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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!!! beautiful updates...loved it dear...😃
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plzz read it.. its a new story.. right now only prologue is given...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

First again😃
haha u have been commenting first a lot these days
Coming to the chapters, they were really nice. Loved reading them and they were long! So even better😃😳
thank u im glad u liked the double update
Great job👏
thank u
Update soon please😳
Updating in a bit
Would love to see what happens next and whether Manyata remembers her confession or not😉
hehe that u will get to know in the next part

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Hey hope your alright😊
hey sanah im good thanks hope u r ok?
Double treat Wow soo happy
hehe yep... well im glad u r happy
Awesome update...
thank u
Loved it to the core..
thanks glad u liked it
Love the way vijay teases manyata and how the brother-sisters bond very well..
hehe im happy im able to write those scenes well and glad u liked them
Vijay surely knows how to organise parties amazingly along with j
yep he surely does
J teasing manyata about the sari and she being all shy was funny😃
hehe well j wouldnt leave the chance to tease manyata
Manveer parts were awesome as always loved them loads!!!
thank u glad u loved manveer parts
He gifted her a sari and also personally helped her get dressed WOW the whole thing was prefectly described...
hehe i just came up with that idea when i was writing that part but happy u loved it... describing does become hard for me
Shit someone spiked manyata's drink but thank god vijay and uday reached on time..
yep and thanks to vijay prank nobody saw manyata condition
I wonder why some one wants to harm manyata all the time..
that will be revealed soon hopefully fingers crossed
OMG manyata confessed she loves him wowww yayyy... Uday is left speechless😆
hehe yep she finally confessed
Can't wait for the next update..
Do continue asap
updating in a bit
Thanks for the pm😊
ur welcome

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Sonali, thank u so much for updating today ... I had an awful day, and this really cheered me up.
ur welcome... awww i hope ur feeling better and im happy my update was able to cheer u up
I read chapter 52 and this comment is only for that part (I have a feeling something bad is going to occur in 53, I'm probably wrong, but I don't want to risk ruining my mood ... will read and comment for the next part tomorrow)
hehe when i read this comment i was like damn i cant wait for the second comment of urs when will this day end lol so that i can see navi comment

Fabulous update! Needless to say - I enjoyed Uday's parts the most; I love how naughty u made him😎.
thank u glad u loved it... hehe i guess everyone loves udays part more... well we have to be naughty since our pirnce charming is naughty himself
Can imagine that smirk on his face and that entire scene in the bedroom was very hot!☺️ (Manyata is 1 lucky girl😉- I tell u 😆)
hayeee anyone can dye for the smirk sometimes when im writing udays line and im describing his emotion all i seem to be writing is Smrik, smirk... like i have so many smirks for all of udays scenes lol... manyata is defo we would do anything to be in her place... hehe
Awww - the Indian Flag cake looked so yummy, I suddenly wish it was my birthday today 😳.
Jai and Brijraj are so sweet here ... wish that they showed half that warmth to Manyata in the show .
hehe it was really hard to find the cake navi god knows how i found it lol...hehe i always get greedy for cakes...i know right even i wished to see the father and daughter bond in the show wish if they did show something like that
Anyways ...
I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, very well written 👍🏼!!!
thank u im glad u liked it
See u tomorrow 🤗 .
well i will be seeing ur second post now 🤗and thank u so much for the wondrful comment

