||A Royal Excuse|| Chapter 3 on page 22[updated] - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yaar...uday is sooo manipulating as always..lol..cant wait fore more..
btw thx for the pm ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
u dfntely deserve all the likes and commnts,bcoz ts was a mindbvlowingg,suprduper udpate!!!!!! love dthe way manyata was gving him choices of luxuries and he waas answering her backk!!!!!! then the part wwhre m is admiring his lookss!!!!!!!! woow wooow,waitng to read mree!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really loveee your FF! It is so different and interesting! Loved both parts 😊 I can't wait to read the next chapters, continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sinner.gurl

Hi Payal : D

First of all I'm sorry for such a late comment. I had read the first part a long time back but could not post my reply.Today I was wandering in the forum and I saw your update'so here I am' : P


Gawd I was waiting for this one!😉

What an amazing concept..i just loved it! 👏

And you are one amazing writer as well'.love the way the story is proceeding' 👍🏼

What a Heart-wrenching death of uv's mom'..poor soul :(

No wonder what made him so cruel!

Love the bond the siblings share both uv-unnati and vijay-manyata'but why is jay so ignorant? 😕

Coming to Brij'.i hate him! Yes I do. "Ask the servants to treat her not less than a family member" : O

Loved UV-Manyata's takkar ! Poor manyata..she's having a hard time battling with her emotions and reality! 🤣

And for the 5 months agreement'..I just can't wait for the next update! You got me hooked to your SS'.Politics , Drama , Emotions and love. Haaye! Its like watching a movie : P

Update soon!

-Disha


First of all disha I'm really touched that you took the pain to comment all the way back from the Prologue..!!
Thank you..! As for JN, thats how she has always been..hateful of her elder sister for being the heiress to the throne and not her..
Aww..a movie? That was one of the best compliments i've got..Thank you!! 😊😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hemvb

awesome yaar...uday is sooo manipulating as always..lol..cant wait fore more..

btw thx for the pm ;)


Thank you! And Its my pleasure! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

u dfntely deserve all the likes and commnts,bcoz ts was a mindbvlowingg,suprduper udpate!!!!!! love dthe way manyata was gving him choices of luxuries and he waas answering her backk!!!!!! then the part wwhre m is admiring his lookss!!!!!!!! woow wooow,waitng to read mree!!!!!!!!!😊


Thank you sooo much Pia!!😳 Lol, those parts were most fun to write too! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_SD

I really loveee your FF! It is so different and interesting! Loved both parts 😊 I can't wait to read the next chapters, continue soon!



Thanks a lottt..Priya!! 😳😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome FF

Loved this one..

Sorry cdnt comment earlier.. Hav already read first update long ago.. But dnt comment...

Aww poor manayta .. She dies for her fathers love n he is so arghhh!

Jay toh Jay..

Now VB Unnzie's bond is gr8 wid M..

DS Komal.. The same..

And now the princeyyy .. Heee..
Aww poor guy.. Sad story behind his mothers death.. no wonder this her mothers death is the reason for his hatefullness towards devgarh family, manysta.
His arogant nature.. Is all accepted..
Nowww.. Waiting for the love hate rltnshp of ManVeer to sart..

Hawww 5 months agreemeeent.. Haaa..
Now hate ego romance jealousy LOVE emotions.. M wwaiting to read all these from ur FF..
M eagerly waiting for next update..

Do cont soon
Do add me to ur PM list if u hav 1

~Jazzy :)
Edited by thejazzgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantabulous Payal di
i luved d way u expressed uday's hatred towards the devgarh family 👏
Awee poor manyata i feel sad fr 😭
VB as always is very cute 😉
OMG!!! ye 5 months ka agreement kis lye???
uday is such a blackmailer 😈
uday is heartbroken ...he lost his mother and dat too infront of his eyes 😭
Loved ur work dear 👍🏼 🤗 ❤️
And do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice FF
nice concept

cont soon :)

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