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Manyata: udays she whispered

Uday: don't ever leave me princess he said barely whispering... manyata was taken back and turned to look at him to see that his eyes were closed and he rested his forehead on her shoulders... manyata lifted his face

Manyata: uday please look at me... Uday opened his eyes and looked at her... what happened?... y do you think I will leave you

Uday: just said it like that princess he said smiling manyata cupped his face

Manyata: then don't say that again because I will never leave u and moved forward and kissed uday on the lips both had their eyes closed... uday nibbled on her bottom lips before letting go of it and then captured her lips again... uday was sitting on manyata bed with his head against the headboard while manyata was sitting in front of him leaning on his chest while uday had his hands wrapped around her waist.

Later on uday and manyata had to go down since ds had called them and also saw vasu sitting there with komal, mainka, unnati, vijay along with DS... manvata went and sat down next to vasu and gave her a side hug

Vasu: manyata better how r u feeling now

Manyata: better maa... She said with a smile

vasu: ma sa u know mahraj birthday will be coming up in two days so we have actually organised a party for his birthday on that evening

vijay: if j was here she would have been so excited and to get her ready on time we would have to tell her to start now so that she doesn't make any of us late for the party I TELL U... everyone laughed

vasu: vijay beta I would like u to be in charge of organising mahraj's birthday party

vijay: me vasu I mean not that I mind but im sure u will find someone much better who can organise a party

unnati: ok come on vijay baana u r really great at doing this in fact u did a great work when u organised a party for me, manyata and dada when we came back from abroad and not to forget u were the one who was in charge for organising our engagement she said looking at manveer and for us u r much better interior designer for organising parties and the way u decorate things is out of the world... im sure u would have great idea for dad's birthday... mainka had tears in her eyes as everyone was complementing her son on another side she was feeling sad for hiding something from her son... komal saw mainka and placed her hand on top of mainka as if assuring her with a smile

vijay: gosh I don't know y im feeling so nervous but in all this my partner in crime j bhai has helped me a lot so the credit does go to her...all of a sudden sia walked in quickly and everyone was surprised to see her and also worried seeing how fast she walking

ds: sia beta slowly u should not forget that u have a little life inside u

sia: ds y didn't anyone tell me about manyata in fact u told daksh to not inform me she said looking at everyone and then manyata

komal: beta ur expecting we didn't want u to worry

sia: ma ur acting like in my 8th month of pregnancy when its only been 2 month and manyata is my sister for god sake I do have the rights to know

manyata: jiji calm down she said standing near sia... sia looked at her angrily

sia: manu how many times does everyone have to tell u to have a guard around u... we r royals manyata and we need guards around us... everyone was silently laughing seeing manyata getting told of... vijay mumbled to unnati

vijay: this is what happens when m bhai doesn't take us seriously... I TELL U

manyata: jiji im fine now relax she said trying to calm sia down

daksh: salli ji when ur sister doesn't listen to me when I tell her to relax what makes u think she will listen to u... daksh said coming in the hall... both sia and daksh glared at each other

komal: manyata, sia stop it now and come and sit... daksh beta come and sit... daksh took blessing of all the elders and hugged uday and vijay and sat next to them... manyata sat next to sia

Daksh: maa (komal) where is jai

Komal: beta she has gone out with jagat

Uday: aunty komal with ur permission can I take manyata out...manyata looked at uday as she didn't know they were going out

Vijay: *ahem ahem* he said looking at manveer and then at unnati

Manyata: any problem vijay bhai she said warningly

Vijay: of course not m bhai

Komal: sure uday beta u can

Vasu: by the way where r u going.

Uday: we r going out mom he said smirking

Vasu: how can I forget u won't reveal anything soon.

Uday: shall we go princess... manyata nodded and both were walking towards the main door when vijay said

Vijay: ENJOY GUYS!... manveer said buy to everyone and left... Uday opened the door for manyata and they got in the car and two guard were behind in another car however they can see reporters outside and the guards had to move them out of the way so the car could move out of the gates.

In udays car

Manyata: uday where r we going

Uday: somewhere he said concentrating on the road

Manyata: where though

Uday: princess u will know soon

Manyata: uday cant u just say where we r going

Uday: I told u that u will know soon now have patient

Manyata: so annoying she said to herself with a small cute pout

Uday: did u say anything he said looking at her and then looking ahead of him

Manyata: no how can I say something to the great yuvraj udayveer singh she said rolling her eyes while uday smirked.

Uday: that is so true he said smirking... Manyata was looking out of the window while uday was glancing at her every second knowing she is very curious to know where they r going... Finally the car came to a halt... manyata looked around and then at uday

Manyata: what happened uday y did u stop the car... but she didn't get any answer as uday came out of the car and went to her side to open the door and forwarded his hand... manyata placed her hand on top of his and also got out of the car... she was looking around and all she could see was big houses... when all of a sudden she saw darkness covering her eyes as uday blindfolded her

Uday: princess I have a surprise for u

Manyata: what is it she asked?