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: roshni101

OMG OMG OMG. What a brilliant update.
thank u roshu baby
I have no words to describe how fabulous the update was.
hehe u have no words but here u have written so much and im touched
I cant tell you how much i love you for the double updates 😳
thank u im glad u liked it
Seriously it was simply amazing. 👏
thank u
LOVED IT TO THE CORE.
phir se thank u
This update of yours worths alot of appreciation.
thanks now r u going to me me cry lol
It was my most fav chapter. Haha actually every chapter is my fav 😆
lol haan u seem to love all the chaps
I say that everytime though. 😃
haha u do but i love hearing it from u again and again
The scene of vasu and manyata was very sweet. They make a lovely duo. Great mother and daughter in law.
hehe yep though feels like its gone be tough writing those scene in the future
Coming to the car scene, uday is sooo naughty and romantic.
hehe that our uday
Theres always one thing on his mind 😆
lol haha that because manyata is always with him
I wish he was mine 😃
u mean ours 😉
Jagat and manyata alsonshare a good bond which is really nice.
yep they have been friends since manyata and unnati were in abroad so trio share a good relation
Vijay is sooo funny 😆
hehe is defo is
Always teasing manveer. But look at uday, all he ever does is SMIRK. 😆
haha inni its like i cant seem to find anything else to express udays emotion other than smirk
Poor manyata is the one who gets embarrassed.
haha yep and uday gets away
Really enjoyed this scene esp the part where vijay was asking uday where he took my manyata and uday was not giving straight answers 😆
hehe had uday ever given a straight answer
Coming to jay and manyata, loved this scene.
The scene was simply adorable and cute.
The love they have for eachother is so pure (just like us 😆 )
yep they surely do have a great scene... yep their love is pure haha u r exactly right just like ours now where r u
Liked how jay teased manyata.
hehe glad u u liked it
Ayeeinnn manyata was looking hot in shorts and a top.
haha she defo was
Poor uday, he was probably getting naughty thoughts and it was very funny when he winked at her.
haha its uday after all seeing manyata in shorts and top actually tempted him
Hayeee manveer's romance scene was the bestbin chap 52.
It was sooo romantic
phew glad that scene came our well
I was blushing over here. Loved it soo much. I read the specific part so many times.
hehe chalo i made u read some scene so many time haha at least u blushed
And then even the other day when uday dressed manyata up.
That scene was also so passionate, instense and the best.
hehe that scene just came like that as i was writing it was not even meant to be added
Uday is soo besharam. And romantic, and naughty and and and sexy 😃 😆
in short udays has all the good qualtieis
The party scene was good also. Everyone is really nice and loving.
tbh i didnt like the way i wrote that part
Now coming back to my most fav part was the room 101 scene 😳
101 room came from roshini name u know my lovely sister 😉
I loved a drunk manyata. That whole scene was marvelous.
glad u liked that bit
I never wanted it to end. From the point on which manyata sat on udays lap, to her kisses and lastly confession, it was awesome.
haha u didnt want it to end and i couldnt think of what to write next
She left uday shocked. One of the best scene.
yep she actually did
I wonder who this person is and what he wants. Hes after manyata.
Idiot. I hope hes caught soon.
well as we all know nandu is working for his boss now lets see who this boss turns out to be 😉
Now looking at the precap i cant wait for the next part. Uday isnt goingto leave her sooo easily 😃
I hope he confesses soon
hehe lets see it depends the way i write sometimes i would end up writing something else
Keep it up. Well done.
thank u
And thanks for the pm. You just update but im saying 'update soon' again 😆
ur welcome... hehe updating in a bit but haan make sure ur update is also ready

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi there - I'm back! (as promised😉). I don't have words for the update ... seriously! It was THAT GOOD! 👏

hehe im happy navi like u promised u actually commented the next day thank u so much... thank u im glad u liked the update... seriously i feel hourned that write like u comment and like the update it means a lot

I can't tell u how many times I smiled during reading, I even blushed once, I laughed at Manyata (her drunken antics), and finally I said "AWWW" out loud, when Manyata said "I love u" .

hehe glad i made u feel that...haha i was smiling while writing the update and my family memebers thought i have lost it since they thought im smiling without any reason...im glad u like manyata drunk state really was nervous on how that would come out espiecally the confession but glad u loved it
Brilliant chapter, thoroughly enjoyable, loved every single moment!

thank u im happy u loved it a lot
Uday coming to dress Manyata was so unexpected, but sweet!

hehe trust me navi this was not even in my mind and when i started writing i couldnt stop and ended up writing this scene
When Vijay spoke about playing a prank on Manyata ... I was certain it'll go bad, but it became a blessing in disguise; as the villains never got what they wanted.
I'm guessing poor Nandu, is gonna be blasted in the next part (even though it was not his fault😆).
yep it surely does thank god vijay bhai did that prank...hehe nandu wont be spared but that will be coming soon not in the next part but lets see if this mystery boss gets caught or not
Anything I left out🤔... oh ya, the sarees were gorgeous! Superb choices 👍🏼.
nope u didnt miss anything u spoke about everything... thanks glad u liked the saree
I want to read more ...
do update as soon as u can 😳.
will update in a bit
Thanks 4 the pm 🤗 .
ur welcome 😃🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!!! beautiful updates...loved it dear...😃
thank u glad u liked it

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The party had ended and uday was in his room lost in his thoughts when he received unnati call as he was thinking about who must have spiked manyata's drink and also about mayata confession

Uday: haan choti what did u find out

Unnati: dada there was alcohol mixed in manyata drink and I got her blood test results there is no sign of drug I just informed vijay banna.

