Ok, so I started reading from the first part of the story because as you know, it's been a long time since I read Forever & Always...
Part 1 and 2 were cute, loved how Manyata, Jai and Vijay get along and their sibling love.
Part 3 was lovely, loved Uday's entry and how he used Manyata's dupatta to wipe his face.
Part 4 was cute, especially the part where Uday went shopping (because he never did his own shopping) and that he helped Manyata find a dress.
Part 5... awe, Uday was concerned about whether Manyata passed or not... it's cute that she was dancing out of joy and how she did not acknowledge Uday's presence.