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Posted: 12 years ago
When will you be posting double update? eagerly waiting, plz make it soon.
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Chapter Two: Consented Abduction

~Manyata~


"Would make great headlines, wouldn't they?" he asked snatching the papers out of my limp hands.

"What would you take to hand them over to me?" I asked trying to compose my horrified nerves.

A dark glint spread through his eyes, a smirk forming on his lips.

"Stay with me." he said simply. "For five months, without exchanging a word with your family." He added, his voice turning grave towards the end.

"What-You can't be serious."I stated disbelievingly while he held onto his I-mean-business attitude.

"Why would you want that?" I continued, baffled at why someone wouldn't just ask for truckloads of money at a situation like this.

His eyes flashed for a while before turning dangerously cold. Within seconds, I was pressed against the wall, his tall frame towering me.

"Let's just say, for the sake of our enmity." He declared coldly.

"Get your hands off me!" I spat, trying to pry his steel grip off my shoulders. After a futile struggle, I let go, sighing frustrated.

"Look, I can pay you with luxuries more than you've ever dreamt of if you'd just please let me go today." I said calmly, trying to make a point. "Hand me the evidences and I promise the money would be at your doorstep in no time-"

"Whoa whoa get a hold there Princess!" he said cutting me off, looking amused. " I've already got luxuries more than you've ever dreamt of." he informed, his signature smirk back on his lips. "Not your fault though, seeing as you hardly know me!" he added.

"Well, then enlighten me please!" I said mocking interest, already pissed with his smug and airy attitude.

"Princess Manyata" he said, moving slightly back to bow, while I stood with my eyebrows furrowed.

"Meet Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh" he finished, rising back to his full height.

My breath freezed in my lungs as the night dropped yet another explosive on my very much mortal heart.

As senses slowly approached my blank mind, indistinct moments started popping out from my memories; moments of our tiny feet stomping against the lawn as we chased each other, moments when our childish giggles filled the entire palace. Moments when our tiny palms clasped each other under the blanket when Dadisa sung us lullaby. And the moment when his plastic sword left a never-erasing scar on my back.

He snapped his fingers before my eyes bursting the bubble of consuming thoughts.

I glanced up at him, stupefied.

After the parting we'd had, I had all but imagined I would ever meet him in my life. And instead of being given an explanation to Dad's sudden bitterness towards his closest friend and ally, I was packed off and sent to London. I'd been henceforth showered with orders to forget him and hate him every time I'd mentioned him to Dad. Only once I grew of age to be able to comprehend the happenings in my life, had I been handed over the bitter facts. Uncle Giriraj had framed Dad for his wife's murder. And Uday, who'd promised to stand up for me no matter what, had complied with his Dad's lie. And as planned, no one suspected the five year old claiming to be an eye witness. It had taken years for the truth to sink in. But there was no reason for me not to believe them. Dad may not be the most moral person on Earth but surely, human life could not mean so little to him. There was no way Dad would have pressed a trigger for the sake of politics let alone backstabbing his dearest friend.

Since that day, not only had I been taming a growing despise in my heart for Uncle Giriraj's betrayal but I felt an even crushing pain for the distance that had sprawled out between me and Uday.

My eyes implored the depths of his dark ones. He couldn't be Uday. This arrogant, blackmailing, halkat, veda held no resemblance to my memories of the sweet, innocent boy who once used to be my best friend.

"Relax Princess", he said his cool palm reaching for my cheek. I flinched, slapping it away.

"You can give your little mind a rest. You'll get your doubts answered eventually." he continued oblivious to my reactions. "So, shall we?" he smiled, holding out his hand.

"What gave you the idea I'm coming with you?" I spat, drawing my hands behind my back.

I snuck a hand into my purse and rummaged for my phone, trying my best not to attract his attention. I nearly screamed out in triumph when my fingers clasped around the familiar metal frame of my phone. Holding my breath, I punched in Vijaybhai's number.

He just smiled his devilish smile which played weird games with my hormones, making me want to feel the softness of his lips.

Holy Cow! I flushed, screaming internally and aimed an imaginary gun at my ridiculous desires.

I begged for the call to connect fast. Never in my life had I been so edgy. The fact that I was standing with a guy (an impossibly handsome guy, my brain shamelessly interjected) who was claiming to be the last person Dad would want me to stand with, did not help either.

"The idea could not be more obvious!" he said, his sudden voice alerting me.

A startled gasp escaped my lips as a cold hand grasped my wrist and yanked it forward.

My phone went clattering against the floor before its screen turned pitch black, disappearing into the darkness of the club floor. With it, my last hope died down.

"We don't have time for your silly tricks, Princess!" he said, his voice dripping threat.

"A desperate reporter's number is a press away." He said waving his cell phone. "You've got three seconds to decide if the reporter's promotion is dearer to you or your Dad's reputation."

Three.

I closed my eyes. Dadisa, Mom, Vijaybhai were all standing with shocked eyes as the police barged in. Dad's face was drained.

Two.

Dad stood behind the bars, his head hung low as the media buzzed incessantly, questioning his infidelity.

One.

I opened my eyes, determined.

He proceeded to press the button.

"I'll come." My voice was no more than a whisper.

He smiled, seemingly proud at his work.

