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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-59

Jay'ab kya kroge?
Uday'phle delhi chalo sb,phr wha apne-2 papag se bat krege...
Manyata'agar ni maane to
Uday'to maine kha h na meri shadi kisi k ha ya na pe depand ni h..
Jagat'arey tu chinta mt papag ha bol denge menu pta c.
Tara'tenu keise pta tuoda to dar lgta c apne papag nu.
Uday'oye chamiya,apne pati nu sambhal hm vijay ki trh darpok na h..
Ha ni to..

Akash'weise ldte tym to sbme jan aagai c.
Unanti'tumhare ander to wo bi ni h.

Jay'weise ab main maasi bn jaugi.
Jagat'ni tum chachi bn jaogi...
Jay'kyn?
Jagat'main is ka chacha bnuga,or wo khubkusmat ldki jo mujhse shadi kregi wo iski chachi bnegi...

All laugh.-

Manyata woried.
Jagat'bhabhi to chahe kuch bi ho bhai tere se hi shadi krega.
Uday manyata ko apni trf lightly khichta h..
Nd use apne arm pe pick krta h...
'main aata hu chat pe se.
Jay'arey kuch krna mt she s preganant.
Uday'ha tu rhne de,ja jagat k pas...
Mujhe bi bde papa bnna h..
Jay blush.
Jagat'kya h?bs blush hi krti rhiyo...

Uday manyata ko leke jata h tbi komal manya...
'haayee raaba ki hua manyata ko?
Uday jagat akash nd unanti,jay,vijay,tara,nd stand lyk stone..
Uday manyata ko godi me leke manyata komal ko dekh rha h.
Komal'manyata kya hua beta?
Manyata'maa wo..
Komal lookd uday
Uday bhut(ghost)ki trh dekh rha h.

Komal lightly slap uday'mujhe apne daamad ko window k thru ni darwaaze k thru aate huye dekhna h..
Ha ni to.

All surprize.
Uday'wo main aun..
Jagat'aunty hm wo

Komal slap jagat'aunty apni mumy ko bol mujhe maa Bula skte ho...

Uday manyata ko godi me se utarta h.
Or komal ko hug krleta h'thanku maa.
Manyata jagat se dhire se'tu gle kb lgega,jay hi meri devrani bnegi,wrna shadi mt kriyo.
Jagat suddn komal'maa sry,aunty to jay ko bolna tha,pr kuch bi kho meri bhabhi,patni or sasumaa,khubsurat h.
Uday'bs wo papag thode weise h.
Komal'hitler type,pr unhe charlie tumhein hi bnana h. Manyata'ha maa ek hiler ko sambhal rhe h,2re ko bi sambhal lenge .kyn?
Uday'g jrur..

Komal hold uday jagat hand'meri betiyo ko khush to rkhoge na...

Uday'aapko kya lgta h?
Komal'mujhe
Jagat'ek min.
Main bi puch lu'aapko kya lgta h?
Komal'agar mujhe bura lgta to main yha tumhare 7th khadi ni hoti..
Uday'maa,aap apne pati se jyada bharosa mujhpe rkh skte ho..
Komal'mujhe bharosa h..

Main iske papa ko mana lungi.,
Jagat'jaldi...

Uday'maa wo manyata
Manyata'maa,main aati hu.
Wo uday ka hath pkdti h leke jati h chat pe'kya kr rha h?
Maa ko mt bta unhe bura lgega.
Uday'chupana kya shi h?
Manyata'ni pr.
Kya kre?chal btadete h.

Wo jane lgti h'uday uska hath pkd leta h.
'ni unhe such me bura lgega,
Agar hm shadi krke btaye to.

Manyata'shadi lekin papa or sb ke bina.

Uday'bina kha,delhi me aragnment hochuki h,bs permision chahiye.
Manyata'taiyari mtlb
Uday'mtlb ye ki mujhe dar lg rha tha ki tere se shadi krne k lye koi ha ni krega,to hm sbko bta k ni jb shadi krege tb sb ko bulalenge.
Surprize bi mil jayega,shockd hone wale shock bi ho jayenge..