Uday: come he said and started walking along with her... the security guard was standing outside a gate and he saw manveer along with body guards... uday motioned the security guard to open the gate

Manyata: uday how long

Uday: not long... he turned towards the body guard and told them to wait outside the gate with the security guard and went in with manyata.

Manveer finally stopped walking and manyata felt udays hand leaving her waist and could feel him untying the blindfold... manyata opened her eyes but closed it again due to the brightness and after few sec she opened her eyes again but slowly this time and she was able to see clearly... uday was enjoying seeing her expression changing from one to another... on the other hand manyata didn't know how to react she was surprised seeing a penthouse in front of her, then happy and lastly confused and with that confusion she turned to look at uday.. but all uday did was gesture her to go inside... manyata opened the door of the penthouse and both manveer took their first step inside together... manyata went ahead and saw the living area and was feeling the soft touch of the cushion which were on the couch... she then walked towards the kitchen taking all the details... followed by the gym area, swimming pool, movie room she then started walking up the stairs and started looking at each of the bedroom along with the attached bathroom and finally one bedroom was left and she opened it taking in the feature and was walking towards the balcony area and opened the balcony door... she looked around and was liking the outside view... she was confused as to y uday was showing this penthouse to her and was this the surprise... she walked back into the bedroom and was about to leave the room when something caught her attention on the wall... uday had walked in few minutes and saw manyata staring at wall and that's when he realised she was staring at their picture which they took during their engagement time... Uday walked towards her and placed his hands on her shoulder. Manyata turned towards him

Manyata: is this ur place? Uday smile and shook his head

Uday : not its our place... manyata creased her eyebrows together and uday continued... I bought this penthouse for us manyata

Manyata: for us...uday this place is so beautiful but I never knew u would give me this type of surprise I seriously don't know what to say to u.

Uday: then don't say anything because ur expression says it all

Manyata: uday u always give me surprises and I haven't given u anything

Uday: well u can give me something right now he said placing his hands around her waist and slightly pulling her closer...

Manyata: I don't think so she said putting her right hand on his chest trying to push him away but wasn't able to.

Uday: come on princess im waiting he said with a naughty smile.

Manyata: this is all u could think of fine but only one

Uday: impressed princess ur becoming smart by knowing very well what I want without me having to say it

Manyata: of course I would know uday she said winking and slowly moved her face closer... she could see how happy uday was... her lips slowly parted and she slowly placed them on his cheeks and kissed him and moved her face backwards

Uday: what was that? He said raising his eyebrows

Manyata: u wanted one kiss and I gave it to u she said cheekily

Uday: princess that wasn't even a kiss... a real kiss is meant to be here he said pointing to his lips .

Manyata: well that's ur problem u wanted a kiss and I gave it to u and u agreed that I will only give u one... so its not my fault u should have told me where u wanted me to kiss u she said winking.

Uday: if that is the case then I will get my kiss at any cost and that also by today

Manyata: dream on uday

Uday: just wait and watch princess

Manyata: if u say so... and both were smirking... uday removed his hand of her waist and held her right hand in his

Uday: come I want to show u something...he said taking her out of the room... They went downstairs and went to a room which was in the corner and manyata was surprised that how she missed going to that side of the penthouse... uday slowly opened the door and turned on the lights... manyata let go of udays hand and looked around the room... she was surprised to see every family members picture hanged around the wall some were taken without anyone knowing

Manyata: uday this room is so beautiful with everyone photo. Some of these moments r very special... she said finally turning towards him... she went up to him and hugged him

Manyata: thank u so much this is the best surprise ever and I mean it

Uday: im glad u liked it...he said and placed a kiss on her head... manyata looked up at uday

Manyata: by the way I could understand u buying the penthouse but how did u get the idea of keeping photos of each family member in this room

Uday: come on princess I am yuvraj udayveer singh and I can do anything

Manyata: that's right u can do anything but it's a little hard to believe this she said looking around the room... so come on spill the beans

Uday: well I actually took chotis help in this... in fact she gave me the idea

Manyata: so unnati knew about this... I swear u brother and sister r very good at hiding surprises.

Uday: after all she is my sister

Manyata: there u go again she said rolling her eyes while uday smirked.

