manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Yahooo Uday-Manyata & Jagat-Jay ki shadi ho gayi:)
All scenes were superb but seven round part was hilarious i was laughing on antics of Uday-Jagat on their own wedding...Ye dono kabhi nahi sudharenge naughty boy...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Luved the update pari.. Yay the finally got married now just cnt w8 to see wat happenz next plz update soon pari n once again superb writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey pari 🤗, meine apni zindagi mein aaj tak itni nirali shaddi nahi dekhi,🤣🤣, this is just classic, epic👏. Loved it pari, waiting for sare ghrawalo ke reaction😆.

But I'm sad that this ff will end soon 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
shaadi ho to aisi...pari love u dear 4 the wonderful update...👏./...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb Pari...waah kaya baat...super interesting marraige😉👍🏼

waiting to read more

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
love it pari
shadi ho toh aisi!!😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-62

Gr'mujhe bina btaya,ye h tumhare bete.
Maya'uday jagat ye kya h?
Komal'manyata jay ye sb kya h beta?
Br shout'dikhai ni deta aapko.

Uday'wo papag hm
Gr'chup hoja,itne had tk gir jaoge mujhe pta ni tha..
Jagat'papag aap bat to.
Gr ek danda marte h jagat ko'chup ho ja,tum logo ki utni aukat ni h ki tum log mujhse bat kro...

Br'had krdi h tumlogo ne hm kuch bolte ni h to tum logo ne itna bda faisla krliya..
Waah,bs nam k hi papa khte h.
Manyata'ni papa
Br'mt kh mujhe papa.
Tara'pr aap bat.
Br'bs,tum jeisi bhogodi ho weise mere bacho ko bi bna diya..
Jay'glti hmne ki h tara ko kyn kuch kh rhe ho?
Komal'manyata-jay tumlog ne ye bilkul aacha ni kiya..
Bharosa tod diya.
Maya'apni maa pe bi bharosha ni tha uday jagat...

Gr'mujhse koi umeed mt rkhna ki main inhe bhuyo wali izazat dunga.
Br'or na hi tumdono mere daamad bnne layek ho..

Manyata'bs kijiye,shadi ho gai h,aako uday jagat ko daamad manan h to maniye,wrna thode din bad khud maan jaoge..
Jay'aap 2no ki ldai k chaker me hm dur ho rhe the,hmne socha aaplog nakhre kroge to hm khud hi..
Br danda uthata h'bttmeez
Jagat danda pkad leta h'bs papag main jay ka pati hu,malum h ek round me kasam khai thi ki ab tu h to sb h wrna kuch ni.
To ye danda aap apne sahre k lye rkho,wrna tuit jayegi..

Uday'papag aap ko problem kya h manyata ko bhu bnane me?
Gr'jis ghr me hmari izazat ni us ghr ki beti hmare ghr ki bhu ni.
Main chahta hu abi isi waqt ye shadi tod de.
Uday shout'aap apni chaht apne pas rkhikye,kbi puri ki h jo ab krege...
Gr hath uthate h'bttmeez
Or ekdum se manyata uday k saamne aajati h,or gr ka hath ruk jata h.
Manyata'papa
Gr'mt kho mujhe papa.
Akash'manyata uday kbi-2 gr bulata h.
Unanti'akash,mahol garm h jra apna muh bnd rkho..

Uday'or papag aap aisa bi ni kh skte ki hmne aapko kuch btaya ni.
Maya'haww.
Tumne btaya tha tum shadi kr rhe ho.
Uday'ha maa,btaya tha.
Gr'kha btaya tha?bola tha hmare dost ki shadi h.
Unanti'dost ka nam btao?
Gr'uday jagat upps.

Jagat'ha to bola tha na mere dost ka nam uday to uday ye rha.
Uday'or mere dost ka jagat jagat ye rha.
Uday'ab aap hmari trh intelipent ni ho to hmari kya glti..

Vijay'papa aap maaf krdo na,phr khana pina chd doge,manyata phr khana kilane ayegi phr aap maaf krdoge.
Br'is baari main khana khana ni chaduga.
Jagat'pkka.
Br'ha ha pkka.
Uday'thik h wrna bimar aap hote,pity usha aapki beti bnti.chal phr manyata aram se rhiyo..
Akash'ha uncle aapke chaker me ldai ho gai thi.
Or ek bari to thapad bi kha liya tha..

Tara'mujhe samjh ni aa rha aaplog drame kye kr rhe ho,aapko uday jagat hi perfct h or manyata jay apke bacho k lye.
Gr'ni koi kisi k lye perfact ni h.
Uday -jagat'ha to aapki najr me wo bhais simran or wo gendi sakshi pasnd h.
Jake khud hi shadi krlo...

Gr'mere rhte huye agar inko ghr me laya to.
Jagat'to.
Uday'to kya?
Ruko,papa g aapki izazat bhoot krte h pr problem ye h ki main apni zindgi
Ko ni chod skta...
Gr'itni bdi arrangment kha se aaye paise?
Uday'to aapne hmare liye to kma rkhe h,ab apne paise bi aapse puch k udayege..
Jagat'maya,tera pati kanjus h.

Br'aaj k bad kbi mere ghr pe mt aana.
Jagat'aaj k bad to ye hmare ghr pe rhegi na.
Uday'papag manyata jay ki
Br'mujhe papag mt kho,chalo komal..
Wo guse me chale jate h.
Gr'agar isne ghr me kadam rkh liya to
Uday'to aap ghr ni aaoge,to ek kam kro aaj bahar sojana..

