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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks to those people who liked part 30

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and thanks to those who commented.

@vampire12345678: thanks saira. im happy that you thought manyata made a good choice.. ur welcome for the gift... hehe even i loved the sponge bath and was blushing😳. will update soon maybe today and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@AndreaBaid: thanks Andrea im glad u liked the part😊

@adorable_rana: thanks rubaa im glad u liked the update. yep manveer getting close and manyata slowly accepting her relationship. hehe i hope i reach to ur expectation for the precap will update soon 😊

@Vasishtha: haha yes sonam i can never forget u but i was just confused if i should call u that since u change ur user name... i know the cv just ruined everything. lol haha sonam u know im waiting for someone to update their ff still 😉 so plz jaldi se update ur ff really missing it. ok now back to the comment thank u im glad u liked this part hayeee uv will always be a sweet heart lol hehe even i liked the sponge bath scene and i wish if something like that was shown in the show/ yep manyata did take a correct decision. yep manveer going to do shopping but manyata hates party so wonder how she will survive lol. hmm lol i wrote the precap but i dont know f it will reach to ur expectations thanks once again and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@roshni101: thanks rosh. hehe even i loved the sponge bath scene. yep finally manyata has accepted that uday is more than a friend to her. haha i just hope that i write well for manveer scene and the party haha rosh u r really badmash😆 im gone update the next part probably today. lol well if i update the next part today that wont be a accident right... i wont let u haunt me that easily lol 😉😊

@swetsurati: thanks sweta im glad u loved the sponge bath scene... yep manyata chose her riyasat over her dream. hehe there is still time for the phone wala to be revealed😉. will update soon and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@milhan: thanks milhan will update soon and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@adventure_gurl: thanks sonali im glad u liked the update and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@snowdream: thanks snowy glad u liked the update will update soon 😊

@vgkantu: thanks dear im glad u liked every scene will update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

thanks to those people who liked part 30

The following 16 member(s) liked the above post:

vgkantu, arna753, roopali15, Manyata5, andy.a, pmpm1, piya77, swetsurati, Chamakchallo30, lilybabes, roshni101, adorable_rana, vampire12345678, snowdream, Vasishtha, adventure_gurl,

and thanks to those who commented.

@vampire12345678: thanks saira. im happy that you thought manyata made a good choice.. ur welcome for the gift... hehe even i loved the sponge bath and was blushing😳. will update soon maybe today and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@AndreaBaid: thanks Andrea im glad u liked the part😊

@adorable_rana: thanks rubaa im glad u liked the update. yep manveer getting close and manyata slowly accepting her relationship. hehe i hope i reach to ur expectation for the precap will update soon 😊

@Vasishtha: haha yes sonam i can never forget u but i was just confused if i should call u that since u change ur user name... i know the cv just ruined everything. lol haha sonam u know im waiting for someone to update their ff still 😉 so plz jaldi se update ur ff really missing it. ok now back to the comment thank u im glad u liked this part hayeee uv will always be a sweet heart lol hehe even i liked the sponge bath scene and i wish if something like that was shown in the show/ yep manyata did take a correct decision. yep manveer going to do shopping but manyata hates party so wonder how she will survive lol. hmm lol i wrote the precap but i dont know f it will reach to ur expectations thanks once again and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@roshni101: thanks rosh. hehe even i loved the sponge bath scene. yep finally manyata has accepted that uday is more than a friend to her. haha i just hope that i write well for manveer scene and the party haha rosh u r really badmash😆 im gone update the next part probably today. lol well if i update the next part today that wont be a accident right... i wont let u haunt me that easily lol 😉😊

@swetsurati: thanks sweta im glad u loved the sponge bath scene... yep manyata chose her riyasat over her dream. hehe there is still time for the phone wala to be revealed😉. will update soon and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@milhan: thanks milhan will update soon and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@adventure_gurl: thanks sonali im glad u liked the update and ur welcome for the pm 😊

@snowdream: thanks snowy glad u liked the update will update soon 😊

@vgkantu: thanks dear im glad u liked every scene will update soon 😊

Thanks for the reply Preya.🤗 Actually it's not ur fault everybody was confused when me changed my username.😆 don't worry Preya u r one of the best writers of dek forum. Koi shak.😉 So many FFs on Manveer but I can't read all FFs but Me read ur FF from the first update n I'm so so amazed with ur story n writing great yaar👍🏼 n yes I know u'll rock in the next part too.😊
MY FF😆 Bhooli bisri FF on Manveer.😆 You always update ur FF on time n me I'm so lazy I hate typing.😆 You're metro train n me Rajasthan roadways bus.🤣 ALways too late.😆 K, I'll try to update soon warna humari shadi Majnu se karvane wale hain sab.😆 UPDATE SOON .🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
the update was very gud and the precap was awesome...
i needed a favour pls.. can anybody tell me how to start an ff... i will start writting it tomorrow... pls... do read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the reply Preya.🤗 Actually it's not ur fault everybody was confused when me changed my username.😆 don't worry Preya u r one of the best writers of dek forum. Koi shak.😉 So many FFs on Manveer but I can't read all FFs but Me read ur FF from the first update n I'm so so amazed with ur story n writing great yaar👍🏼 n yes I know u'll rock in the next part too.😊
MY FF😆 Bhooli bisri FF on Manveer.😆 You always update ur FF on time n me I'm so lazy I hate typing.😆 You're metro train n me Rajasthan roadways bus.🤣 ALways too late.😆 K, I'll try to update soon warna humari shadi Majnu se karvane wale hain sab.😆 UPDATE SOON .🤗