Uday: princess its 12 o'clock lets eat and u also need to have ur medicines

Manyata: yh and for the medicines I will have to go back to the palace

Uday: no u don't because I have them with me... manyata looked at him surprisingly

Manyata: how? Is it like everyone has spare tablets for me... uday laughed

Uday: no princess remember when choti left after getting u ready (previous part) at that time she came to give me ur tablets

Manyata: ohhh

Uday: now shall we go... manyata nodded and both left the penthouse... they walked towards the car while one of the guards ran and quickly opened the door for them... manyata thought they were going to devgarh palace but was surprised when uday took the route to go to the jaighar mansion however she decided not to ask him as she was enjoying spending time with him along with his surprises. Soon they reached to jaighar mansion and went in, vasu and unnati were still not back.

uday: harish can u tell the chief to get something ready for lunch and send it to my room

harish: ji yuvraj ji

uday: princess come he said taking her hand in his and headed towards his room... manyata made herself comfortable on the bed while uday went to his wardrobe to get something out and the came and sat next to manyata

manyata: what is in that she said pointing at the bag that was on udays lap... she took the item out of the bag to see it was in a box and placed it on her lap and opened the box ... but all manyata did was widen her eyes

uday: u like it

manyata: its beautiful uday she said taking the saree out of the box and looking at it closely

uday: princess I want u to wear this in dad's birthday party (I will post this pic in the birthday part)

manyata: a saree but uday don't forget vijya bhai is in charge of organizing a birthday party so it could be he also makes dress code with a theme

uday: don't worry about that princess plus im sure vijay banna will do something that dad likes the most

manyata: u never know because its vijay bhai and both laughed uday placed the saree in the box and then put the box in the bag... after a while harish knocked on udays door and bought the food in... manveer went and sat on the couch while harish organised their plates and left the room.

Uday: princess start eating he said digging into his pasta and so did manyata

Manyata: god this is so much better than the oatmeal I had in the morning... uday smiled... by the way uday can I ask u something

Uday: u can ask me anything princess... manyata placed her fork down

Manyata: how comes u r giving me so many surprises today first the penthouse, then the room with all our pictures and now this saree

Uday: y don't u like getting surprises

Manyata: no I do like it but getting surprises out of the blue is just kind of a different feeling

Uday: I felt like giving u surprises princess because that makes u happy and I want to give u surprises not only now but also after our marriage

Manyata: uday she said leaning forward and placed her hand on top of his... Ur surprises r really sweet and they do make me happy but its also because u r there with me even if u don't give me surprises and just stay by me I will be more than happy like that she said softly... uday looked at manyata.

Uday: I know princess and thank u for giving this relationship a chance... manyata smiled at him warmly

Manyata in her mind: mine and uday relationship is beyond more than friends but we have never expressed it... I wonder how he feels about me?... how I feel for him? she said looking at uday... uday looked at manyata and could see she was thinking about something

Uday: princess, princess what happened

Manyata: nothing she said smiling at him but fighting her inner thoughts... After a while maveer finished eating and uday gave manyata her tablets and she swallowed them with water.

Manyata: uday I have come here twice and all I have seen is urs and unnati room and now this is the third time I have come and I actually want to see the whole palace

Uday: sure princess come let me show u around

On the other hand j and jagat were sitting in a restaurant laughing about something... however they were seated away from the crowd and they were comfortable with that

J: jagat im sorry I had to cancel the plan of meeting up before. Jagat placed his hand on top of j's which was on the table and smiled

Jagata: j this is the 10th time u have said sorry... and I have told u that its okay so please stop saying sorry I know how much u care about manyata and its natural so don't worry

J: by the way u better take me to shopping

Jagat: anything else madam... maybe I can give u something else he said holding her hand naughtily

J:shut up jagat

Jagat: by the way j I haven't said it yet but u look very hot today he said smirking

J: I know after all I made all this effort to meet someone

Jagat: that someone is really lucky he said and winked at her

Back to the jaighar palace uday showed the whole palace to manyata and uday took her to the terrace which manyata loved... she went towards the flowers and was feeling them on her hand when she felt uday behind her with his hands wrapped around her waist and was nuzzling her cheeks which made manyata laugh

Manyata: uday stop that's ticklish... but uday wasn't in any mood and kept doing the same thing so manyata pinched his hands which was on her waist and finally uday looked up

Uday: princess...he was about to say something when his phone rang and he had to let go of manyata. And after a while he ended it

Manyata: what happened who was asking about us

Uday: it was mom she is downstairs and was asking where we r

Manyata: come lets go

Uday: hmmm. And both headed down

Precap: giriraj birthday party with manveer moments and also see how manyata confesses to uday

Thank u those who pressed the like button for the previous part and also thanks to those who commented also I have replied back to each comment and trust me I really enjoyed reading the again and again because it shows ur love for this ff

Thank you to those who are still liking and commenting for this ff im really touched... I hope u like this part really looking forward to read ur comments and also don't forget to press the like button

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ooohhh nice chapter:):) And such a long one:):) Thoroughly enjoyed it.:)
Update soon please:):)

Edit: First to like and comment!! Yayy!!:):)
Edited by PrincessAshVik - 10 years ago
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Awww - that was so lovely 😳!!!
Wished it would go on & on & on.
Manveer scenes were too cute, so dreamy !
I loved how Manyata was wondering about her feelings and Uday's feelings. At that point I felt Manyata may blurt out her affection for Uday. Can't wait to read her confession in the next part though.
Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter Sonali,
do continue soon!
Thanxx 4 the PM 😃
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WOW!! Brilliant update...loved it dear...