Uday: k choti thanks a lot... and with that he cut the call after 30 mins unnati walked in to the palace and she saw that her parents were still awake.

Unnati: mom, dad y r u all still awake

Vasu: just like that we were just going to sleep now. Giriraj and vasu went to their room while unnati walked to udays room knowing he would be awake and knocked on his door.

Uday: come in... unnati came in and saw uday was sitting on the couch looking into space... she went and sat down next to him and placed her hand on his shoulder and that's when uday looked at her

Unnati: dada whats wrong... what r u thinking about?... uday got up and went towards the window and placed one of his hands against the closed window while his other hand was in his pocket

Uday: choti im thinking who spiked manyata drink... there was tight security nobody can get in like that.

Unnati: u r right dada but y would someone want to spike manyata drink.

Uday: seems like this person is keeping an eye on us

Unnati: dada I guess we should go and see manyata tomorrow morning and ask her who gave the drink to her... uday nodded he went and sat on the couch again and picked up his mobile from the coffee table to call the hotel manager.

Uday: suyash I need a list of names of all the workers that were in party by 11am tomorrow morning

Suyash: yes sir I will make sure that is done by tomorrow.

Uday: good and make sure all r present tomorrow exactly at 11am I don't want anyone to be late understand

Suyash: yes sir and with that uday cut the call. Unnati placed her hand on udays arm

Unnati: dw dada everything will be alright

Uday: I hope so chotti because and I can't wait to hold that person neck he said firmly.

Unnati: but I don't understand one thing this person called manyata when all the elders went to devgarh and jaighar and said that she will receive some bad news (part 23) and she did when dadi saab told manyata that she has to leave her dream of working in sanjeevani hospital even though we both got out degree and were qualified as a doctor (part 28) and then manyata getting shot at the mall (part 48) and now someone spiked manyata drink for god knows what reason... I just don't understand y this person is after manyata. Uday placed his hands on her cheeks

Uday: chotti whoever this person is wont get away this time...im sure tomorrow we will get some information somehow. Now come on go and sleep

Unnati: u also sleep dont stay awake till so late ok... uday gave a smile to unnati and before she left udays room both said good night to each other.

At devgarh mansion vijay had placed a sleeping manyata in her room and closed the door heading down to see everyone walking in to the mansion when ds saw him she enquired about manyata and he only told them how manyata was feeling tired and also her arm was aching so he bought her back to the mansion and luckily everyone believed it and went to their own room.

The next morning it was slightly sunny and the birds were chirping like always... manyata who was sleeping peacefully on her back turned the other way as the sunshine was falling on her face which disturbed her. But then she woke up slowly as she was putting pressure on to her left arm and sat up since her head was hurting a lot as if someone is hitting her on the head with a hammer... she placed her hands on her forehead trying to massage it to reduce some pain when she realised that she was still in her saree and her jewellery from last night

Confusion came on to her face as she tried to remember how she got into her room she looked at the time on the wall and saw it was only 6am... she closed her eyes trying to remember what exactly happened last night but it was too hard for her to concentrate because of the annoying headache... she got up and walked towards the dressing table and took of all of her jewellery and lastly her bangles... she was trying to think slowly while taking of her bangles and remembered that she was with sia having her juice that the waiter gave her then vijay came over telling her that uday wanted to meet her in room 101 and went there by asking one of the waitress for the direction and when she reached there she found the room empty. So she decided to wait for him and remembered how she felt a bit weird when she walked to the balcony... when she was thinking about all this she had gone to the washroom to change into something comfortable and sat on the bed her head resting against the headboard and eyes closed. When she remembered a little more by getting few black and white images but when she started to see those vision clearly her eyes flew opened with a shocking look as she remembered everything from how uday called her on the phone and the way she spoke to him in a childish way, vijay and uday coming in the room and how vijay went back out again as he told her he will get her another juice and then lastly how she told uday the way she felt when he touched and kissed her and not only that she even showed it to him by touching and kissing him back which made her all blush and then those three words that she said to him