awww thats so sweet of u to say that... lol haha dont worry even im lazy just dont know how i got the energy to update this time yep plz do try to update soon otherwise everyone will start to write the invitations card lol and chikki the headphone will get jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678



ha ha andy i was blishing because my imaginations were running st the speed of lighting😆

Exactly Andy baby...this question also popped up in mind also...that Saira sweety blushed on mere sponge bath scene😉😆

OMG control your imagination sweety😉 warna blush kar kar kay tomato hi na ban jana😆

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Manyata: j r u angry with me

J: yes because I didn't know u were gone give up jiji I didn't expect u to forget ur dream so easily.

Manyata: im sorry but j if u stay angry with me then I wont be happy coz I want ur support plz j I need ur support just like everyone else.

J: jiji if u ever get the chance to fully ur dream plz go for it promise me

Manyata:I will try j promise I will

J: anyways where r u guys going. she said trying to stop the tears to flow from her eyes

Uday: shopping

J: omg u r going shopping and that also without me how can u guys be so mean

Uday: sorry j but im going shopping with my fianc for tonight party y don't u go with vijay banna or unnati . Manyata smiled at udays and j nok jhok and both j and uday were happy to see that at least manyata was smiling for real.

J: of course after my jiji has to look good as she is yuvraj udayveer singh fiance.

Uday: exactly. Shall we go manyata.

Manyata: only if u and j have finished

j: of course we have, and both manveer headed of to shopping.

J to herself: I wish if jiji stays happy like this and no evil eye falls on her.. plz god don't let anything happen to her' she said staring into space where manveer left from.

Meanwhile in the car.

Manyata: uday u know I hate party right.

Uday: haan toh?

Manyata: and u still want to take me.

Uday: princess I am only going there because u r coming otherwise I wont go without u.

Manyata: u r seriously stubborn.

Uday: just like how u r he said with his usual smirk back on. Once they reached to the mall they got out of the car while there were two guards were behind them' uday took manyatas hand in his walking along with her and because there was a little crowd uday held manyata from her waist with his other hand and guided her in once they reach inside.

Manyata: uday wt do I have to wear

Uday: a gown' he went closer to her and whispered in her ear but I don't mind u wearing nothing at night when ur only with me' manyata felt a shiver when he said that and her cheeks turned slightly red. She ignore that comment of his totally

Manyata: erm I know a store that sells really good gown she said walking of

Uday: arrien princess wait for me he said walking behind her. They soon reached the store and after a lot of struggle found a gown that manyata actually liked' well it was actually udays choice.

Manyata: uday im Hungary. Uday looked at the time and saw it was exact 12:00

Uday: princess it lunch time come lets go and get something to eat. He took manyata bag in one hand and held her hand. Once reaching to a restaurant uday ordered Chinese for both of them. While eating manyata had some crumbs left near her lips and uday saw that and without tell manyata he got up from his seat' manyata looked at him confusingly when he got up but then her heart started to beat faster when she felt him coming near her lips. She looked at his action when he rubbed of the crumb from her face and licked him finger' she couldn't take his intense gaze and concentrated on her food while uday loved the effect he had on her.

Manyata: uday shall we go now' uday nodded and both headed towards the car' on the way manyata noticed that uday took another direction which is not to devgarh mahal after here a while she asked him' uday where r we going now.

Uday: jaighar mahal princess. Once reaching there both walked in and vasundra who was sitting in the hall was delighted to see them.

vasundra: welcome manyata come and sit. Manyata took her blessing and sat down with vasundra while uday sat on the other couch. Manyata how r u feeling now beta.

Manyata: im feeling better thanks.

vasundra: manyata komal called me and told me about the decision u took' u have a very big heart beta, manyata smile faded slightly which both uday and vasundra noticed she continued... But wt had to happen has happened now I cant wait till u become my daughter- in-law she said caressing her cheeks.

Uday: maa y did u want to see manyata all of a sudden.

vasundra: that's between me and manyata so u stay away from it k.