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Posted: 10 years ago
it was awesome ..i love manveer ❤️ they are so lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally i take time out to comment 😆
This was such a lovely update sonu. It was realllyyy cute.
I loved it sooo much. Such a sweet update it was.
Brilliant. I loved the first scene of manveer sooo much.
I enjoyed it alot although it was from the previous part.
It was amazing.
Then coming to the next scene of vasu and the rest. I liked that part also.
Everyone is adorable and nice.
Im sure the bday party will be amazing and dhamakedar.
It was sweet how everyone was praising vijay bhai. He deserves it.
Hes the best after MY uday 😃
There is something fishy about Vijay's dad.
I noticed it in chaptr 45 also that when manyata and mainka were having a convo, manyata asked about vijay's dad.
Mainka's reply was quite dull also.
I wonder what shes hiding from vijay and what the actual scene is.
Loved how vijay teased manveer when they were leaving together.
Awwweee LOVED the manveer scene.
My favourite oart of the update was this manveer scene.
It was sooo sweet.
This scene just showed the depth of uday's love.
He actually loves her alot.
His Gestures are always sooo cute.
Loved it to the core. Manyata's self talk was really nice.
Cant wait for the next part.
Eagerly waiting for it. Please update soon.
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awww - that was so lovely 😳!!! hehe im happy u liked it

Wished it would go on & on & on. even i wished if it did go on all of us lost in maveer wonderland 😳😆
Manveer scenes were too cute, so dreamy ! thanks plus they r manveer so of course their scenes will be cute and dreamy 😉
I loved how Manyata was wondering about her feelings and Uday's feelings shall i be on honest i just added that bit when i was about to update. At that point I felt Manyata may blurt out her affection for Uday even i thought so but then i had to stop manyata from doing anything like that😆. Can't wait to read her confession in the next part though. haha u cant wait to read and i cant wait to write hopefully it will be good "fingers crossed"
Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter Sonali, thank u navi glad u liked it.
do continue soon! will do
Thanxx 4 the PM 😃 ur welcome

thank u for the wonderful comment navi

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it was awesome thanks glad u liked it ..i love manveer haha we all love our manveer ❤️ they are so lovely they sure lovely thats y we love them

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Originally posted by: roshni101

Finally i take time out to comment 😆 haha thank god u did
This was such a lovely update sonu. It was realllyyy cute. thanks roshu happy u liked it 😃
I loved it sooo much. Such a sweet update it was. hehe thanks again
Brilliant. I loved the first scene of manveer sooo much. glad u did 😳
I enjoyed it alot although it was from the previous part. lol i liked that scene too
It was amazing. thanks
Then coming to the next scene of vasu and the rest. I liked that part also. i thought i kind of rushed that part but happy thats its k since u liked it
Everyone is adorable and nice. hehe they sure are
Im sure the bday party will be amazing and dhamakedar. haha hope so nervous on that bit hope it comes out well
It was sweet how everyone was praising vijay bhai. He deserves it. yep he sure does everyone loves his work
Hes the best after MY uday 😃 haha u mean to say OUR uday 😉😆
There is something fishy about Vijay's dad. thank god u mentioned it 😆
I noticed it in chaptr 45 also that when manyata and mainka were having a convo, manyata asked about vijay's dad. happy u remebered that bit also
Mainka's reply was quite dull also. hmm yep it was lets see y she replied like that 😉😆
I wonder what shes hiding from vijay and what the actual scene is. hehe i guess we all have to wait for that
Loved how vijay teased manveer when they were leaving together. hehe its vijay after all his second job is to tease manveer😉😛
Awwweee LOVED the manveer scene. glad u did
My favourite oart of the update was this manveer scene. awww im happy it was ur favorite part
It was sooo sweet.
This scene just showed the depth of uday's love. hehe it did actually
He actually loves her alot. hmm he does
His Gestures are always sooo cute. yes they r cute but they also r sexy as he always finds a way to romance with manyata anywhere 😆😉
Loved it to the core. Manyata's self talk was really nice. that self talking wa a little bit hard for me to write but finally managed to do it 😆😃
Cant wait for the next part. hehe started writing the next part
Eagerly waiting for it. Please update soon. will do
Thanks for the pm 😊 ur welcome

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Posted: 10 years ago
hello Dear.. Plz Update the Story plzz..

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