Manyata'tu to 1kadam aage chal rha h.
Jagat jay cum'mera bi dimag lga h.
Uday'hmara plan h. Jay'di..
Manyata'ni ni ye glt h.
Chupke-2 shadi..

Uday'thik h jagat delhi jake mandap htwa diyo..
Or jb tk papag ko mnayege tb tk wait kr..
Jagat'or ha bhabhi tb tk pregancey ki bat chupa k rkhna..

Manyata chup.
Jay'kitna tym lgega mnane.
Uday'1sal to lg jayega,uski bi gurantee ni h.
Or baby to 9mnth bad hojayega...

Jagat'tb tk mnate h..hm

Jagat uday jane lgte h.

Manyata'ruk,chal shadi ki taiyari kr,1sal tk tum mnaoge 9 mahine me baby aajayega,or uske bad 3mhine me keise chupaugi use...
Ha nito
Jay'ha thik h taiyari kro..

Uday kised hr 4head
'chal phr milte h delhi me..

Manyata'sun
She kised uday lip
'dulhan bnu main teri,agr koi problem ho gai to.
Uday'kuch bi ho dilwale dulhaniya le hi jayenge..
Ha ni to...

In nxt mrng...
Sb delhi jane ki taiyari krte h...

Br'manyata beta sb thik h na.
Jay'g papag
Komal'pckng hogai saari.
Vijay'ha maa.
Tara'manyata wo babag ki murthi le liyo.
Manyata sudden runing washrum side.
Komal'manyata sb thik to h.
Jay'ha maa..
Br'ye vomt kyn?
Manyata'candy(kasam)deke zbrdasti khilaoge,to yhi hal hoga.
Br'candy kya?
Tara'papag candy means kasam..

Uday k sb delhi k lye nikal chuke h.
Jagat'driver jaldi delhi lechalo.
Ds'hua kya?
Uday'kuch ni,bs delhi me shadi krani h.
Akash'shadi krani h mujhe to lga..
Uday'akash jiju chup ho jao,jyada mt bolo.
Jagat'unanti smjha le hme na smjhana pde.
Unanti'chup rho na.
Gr'kiski shadi krani h.?

Uday'h mera ek jigri yar(jagat).
Jagat'mera yaar(uday)to meri jan h uski shadi krauga.
Maya'hmein invite ni kiya..
Uday'kiya h na,addres
Btadenge na delhi chalke...

Vijay'delhi jaldi phuchna h.
Tara'ha
Br'kyn?
Manyata'wo papag ek dost ki mariage h,janah.
Komal'kaun h?
Jay'aapko ko bi bulaya h,delhi to phuche...phle...

Uday k cal aati h'hello aaditya bol yar.
Aditya'uday bhai hotel taiyar h bilkul dulhan ki trh.
Uday'pkka thanku bhai
Bs aaj ka din or dede sbko invite krdunga aaj..

Aaditya'bhai prepartion puri ho gai h pr ye to bta shadi kiski h?
Jagat uday'btayenge ni dikhaynge or tubi kal bhabhi g ko leke phuch jaiyo...

Kal bdi famour weding h..
Chal bye.
Aaj delhi me bhoot kam h..
Bye
Cal cut...

Gr'nam to btao apne dost ka...
Uday'papag aapko pta h wo dost hmare jigri kyn h?
Ds'kyn?
Jagat'qki mere jigri dost ka nam uday h.
Uday'or mere dost ka nam jagat.