Flashback

Manyata: I want to tell u another secret

Uday: what secret

Manyata: that I LOVE U but shhh don't tell anyone

Flashback ends

Manyata covered her face with her hands now knowing that all she felt for uday was love all this time and how she didn't realise she membered how unnati tried to tell her once that she could see the love she has for uday (part 41 & 49) but at that time she didn't think it was love... manyata was nervous now she didn't know how uday would react.. yes it was true he was going to marry her and their relationship was beyond friendship... they always had intimate moment that still made her blush but it could be that he was only attracted to her... manyata placed her head on the pillow and laid on her back looking at the ceiling... right now the only thing she was thinking about how will she face uday before she could think of what to do sleep took over her once again and the thoughts fading away along with the pounding headache.

At 8:00am nandu was standing near the stairs waiting for his boss to come down so that they can see the news and when his boss arrived both walked towards the living room and nandu turned on the tv while that person sat down and soon the news started to come on which only showed giriraj birthday party and how it was a blast... the boss was looking at the news keenly but when it didn't show any news about manyata behaviour nandu got a bit nervous as his boss was looking at him with a killer look... he gulped his salvia.

Boss: Nandu y isn't there any news of manyata inappropriate behaviour. There should have been some news about her drunken state

Nandu: bo...boss... how would I know

Boss: well u were the one who gave her the drink right

Nandu: I did boss and u even saw that through the camera u set on my button that she took few sips

Boss: then y isn't there any news or is that her family tried to cover up.

Nandu: boss there nothing written about yuvrani manyata on the newspaper... the boss looked at nandu and then at the tv

Boss: devgarh and jaighar family were lucky this time and with that there was big crack on the tv as nandu boss threw a vase at the tv.

Back to the devgarh mansion

Around 8:30 manyata woke up again but this time it was vijay who was calling her name again and again and shaking her to wake up... she opened her eyes and sat up when she slowly felt the headache coming back though this time it was paining a little lesser.

Manyata: good morning vijay bhai she said rubbing her eyes before looking at him

Vijay: morning m bhai now come on drink this... Manyata looked at vijay and then at the glass he forwarded to her

Manyata: what is this?

Vijay: nimbu sherbat it will make u feel a lot better and I know ur head must be hurting

Manyata: how do u know I have a headache?

Vijay: m bhai for now don't ask any question just drink this before anyone comes and also take this tablet he said giving her one aspirin tablet manyata did as he told her and she drank it slowly once she finished she placed the glass on the bedside table

Manyata: y did u tell me to drink it before anyone comes and how did I get to my room last night she said confusingly as she remembered after her confession to uday darkness had surrounded her and she didn't remember anything after... Before vijay could answer komal walked in along with Mainka...vijay got up and allowed komal to sit down while he stood next to Mainka.

Komal: beta how r u feeling now vijay told us that ur arm was aching and also u felt tired that is y u came back to mansion early... manyata looked at vijay and he gestured her to say yes.

Manyata: haan maa but now im feeling much better.

Komal: beta if u want u can rest and no need to come downstairs we will send u ur food upstairs plus u must be Hungary right now

Mainka: bhabi sa is right manyata its best if u rest if ur not feeling well.

Manyata: no bua sa im feeling much better u guys don't worry and ma I am hungry but let me just quickly freshen up and I will be down for breakfast

Vijay: m bhai the elders had their breakfast at 8 its 8:40 now plus ns (nani saab) told us not to wake u up however me and j bhai decided we will eat with u so u don't feel left out

Manyata: ohhh... but I will eat after freshening up... komal nodded and with that left the room along with Mainka. Manyata looked at vijay and found him sitting next to her again.

Vijay: m bhai the thing is last night I was just joking when I told u that uday banna is waiting for u in a room in fact I completely forgot about the prank when uday banna came to me and told how u sounded when he called you so we came up looking for u and with that he told her how they found her and what condition she was in and also how they gave her drink to unnati to get it tested which gave the results that her drink was spiked as it contained strong alcohol. Manyata was shocked with the new information that her drink was spiked

Manyata: drink got spiked... vijay bhai now I remember y I was speaking in that way.

