will have to search for some other gym equipments and then think out the steps😕😆...

Chandralekha's part is a suspense which will be revealed slowly...

Next chapter will be about the Trip..So will try to make more interesting!😛

I have full faith that the gym -sequel will be steamier than this 1

😆. About Chandralekha's mystery ... take your time to unravel it - NO HURRY ... as Manyata's story; right now, is MORE INTERESTING😉🤣 . ( I KNOW IT'S ALL INTER-LINKED ... BUT, I'M JUST SAYING )😃.

I just realised I forgot to say something about chapter 8:

❤️ I LOVED IT - LOVED IT - LOVED IT !!! ❤️

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

OH MY f**k GOSH THIS WAS TRULY AMAZING AND MIND BOGLING SIMPLY HOT humare pasine roke nahi ruk rahe my Phone is about to explode due to the hotness babe. You left me speechless ab main kia kahu. Firstly manveer man MANVEER aur should i say MAURYA Omg lile srsly saab GYM waalo ki to nikal padhi hogi Rated R cheeze muft main dekhne ko mil gaaye haaye kash hum bhi hote waha pe maaze hi aajate srsly and trust me after than up and down thing i srsly was like " dude shaurya how do controlled yourself from getting a boner " 🤣 that was hilarious right there i was kinda laughing at that part lolzz and uday staring at her ass and his line " you got a nice ass but don't think it will look good if its a little shaped and toned ?? " 🤣 all gym scene was really hot and trust me i didnt know that was coming !!! Uday ke toh sahi mai naaze aagaye and to my surprise manyata was really enjoyin his touch huh i see love comin on its way !!! But again i will give 100 points to MANVEER scene all alone it was just dreamy DREAMY an trust me the way you explained it is anazing for me you are my Nicholas Sparks man i love you baby you are highly talented just wow amazing need words to describe your work really i NEED some abhi se kaam par lagti hoon dictionary le ke word search par jana hai mekko .

Hey its not over yet ye to mele manveer ke baale main tha ab aati hoon main uss sangeeta ki baachi pe But before that i am glad jay nahi hai cause i was sick and tried of Jay being the kabbab main haddi always now i got sangeeta to bash on yay lolzz weirdo right ?? Anyways this sangeeta is such a highly sofiaticated f**ked on bitch like srsly a BITCH such a like srsly get a life PISSED CAUSE THE GUY WASN't FLIRTING WITH HER and giving threats of closing the gym is height of dumbness. I am sure she should marry shakti kapoor cause wo usse sath hamesha flirt karega as she wants . But jokes apart ypu writing skills has that power tO make me hate a character almost calling her names which is NOT an easy task NOT AT ALL i mean we always hated Jay cause we knew bout her character very well but sangeeta was never in sight so applauses for making her character hateworthy !! And wait its not over yet Abhi kurwaki je baare main main kia kaho again her character is powerful too i feel pity for her really bechaari ko maut bhi naseeb nahi hue but she is doing her duty really well and i lOve her and chandralekha's bond to core also her bond with uday is great and i just love the way ypu write baby i know meri ghise pite line but still it never gets old you rock baby and as per kurwaki we always say one need to pay for it sins and i guess something she did which created a great impact whose resultant is the future. Its really thrilling and amazing baby hatsoff again baby you're a mastermind baby And i am still not over yet Chandralekha being aggrivating bout this prince shauray i mean THE KING so seems like she is already having hin in her mind 24/7 and so such an extent that she wants to know who is her prince charming and without any doubt i can tell its was shauray who was in the roung bowl and ahem ahem i see jealosusy and well shauray have a great effect on chandra.

Well once again great GREAT UPDATE GARGI u are truly a rockstar i love your FF so much its my fav baby and trust me on such a topic running an FF is difficult according to me well donno about you but it is really difficult to lead a story and potraying it this well is an ardous job and i am lucky to have a writer like you on this from. Man you inspire me alot gargi wheneve i read ur update i am like " man i wanna reach that level " you are such an inspiration for me atleast and i love you from thr core of my heart

Finally at last i wanna say one thing to you baby " thanx for inspiring me " Thats it for now ingnore spell mistakes typing from phone and its touch aur jaldi jaldi type karne main Galtiyaan hogayi hoon ho maaf karna
Muahh

Edited by AndreaBaid - 12 years ago

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Fekta Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#340

Wowww...gargi that was awomeee ,fab,fantastic update hayeee...gym training was dam hot paisa wasul update...mere toh bina work out kehi pasine chhut rhe the... hayooo...rabba me marjava finally manyata ko kuch kuch hone laga...update soon thanx for PM.

Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago

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