manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51

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pwincess_sumi

@pwincess_sumi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

U finished it wow pari absolutly perfect this is wat u call a happy ending but m really gonna miss this ss it was one of my favz after soulmate which was also urz thnk u pari hope u ryt many more

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mahilove

@mahilove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

loved the ending the whole part was superb and plz start a new ff soon u r wrriting rocks

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pari

@rythm...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Thank u so much
Summi nd mahi..
I m also ms dis ff..

Nd mahi new theme mind me aaya to i m definately start.
Thank u so much..

Pari

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Superb ending Pari...It was just so beautifully written👏

and the end scene describing each one's marriage was too cute...⭐️

You rock for giving regular updates and this funny cum cute cum beautiful story...🤗

and congratz for successfully completing you another ss🥳

will look forward to read your more amazing work

Edited by adorable_rana - 12 years ago

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

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Superb, superb update Champ. Claps, claps claps for you.👏 👏 👏

All scenes, all dialogues, everything was so perfect. Jus loved this SS. Brilliantly written.👏

n First time I liked Akash in any SS/FF.😆

Loved Jagat n Uday's bonding.😉

Manveer, J,Jagat,Tara, Vijay, Unnati n Akash jus love these guys.😊

Great-great SS Pari.😛

HAPPY ENDING.🤗 Now I want a new one Champ.😉

In any conndition I want a new SS.😉

Great work Champ.🤗

LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago

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Pooja

@Pooja_0910

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Wow what a ending...super happy ending...chalo in shaitano ki toli me aur do nanhe munhe shaitan shamil ho gaye...

Finally Akash ka balance khatam ho he gaya haha...

This SS was funny naughty yet romantic...
Thanks for beautiful SS...

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

No way pari you ended this SS god knows how will i live without this SS as it was one of my favorite SS's and now i won't get an update well i can at least have a new SS i know you already have our mermaid waala SS but still and vasise your SS are SO CALLED short stories as they are really long 😆but are always brilliant and this was like the most hilarious SS I've ever read and this part was like the perfect ending and manyata's dialogues were awesome so eager for the baby to come to this world na lol and the baby scene was too cute and the way you described all the emotions when baby came to this world were something i'll call fabulous and i will surely miss this and will defo miss aakash and his balance 🤣. Pari thanx for such a beautiful SS it was really a pleasure readin your stuff which was really drop dead beautiful i must say. And your regular updates was one thing i really liked bout you as a writer and ofcourse no rotten eggs tomatoes and high heels for you 🤣 as i get alot for not updating 🤣 you see its almost a month and i've still not updated my FF. Anyways you are brilliant and you did an awesome job with this SS and i guess you are the only writer which has written almost 2-3 SS and that too till 55-78 parts and for that hats off to you love you pari jaan love you soo much
and plzz plzz plzz i want new SS baby i want a new SS plzz ab mujh jeise masoom ka dil mat todna tum jaan

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pari

@rythm...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

@andy
awww...
Baby sry.. :-(
I know main bhoot shrt ss likhti hu,becoz yar ek limit tk stry ko end krna mujhe pasnd h,main jyada strech ni kr skti...

Nd yes darlng new theme agar mere mind me aaya to definatly main start krugi...
Thanx 4 beautiful cmnt.
Love jaanu.
Muuhh.

Pari

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Pari, this is one of the most light hearted and entertaining ff I have ever read. I'm gonna miss this loads 😒, haven't got time to read ur other ff,'no limitation' will star reading that now, but please give us replacement for this ff, pari.

Thank you for giving such a wonderful ff.🤗