Vijay: m bhai this is only between u, me, uday banna and unnati k. I will tell j bhai after k... manyata nodded and vijay told her to freshen up and come down so she can have her breakfast

Manyata went down around 9:30am and saw vijay bhai and jai sitting at the dining table annoying each other and she went and sat down beside j while vijay was sitting opposite them... seema ji served manyata some toast and some orange juice

J: so jiji how r u feeling now

Manyata: much better j. three of them were having their breakfast peacefully.

J: jiji vijay bhai told me what exactly happened to u last night I swear whoever spiked ur drink gets the worst punishment ever she said angrily

Manyata: calm down j... in fact see im perfectly fine nothing has happened...after few mins j spoke again

J: by the way I have an idea

Vijay: what idea

J: well y don't we go for a vacation to the farmhouse for a week. Only us youngster without any disturbance

Vijay: sounds good im up for it but what about the others

J: well we will see what days they r available. I will call jagat and sia jiji today.

Manyata: jai its best if sia jiji stay with her family as we all know she is expecting and it will be better if she has an elder person with her to look after her

Vijay: I agree with m bhai plus its not like sia jiji cant come she can but we will be having fun there and she will probably have to rest the whole day so its best if she stays at her in laws

J: k as u all say.

Manyata: I will call unnati and ask her

Vijay: m bhai don't call unnati because here she comes with uday banna... manyata stiffened and she turned around along with j to see that uday and unnati were talking to ds... but briefly uday looked towards the dining table and saw how manyata looked away from him when their eyes met before he looked back at ds... Manyata quickly excused herself on the pretext of getting her phone from her room and before vijay and j could stop her she had gone.

Once ds had finished talking to them they saw j and vijay heading to them and all went and sat down on the couch. And vijay told them that now j also knows about last night incident

Unnati: but where is manyata she was with u guys when we came and all of a sudden she disappeared.

j: god knows all of a sudden she was saying she needs to get her phone from her room but there is still no sign of her

vijay: looks like its takes m bhai 30 mins to get to her room I TELL U

uday: i will go and check

vijay: sure uday banna u can check and haan don't worry no one will come to disturb u guys.

Uday smirked and left from there and headed to manyata room and when he entered he saw her standing near the balcony her hands on the railing with her hair flying due to slight wind... uday walked towards her but manyata still didn't notice as she was lost in her own thought.

Uday: morning princess he said nuzzling her hair... manyata gasped when she felt uday behind her and his hand covered on top of hers which were griping the railing tightly. He slowly moved his hands away and turned her around to see her breathing unsteadily... manyata tried to calm herself down and leaned her back against the balcony so there was some space between them giving uday a small smile

Manyata: morning uday. Uday smiled and leaned towards her blocking her between him and the railing

Uday: trying to avoid me princess he said teasingly

Manyata: no y would I try to avoid u

Uday: well it seems like that since u didn't wait for me downstairs when me and chotti came over

Manyata: woh... uday the thing is I came to get my phone.

Uday: and it took u this long to get ur phone. Manyata moved one of his hands away from the railing and walked back into her room followed by uday

Manyata: uday I came to get my phone but at that time my friend called me so I was busy talking to her.

Uday: well princess I came here to talk to u about something as well

Manyata: what? She said walking to the small bookshelf in her room

Uday: about last night. Manyata stopped midway and turned around to look at uday

Manyata: what about last night? She said nervously.

Uday: u don't remember? he asked looking at her curiously

Manyata: nope... all I remember is been a little tipsy that's about it... anyways uday lets just forget about this and go down otherwise others might come up to look for us she said trying to avoid the question. Manyata started walking towards the door when uday stops her and blocks her between the wall and him.

Uday: tell me what u said last night princess he said nuzzling her cheeks

Manyata: I don't know what ur talking about uday she said trying to speak normally.

Uday: r u sure? He said looking at her while manyata looked away

Manyata: yes.

Uday: y does it seem like ur lying princess... manyata closed her eyes for a brief second.

