||A Royal Excuse|| Chapter 3 on page 22[updated]

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A Royal Excuse


Prologue


Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh. The name alone was enough to stir raging hormones through nationwide female population. Rich, spoilt and devilishly handsome- he was everything a Casanova could be. But very few were aware of the reality behind the arrogant, self-obsessed attitude he projected.

Broken was rather a soft word to describe the persistent state looming over his heart since the fateful day his sole support, the closest, dearest person to a child's heart, his Mother was snatched from him for eternity. A loving Mother and a caring wife, Queen Padmini Devi was the kindest soul the Jaigarh kingdom had ever known of. Being a victim of the dirty politics of the King of Devgarh, Jaigarh's supposed other half, was not a fate she deserved. Four lethal bullets through her heart was not an end she deserved. Leading a dark, lonely life devoid of a Mother's presence was certainly not a past Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh deserved.

Having resolved to wipe out the very existence of the Devgarh kingdom, he could not rest in peace until he got even with his Mother's murderer. And there was no better way to go about doing so than setting his target upon the kingdom's softest spot, its heir- Princess Manyata. His childhood friendship long buried, he swore to make her life a living hell.

That was, until he had set his eyes upon her.

Being in possession of a heart of gold, Princess Manyata Kumari Chauhan was never quite a favourite of her Dad's shrewd mind. Kind, carefree and peace-loving, she always heeded to her help-seekers with a passion. Having spent her teen hood abroad, her childhood best friend, Udayveer who was inexplicably distanced from her, was now a distant memory. She had quietly complied when her father had ordered her to loathe the Jaigarh kingdom, since her very childhood. And she had every intention of keeping it up, for the sake of loyalty to her kingdom.

Will her grudge be an excuse enough to stop herself from falling for his charm?

Will his past be an excuse enough to stop the unnamed feelings threatening to replace his 'so assumed' undeterred resolve?

Will revenge and hatred be excuses enough to dismiss the weird feelings gradually but steadily developing in their hearts ? When passion gets undeniable, will she be ready to accept her feelings, which would be nothing less than a forbidden love?

Sooo, how was it?

Good? 😊

Poor?

Hideous? 😭

Before getting started on an idea that popped out of nowhere, I really wanted to know if its worth a try? And let me warn you, I do not have a record of continuing long works ( I've written and discarded like three stories so far). So, I'd really have to be thrilled to think of continuing this.

If it gets around 35 likes, I'd be convinced that this plot is not a waste of time and would gladly give it a try.

Thank you! :)

Index:


Chapter One: When Volcano Meets Tornado

Chapter Two: Consented Abduction

Chapter Three: Hell On Earth; and It Has Only Just Begun


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good?... You call that GOOD?... You should be ashamed of yourself🤣..

Okay, lol enough of the theatrics... It was EXCELLENT!... The storyline is FABULOUS.. now lets see how you'll develop it... I might be late in reading sometimes/ sometimes very fast, but will definitely read it.

It sounds superb!👍🏼
Edited by mahi0809 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! the characters appear to be very powerful..so i think there is going to be vengence and passion and politics and offcourse forbidden love!i love it already! plz definitely continue!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good? You think it's just good!..it is superb. Very nice concept. Please try to continue it and don't dismiss it like your other stories. I'll wait for reading your story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not Good 😳not Poor 👎🏼not hideous. No other options.😲 Now I'm giving you the correct options ok. Edit these options in your post.😉
Awesome
Superb
Best
Excellent.
I liked the prologue but don't like your options so I chose my all four options for your FF's prologue.😉
Update soon dear.😊
Well done.👍🏼
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME PLOT GRENADE!!!

START IT SOON!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fab da👏 pls update soon and do pm me if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Payal 🤗, feels os good to read something from u again.If I say I loved this, it would be a understatement, splendid work girl 👏 . Please continue soon, I'm dying to read more😛, and thanku so much for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Payal di..u call it
  • bad🥱
  • poor😭
  • hideaous
Seriously di..what was this...!!!!!! I'm not happy wid ur work😕...I'm super duper happy😉😆
What a prologue di..what a prologue...👏👏👏
The options u should give for the start is
  • Superb😉
  • Amazing👍🏼
  • out of the world😳👏
Seriously I want to just keep on writing the comment...lol😆 So this is a hate-love track...ermm...good..I mean excellent😉👏
So plzzz update asap⭐️⭐️ and pm me plzz🤗
Edited by AKlover-16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome
Superb
Excellent
Mindblowing yaar.Cont soon n thanks 4 the pm buddy.

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