||A Royal Excuse|| Chapter 3 on page 22[updated] - Page 15

Originally posted by: swetasurati

awsomeee...update soon

Originally posted by: Grenade

Waiting...now that's the part I hate! LOL😆

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

OMG Payal, did i actually read ur upadte this morning WOW it is so dreamy, Have waited long for ur update 😳😳, And u make a comeback with such a breathtaking update 👏👏, loved every bit of it, and the twist of 5 months was the show-stealer 😉, wont be wrong if i say my heart skipped a beat when I read my hottie's demands ☺️

Analysis:

Part 1: The Astounding deal: OMG the 5 months conditions of staying together was so bewildering. Loved it 👏. I mean he hates her but still he wants her with him 24X 7 😳😳, how unique is that 😛. He definitely has some hidden motives, but in front of Destiny all human motives fall flat 😉. So Payal now you have created a plot where in 5 months Manveer will fall in a never before seen passionate love, trying hard to hold back with all their might because they are supposed to hate each other, but still loosing themselves in front of destiny.😳😳😳 I'm just loving it even more now.

Part 2: Searching a lost friend amidst the fog of past: Again very well articulated Payal👏. His introducing himself with his royal air and pride, her unexpected encounter with her long lost friends, her trying hard to find a trace of her true friend in this cold stoned monster was so well depicted. Plus the coat of flashback that you have added was enough to state their floating family enmity from both their point of view. I mean this is what I like about ur writing ,in just few lines u can tell the readers the past, present and the reasons that define their characters😳👏

Part 3: A friend lost in the maze of enemity, deal accepted: Amazing part Payal 👏, U know the way u write just leaves me flabbergasted. I mean UV's 1,2,3 along with Manyata's dilemma I read it like 3 times already.

Part 4: Fatal attraction: AWWW 😳 the sparks are already flying ☺️, but they wont dare accept for the fact that both are the stubborn royal rivals😆.

And I had all but knowingly consented to the abduction for the sake of Dad - someone who wasn't likely to even notice my disappearance.

this line was just bang-on the spot. I mean M is doing this for the sake of someone who is seriously not worth it.

Payal u have taken this ff in such an amazing and eventful direction, trust me after this update I can very well say the wait was worth it 👍🏼.

Originally posted by: machinegun

very nice story.din mein kaise baar ye thread check karti hoon.update Asap

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

lol 😆 payal ever heard of tasting ur own medicine 😉, I know doll u r neck deep in ur studies, I really appreciate ur taking the time out and updating 😳, Edited my comment on Page 18😃

Originally posted by: khalilshahista

Wow, that was amazing. It was definitely worth the wait. U write so effortlessly, just wanted to continue reading. Plz update soon, cant wait 4 next update.

Hi Payal : D

First of all I'm sorry for such a late comment. I had read the first part a long time back but could not post my reply.Today I was wandering in the forum and I saw your update…so here I am… : P

Gawd I was waiting for this one!😉

What an amazing concept..i just loved it! 👏

And you are one amazing writer as well….love the way the story is proceeding… 👍🏼

What a Heart-wrenching death of uv's mom…..poor soul :(

No wonder what made him so cruel!

Love the bond the siblings share both uv-unnati and vijay-manyata…but why is jay so ignorant? 😕

Coming to Brij….i hate him! Yes I do. "Ask the servants to treat her not less than a family member" : O

Loved UV-Manyata's takkar ! Poor manyata..she's having a hard time battling with her emotions and reality! 🤣

And for the 5 months agreement…..I just can't wait for the next update! You got me hooked to your SS….Politics , Drama , Emotions and love. Haaye! Its like watching a movie : P

Update soon!

-Disha