Manyata: I am not lying uday. With that she was trying to get away from him but he didn't budge at all.

Uday: I know u r lying princess. He said challenging her while saying this his hands were caressing manyata waist

Manyata: uday I was not in sense that tim...manyata stopped midway realising that she was about to admit she remembered every single detail and looked at uday.

Uday: so u do remember he said raising an eyebrow

Manyata: uday

Uday: say it princess I want to hear those words again

Manyata: no. she said stubbornly. Uday smirked

Uday: princess I will make u say it soon.

Manyata: lets see and don't forget uday im very stubborn

Uday: yh and im more stubborn than u.

Manyata: fine then we will see who wins... but for now lets go

Uday: no so easily princess first let me taste my favourite fruits as im eager to know what u have applied today he said looking at her lips and then back at her eyes... manyata cheeks became red

Manyata: uday... someone will come

Uday: nobody will come princess he said and leaned forward and captured her lips...

manyata hands automatically went up uday shoulder caressing the fabric in that that area and then put her arms around his neck while uday pulled her closer by her waist... suddenly manyata gasped as she felt udays hand slid under her top caressing her bare waist making her shiver slightly he moved his lips towards her neck playing small kissed and could feel manyata shivering in his arm... he then moved lips to her jawline and captured her lips again. After what seemed ages both slowly broke the kiss as they were out of breath and trying to calm themselves down.

Uday: seems like u love strawberry a lot he said licking his lips making manayata go all red by that action. He was about to capture her lips again when all of a sudden vijay, unnati and j knocked on the door and then came in.

Vijay: uday banna I came up with this awesome idea where all us youngster go to the farm house for a week to enjoy what do u say. J looked at vijay

J: excuse me vijay bhai this was my idea not urs.

Vijay: but because of me u got this idea.

J: that is not true so just be quite... uday what dou think about this as unnati said she could take a week of from the hospital after two days

Unnati: haan dada please say yes.

Uday: yeh that's cool I will finish the work at the hotel.

Manyata: but have u guys called jagat and rithvik yet?

Unnati: well I called rithvik and he said he could make it and also jagat said he can.

Vijay: well I guess this was easy everyone is free at the right time.

Manyata: but have u asked ds

Vijay: don't worry m bhai I will ask ns tonight.

Uday: vijay banna does anyone else know about last night

Vijay: nope just only us... uday turned towards manyata.

Uday: princess last night who served u the juice

Manyata: it was some waiter when I was standing with sia jiji he came up with the juice and offered it to me.

J: didn't he give any juice to sia jiji.

Manyata: no he didn't plus he only had one glass of juice in that tray.

Uday: do u remember what he looks like.

Manyata: no

Vijay: m bhai try and think maybe u might remember... manyata tried to think but couldn't member anything.

Manyata: no vijay bhai I actually didn't pay that much attention and I only looked at him briefly when he gave the drink at that time.

Uday: so its confirmed that this person spiked manyata drink and made sure to give it to her only.

J: now what

Uday: I will be going to the hotel j and I have told my manager to give me a list of names of the workers that were at the hotel yesterday and also make sure they r present there today.

J: but what if they lie.

Uday: nobody will get away j.

Vijay: uday banna I will come with u. even I want to know who this person is uday nodded.

Uday: its already 10:30 I think we should leave now.

Manyata: all the best... I just hope this time we find the person

Uday: we will princess let's go vijay banna and with that both uday and vijay left. While manyata j and unnati decided to enjoy the day and hope for the best as they knew there no point worrying about this.

Around 10:50 uday and vijay entered the hotel and went straight into uday cabin and exactly around 11am suyash knocked on udays cabin door coming in with the list of names of the staff members and gave it to uday. Vijay went and stood next to uday looking at paper

Uday: where are the workers?

Suyash: they r outside sir.

Uday: call them in he ordered. Suyash opened the door and told all the waiters and waitress to come in and they all stood in a line with their head bowed down.

Vijay: uday banna they all seem to be here so how r u going to find out.

Uday: when I call out ur names I want u to stand in that corner... and one by one he started to call out the names and once that was done he spoke again but this time even more sternly... I want to know who served yuvrani manyata drink last night. But all of them said they didn't

Vijay: look whoever did just be honest because if we find out that u were lying then trust me none of u will spared

Uday: and I will personally make sure u don't get a job anywhere. But all of them gave the same answer.