Gr'wah kamal h.
Phr to main jrur jaunga..
Continues
Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
RESERVED.
🤣 🤣 EDITED.😆
Wow Supercool update yaar.😆 Hillarious.🤣
UV-Jagat bonding was amazing. Loved Jagat's character.😆
When Komal saw Manyata in UV's arms, for one second I was feeling MAR GAYE. But Komal is such a sweet mother.😊
I loved UV-Komal-Jagat scene awesome yaar.😛
UV-M-Jagat scene was also nice, I think the whole update was Great.😉
OMG😲 UV-M n Jagat-J's marriage preprations wow now I can't wait for the next update Pari. Can u Pls update next chapter right now?😳
Great update.👍🏼
Thanks for the beautiful updates.😊
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗 🤗


Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update but I'm kinda confused I mean uday n jagat said each otherz name then how come GR dint say anything.. Anyways awesum update plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome mind blowing pari well done You are one epic peice and wow this was so hilarious and romantic and aww my manveer is so cute really loved there personal display of affection it was so awesome pari you did an amazing job and uday our cute bandar aka gunda kitna zada pyaar kata hai apni mendhaki se lol 😆 And wow manveer marriage on its way how sweet blush blush ☺️☺️☺️ And i love jagat man he is so cute love the way he teases Jay and uday ne bhi uuski help kardi

Jay'weise ab main maasi bn jaugi.
Jagat'ni tum chachi bn jaogi...
Jay'kyn?
Jagat'main is ka chacha bnuga,or wo khubkusmat ldki jo mujhse shadi kregi wo iski chachi bnegi..
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This part was so hilarious i was literally laughing so hard that my parents thought mujhe koi spirit guss gayi hai 😆😆

Uday manyata ko apni trf lightly khichta h..
Nd use apne arm pe pick krta h...
'main aata hu chat pe se.
Jay'arey kuch krna mt she s preganant.
Uday'ha tu rhne de,ja jagat k pas...
Mujhe bi bde papa bnna h..
Jay blush.
Jagat'kya h?bs blush hi krti rhiyo...


And this was the best part lol this time i was actually laughing so so so hard that my stomach was literally paining and mere parents ko ab pakka yakin ho gaya tha that i am possessed they even called my John my uncle who is a priest 🤣🤣 lol i hate you for that pari.😆

And when komal entered and saw manveer in that condition i was like hogaya dhamaka ab aayege maze as you know how much i love drama but sadly komal aunty bohot aachi nikali and no drama lol i was kinda sad but komal was too nice and sweet

Komal slap jagat'aunty apni mumy ko bol mujhe maa Bula skte ho...


LOL this like was so funny maza aagay pari you have the most hilarious SS on IF till now 👏👏
when i read till aunty aapni mummy ko bulane i thought aage komal bolegi "mein to abhi jawaan hu " but sab ulta nikala and aww uday - jagat - komal bonding was so cute wah wah shaadi se pehele hi mother in law se paatne laagi dulho ki wow 😆

Pari love you soo soo much you know agar koi tumhara SS read kare to definitely tension gayab hogaye uss person kii you are so amazing I LOVE YOU



Edited by AndreaBaid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sumi darlng abi tk ni smjhi uday jagat hmesha apne papa ko patti pdhate rhte h.
Or wo beleive krleta h,..

@andy watng u r cmnt darlng.

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment edited on Page-45.😊
Thank you.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Komal is so sweet the way she behave and slaps Uday Jagat haha it was amazing aakhir maa kiski hai!!!!!
Jagat is hilarious hamesha Jay se shikayat karta rehta hai...
U-M,J-Jay marriage planning has already done hmm good job guys...
Aww eagerly waiting for Gunda-Gundi shadi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet..

@sumi darlng abi tk ni smjhi uday jagat hmesha apne papa ko patti pdhate rhte h.
Or wo beleive krleta h,..

@andy watng u r cmnt darlng.

Pari



updated dear love you pari jaan
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid



updated dear love you pari jaan

. I do understand tht uday n jagat alwayz fool their father n he belives them but still I mean like cudnt he get it..anyways plzzz update soon pari m really dying to knw wat hppenz next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pari Where r u from last 2 days? Missing your updates yaar.

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