The cold midnight wind bit at my skin as I stood outside the club beside the most obnoxious man I've ever laid my eyes upon. It had taken him no more than two minutes to maneuver his way out of the maddening crowd. He just seemed to have a way with things. And the fact might be the probable fuel to his smugness. I sneaked a glance at him as he fluently passed orders at his phone. My breathing hitched as I took in his proper features under the streetlight. The dimness of the club did no justice to his looks. Now that he was not glaring at me or threatening me, his face looked angelic, too handsome to be real. His dark hair was long enough to fall just above his eyes. His nose bent in perfect proportion and his face cut in sharp angles, surely gave him the look to die for. And his lips-

"Like what you see, princess?" An all too familiar arrogant voice made me tear my eyes from his lips.

It took all that I had in me not to give in to his accusation and hang my head in embarrassment. Instead, I scoffed and looked him square in the eye.

"You flatter yourself, Prince!" I challenged, my voice turning mocking at the word Prince.

His lips parted to pass a remark but I was too busy thanking my stars for saving me from the fit of embarrassment when a car screeched to halt before us.

It seemed to be a more expensive model of Jainandini's Porsche, something I had been unsuccessfully pestering Dad for years. My longing glance came short at the tiny flag hoisted at the hood of the car. I looked closely only to find it bearing the Royal Jaigarh Family logo. Lord, he really wasn't kidding about his background.

He glided to the car, holding open the door for me. I stood numbly at my spot as the reality of my situation sank in once again. The car I was longingly admiring seconds ago was meant for driving me away from my home. The irritatingly handsome jerk holding the door open for me wanted to trap me far from my family. I would be carried away to nowhere else but my kingdom's enemy. And I had all knowingly consented to the abduction for the sake of Dad - someone who wasn't likely to even notice my disappearance.



Edited by Grenade - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm sorry!
I know that's in no way enough to make up for my delay but i was just helpless..
All these months just passed away in a blur and there are only a few countable days before my 12th exams..something that will either make my career or destroy it. The pressure from those who expect well from me is not helping in any way..and each day I'm feeling more and more hopeless..! I don't know why I'm ranting these things since they aren't even the reason for my absence from IF. All these days brought loads of fun, exams as well as some really disconcerting problems.. There was also the point when nothing seemed to go right.. Thankfully, things got sorted irrespective of the time they took..
Though I'm pretty sure I'm not making sense, I just feel like making a thing clear..
I ain't giving up on this story.
.its no less than a baby for me and there's no way i can R.I.P. if i leave it incomplete.
And I'm not gonna ask for Likes or Comments because I honestly believe that this time, I don't deserve them.
Oh and The Vampire Diaries is also taking an hour out of the little spare time i get..so, blame Damon for messing with my head! 😆
Keep rocking till the next time we meet..and Sorry again!
😔
Edited by Grenade - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very super duper awesome
u write beautifully
waiting too see how manveer fall in love in 5 months
manveer in one house wow super duper cool
please update soon
loved this part
hats off
i loved this whole part
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Payal, did i actually read ur upadte this morning WOW it is so dreamy, Have waited long for ur update 😳😳, And u make a comeback with such a breathtaking update 👏👏, loved every bit of it, and the twist of 5 months was the show-stealer 😉, wont be wrong if i say my heart skipped a beat when I read my hottie's demands ☺️

Analysis:

Part 1: The Astounding deal: OMG the 5 months conditions of staying together was so bewildering. Loved it 👏. I mean he hates her but still he wants her with him 24X 7 😳😳, how unique is that 😛. He definitely has some hidden motives, but in front of Destiny all human motives fall flat 😉. So Payal now you have created a plot where in 5 months Manveer will fall in a never before seen passionate love, trying hard to hold back with all their might because they are supposed to hate each other, but still loosing themselves in front of destiny.😳😳😳 I'm just loving it even more now.

Part 2: Searching a lost friend amidst the fog of past: Again very well articulated Payal👏. His introducing himself with his royal air and pride, her unexpected encounter with her long lost friends, her trying hard to find a trace of her true friend in this cold stoned monster was so well depicted. Plus the coat of flashback that you have added was enough to state their floating family enmity from both their point of view. I mean this is what I like about ur writing ,in just few lines u can tell the readers the past, present and the reasons that define their characters😳👏

Part 3: A friend lost in the maze of enemity, deal accepted: Amazing part Payal 👏, U know the way u write just leaves me flabbergasted. I mean UV's 1,2,3 along with Manyata's dilemma I read it like 3 times already.

Part 4: Fatal attraction: AWWW 😳 the sparks are already flying ☺️, but they wont dare accept for the fact that both are the stubborn royal rivals😆.

And I had all but knowingly consented to the abduction for the sake of Dad - someone who wasn't likely to even notice my disappearance.

this line was just bang-on the spot. I mean M is doing this for the sake of someone who is seriously not worth it.

Payal u have taken this ff in such an amazing and eventful direction, trust me after this update I can very well say the wait was worth it 👍🏼.
Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was the most exceptional pieces of writing I ever came across. It was BRILLIANT!!! I could visualise the entire scene. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Vampy..you really are kind enough to like the update inspite of my lateness..😊
Edited by Grenade - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Waiting...now that's the part I hate! LOL😆
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

That was the most exceptional pieces of writing I ever came across. It was BRILLIANT!!! I could visualise the entire scene. Please continue soon.


That means so much for me..thank you Navina..!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Payal dear update na...Its been so long now can't wait more...updateee🤗



I'm so sorry to disappoint you..😔 i was just caught up in issues..
Anyway, updated!😊

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