Vijay: uday they all r saying no what If it was someone else.

Uday: it definitely was a waiter and there is only one way to find.

Vijay: what?

Uday: cctv footage... He then turned towards the manager... Suyash I want the footage of last night party NOW.

Suyash: yes sir he said nervously and quickly went to the camera room to get the footage of last night party uday then looked at the workers

Uday: u all may go now but if I find out one of u were lying then the consequences will be very bad. And with that all the staff left his cabin. After 5 mins suyash came back with the footage and uday told to him play it... suyash was really nervous as uday was keep on telling him to forward and rewind... when the footage was playing it finally came on the bit where manyata was talking to sia when they saw a waiter approaching them...they saw the waiter giving the juice to manyata and she taking it and having a few sips.

Vijay: did u just notice that waiter looking back at m bhai it means he was waiting for her to have a sip and left from the ... they continued to watch the footage and saw how vijay came to manyata after few minutes and then saw manyata go away after... uday told suyash to stop playing the video.

Uday: suyash I told u yesterday that I want all the staff members to be present today then how comes this one didn't turn up and also his name is not on the list he said angrily... suyash looked at uday

Suyash: sir I don't know where this waiter came from in fact I remember all the staff member who work in this hotel and believe me sir I have never seen him work over here this is the first time I saw him... and in last night party there were only 10 staff members working as waiter and waitress

Vijay: uday banna he went into the kitchen after he gave manyata the drink maybe someone might have seen him there.

Uday suyash call the chief that was present in the kitchen last night... suyash nodded and quickly bought the chief... uday showed the chief the small part where the waiter (nandu) went into the kitchen

Chief: ji yuivraj sa he came in yesterday and went through the back door I tried to call him and speak to him but he didn't even stop. So I left it thinking his is probably on his break or his shift finished.

Uday: u may go now...chief nodded while suyash was still in the cabin

Vijay: uday we need to tell commissioner uncle to find this person ASAP. I will call him and tell him that we will be sending him this footage. Suyash do one thing just delete the other portion of the video and keep the footage of the waiter giving manyata the drink... Suyash nodded and took the cd to tell one of the assistance to do as vijay told him and till then vijay called the commissioner and gave him the information

Commissioner: don't worry rajkumar vijayendra as soon as we get that person we will let u know.

Vijay: thank u commissioner uncle but please don't tell any of our family member about this and whenever u find this person please call me or yuvraj udayveer singh... the commissioner agreed and ended the call.

Precap: all youngsters going for a vacation at the farmhouse... Some manveer moments and nandu getting caught.

Ok guys here is part 54... I hope u like this part don't know how it came out but tried my best... Please don't forget to press the like button and do leave ur comments.

Thanks to those who pressed the like button and also commented for the previous part really appreciate it. i have replied to all the comments for the previous updates

also do read my little devil sister roshu (roshini101) ff called Destined to be if you haven't... she is a fab write. Do it give it a try and once u have don't forget to post ur comments and like the part...link is below for the ff so do give it a try.

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Edited by preya_radev - 10 years ago
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Hey Sonali, Firstly - congrats to u ... I don't know how u manage to write such long, and interesting updates. I think I write half of what u do and then i'm super-tired🥱. (and then I take a 2 month break 🤣) The chapter was wonderful! An absolute pleasure to read👏.
Vijay covering up for Manyata was sooo sweet, he's such an adorable brother. I think all the youngsters rallying together, being so united ... is lovely. It gives such a warm feeling 😳 and I just wanted to read more and more of it.
Nandu's boss is quite stupid, he should've smashed the vase on Nandu's head instead of the poor TV 😆. But no worries, Nandu's time is coming soon, and I simply can't wait for him to be caught.
Poor Manyata thinks she could get away from Uday ... doesn't she know she stands no chance with him. Pretending not to remember anything and then giving it up on her own was too cute! Now I want her to confess whole-heartedly, in a sober state. Hope it happens soon 😉.
Simply loved the update Sonali ❤️, as always - very well written 👍🏼 , do continue soon, thanks for the PM 🤗 .
Edited by ...navina... - 10 years ago

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