Gr'sb bttmeez h chalo maya maa.
Maya'maa kha h?
Gr'maa.
Sb preshan.
Uday akash ka phone leta h,or cal krta h.
Ds'hello.
Uday'oye ds kha h?
Ds'ghr pr,or tere se naraj .
Cal cut.
Jagat'ghr pe H,chalo ghr pe chalte.
Gr'mere ghr pe ye bhu bneke ni jayegi.
Maya'ha ye to bilkul shi kha..
Uday'maa
Maya'bhu bnke ni beti bnke jayegi.
Gr'maya g,agar aap inhe apni bhu.
Uday'mere 2no papag jealous hone ki jrurt ni h..

Br'kyn?hm kyn jealous hnge?
Jagat'aap dono ki shadi itne bde motel me ni hui na.
Or apki pasnd ki ldkiyo se shadi ni ki na hmne isliye.
Br'jyada bkwas ki to taange tod dunga.
Hm tumhare maa-baap h kya tumhare liye glt faisla lenge?
Manyata'bhul gye jeet ko aapne hi pasnd kiya tha,saare namune ko to aapne hi pasnd kiya tha.
Jay'or jise pasnd krna chahiye tha use lad k beith gye ho..
Uday'or aap mere liye simran,doly or pta ni kitni bhaiso ko pasnd kiya,agar unse shadi ho gai hoti to wo to bhais rhti hm kankal(scalton)bnke ghum rhe hote...
Jagat'sakshi bi.
Akash'jagat sakshi to mere liye pasnd krne gye the...
Jagat'aacha ha,aacha hua wrna uski zindgi khraab ho jati.
Manyata'hr baari koi game khelke rishta tudwana pdta tha.
Jagat'bhabhi to champ bi bn gai thi jodibreaker me.
Jay'khushi jruri h hr rishte.
Uday'apne aap pe utna trust ni jitna manyata pe h.
Jagat'apni pasnd ko to apna bnana hmein aata h.
Manyata'main apne uday ko ni chod skti,faisla aap kijiye aapko kya krna h?

Sb chup..
Maya'bs bhoot ho gya,uday jagat bhuyo ko leke gadi me beitho.
Gr'o g
Maya'bs kijiye aapko bi inki pasnd pasnd h bs ego bich me aa rha h..
Manyata aapko hi pasnd thi na uday k lye to ab kya hua?
Komal'aapdono apni ldai me apne bacho ki khushi ni dekh paa rhe h...
Mujhe uday jagat hi chahiye jeise vijay weise ye dono..

Br gr dono chup.
Uday'jb ldai khtm ho jaye tb aashirwad de dena.
Jagat'jeisi maya weisi komal.
Jagat'aacha h maa aisi h.
Uday'wrna papag to jan se mar dete..
Manyata'thanku maa..
Jay smile'hm wait krege aapka..
Aajana..

Tara'bye shy main to ab akeli hojaugi.
Manyata'vijay bhai h na apni rat bnale aaj.
Akash exictd tha.
Jagat'bda machal rha h.
Akash'meri bi suhaagrat h.
Uday'unanti ko maa k pas bhej dunga sone k lye.
Akash'yar ni plz.
Uday'chal thik h kamine.
Chal.
Wo sb br ko chodke gle milte h.
Or jate h...

Gr or br ko chodke sb chale jate h..
Wo dono ekdusre ki sakal dekhte h...

Ds manyata jay ki aane k lye unka welcum krti h...

Manyata jay uday jagat sb aate h.
Ds open d door.
'tum dono dur rho mujhse.
Uday'arey dadi hm btane wale the phr socha.
Jagat'phr socha ek chick kis k 7th btaye.
Ds'mska lgana bnd,Aarti krne do...

Unanti unki aarti krti h.
Ds'giriraj kha h?
Uday'kbi kbi ds tere pe shaq hota h.
Ds'q?
Jagat'wo giri tera hi beta h na ya khin mil gya tha.
Ds'chup shaitan,uska dimag thanda ho ga to apne aap aa jayega...

Wo aarti krti h sb andar aate h.
Ds'manyata apni dadi pe bharosa ni tha.
Manyata hugd dadi'ni dadi aap sb pe bharosa tha,pr dar lg rha tha agar uday ni milta to.
Ds'haww.
Ro mt maan jayega tera baap bi chinta mt kr.
Weise itni jaldi shadi kya bat h?
Uday jagat ds ko side le ke jate h
'plan ni tha bs tu prdadi bnne wali h isliye.
Ds vry hapy'kya?
Jagat'mike lata hu tb chila.
Uday'ha.
Ds khushi k maare lightly faint
Uday'dadi sambhal
Jagat'kya hua?
Uday'is umr me dusra giriraj
No way.
Ds'shaitano chup.
Uday thanku beta.
Jagat'thanku bhai..
Uday hugd both nd manyata ko kis pas krta h.,

Precap:sbko pta chalta h manyata s pregnant nd br gr patchup..

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Oh god...sabhi log bacche ki tarah lad rahe hai...aur Akash uska to kuch he aur he chalta rehta hai hehe...Uday-Jagat ka same naam rakhne ka plan successful ho gaya jisse giri ki bolti band ho gayi...

Chalo accha hai ke aakhir Manyata Jay ko bahu ke roop me entry mil gayi...
Uday Jagat Ds ka scene bhi bahut accha tha...Precap is nice...

Thanks
Edited by Pooja_0910 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesum update pari how come u took so. Long in updating but we can see the result was awesum lolz keep writing cnt w8 4 the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 pari...continue soon😊

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