Uday: fine im going to my room. He said indirectly to manyata. Once he had left vasundra took manyata to her room and made her sit on the bed.

vasundra: manyata this is our traditional necklace my mother-in-law gave it to me and now I am giving it to u which u will wear in ur wedding. even though you will come as my daughter-in-law we will still treat u as our daughter

Manyata: thanks aunty ill keep this safe with.

vasundra: I know u will and beta I think u should start practice calling me maa from now on coz I wont allow u calling me aunty she said lovingly. Manyata smiled

Manyata: jee maa

vasundra: I would keep u for longer but I know my son is waiting for u. manyata looked at vasundra with wide eye and then left from there blushing ' one of the maid took manyata to udays room and soon left from outside' manyata knocked but no answer she knocked again but still he didn't answer finally she decided to enter in and once she did she heard the door closing and turned behind to see uday leaning against the door with his hands folded.

Manyata: uday I called u so many times but u didn't reply. She said with a pout

Uday: sorry princess but I felt like annoying u a little since I haven't done that for a while

Manyata: uday ur turning really naughty. He went closer to her

Uday: u don't know how much naughty I can be. He said whispering. Uday could feel her heart beat going faster.

Manyata: so this is ur room she said turning around and moving away from him. She was clutching the jewellery box so tightly.. and after few seconds she felt udays chin resting on her shoulder while his hands were around her waist.

Uday: not my room its our room he said kissing her cheeks she smiled at his gesture' he then noticed a box in her hand' manyata wt did mom give u?

Manyata: ma gave me jewellery she said it's a tradition where mother-in-law gives it to their daughter-in-law

Uday: wah' already started to call her maa not bad he said playfully

Manyata: what do u expect someone else to call her ma then

Uday: hmmm I don't mind that he said letting go off her.

Manyata: hooo uday im so gone get u for this and she started to run behind him' but he was nowhere near her both were running for quite time and finally manyata caught him but because of too much running both got out of breath and also lost their balance and fell on the bed where manyata was on top of uday' both of their eyes were closed manyatas hands were around udays neck while uday was holding her from her waist after few minutes when both were back to normal they looked at each other and started to laugh uday stopped laughing when he heard manyata laugh out freely without any worries he kept on staring at her' meanwhile manyata who was laughing calmed down still laughing a bit but when her eyes met uday she stopped laughing and got lost into them. In no mean time uday swiftly turned around and now uday was on top of manyata' he moved his lips to her forehead kissing it.. moving down to her eyes and then all over face' he kept kissing her and then stopped he looked at her in the eyes and then at her lips which he was rubbing with his fingers he could feel manyata shudder beneath and also felt her chest moving up and down' without wasting no more time he started to kiss her lips which manyata responded to.. both were still kissing not ready to give up after a long time both ran out of oxygen so they had to break the kiss and uday leaned his forehead on manyata while their nose was slightly touching and both had a soft smile playing on their face.

Uday: I hated strawberry but now it tastes lovely he said kissing her again and between could hear manyata giggling.

It had been five hours since uday dropped manyata of as they all had to get ready for the party unnati had decided to come over and get dressed with j and manyata (couldn't think about the boys lol)

Manyata gown

J gown

Unnati gown

Once reaching downstairs uday couldn't take his gaze of manyata even though he knew what she was going to wear but he still found her mesmerizing. He walked over to her

Uday: u look beautiful princess he whispered in her ears making her blush which didn't go unnoticed by other

Vijay: ahem ahem guys have u noticed even m bhai is coming to the party am I dreaming or wt he said playfully

J: y do u think that vijay bhai she said joining in

Vijay: oh come on j m bhai hates party and she would make so many excuses of not going but look at her today she didn't deny in fact she got ready on time and didn't moan looks like someone is having a great effect on her

Unnati: vijay banna of course someone will have a great effect on her and that is because yuvraj uday veer singh is in her life right manyata

Manyata: erm shouldnt we be going.

Vijay: see this m bhai is ready to go to the party oh my god uday wt magic ave u don't on my sister

Uday: u will soon know vijay bhai when you have someone in ur life' they all left after a while and went in two separate car. Manveer in one car, while j, unnati and vijay in another ' after 30 minutes both car entered into a mansion and once they all arrived they entered in to the party together.

Rithvic: hey uday how r u man.

Uday: not bad dude and both hugged.

Rithvic: so wont u introduce me to anyone

Uday: sure this is j my soon to be saali, this is vijay jays and manyata brother, u already know unnati and this is manyata my fianc. They all greeted each other

Rithvic: wow manyata I must say ur lucky to have uday as a life partner

Manyata: thanks rithvic

Rithvic: anyways guys please enjoy the party before going he and unnati exchanged looks which manyata noticed. Uday and vijay left the girls and manyata thought this is the right time to ask.

Manyata: unnati wt was that.

Unnati: wt manyata she said looking at her confusingly.

Manyata: the look u and rithvic exchanged.

Unnati: manyata the thing is

J: omg don't say that u both like each other

Unnati: k guys I wont hide it from u yes we like each other but we r just scared to tell everyone

Manyata: y he seems to be nice

Unnati: I know but manyata im scared of dada you don't know how much protective he is about his dear one but for now plz don't tell anyone

Manyata: so when will u

Unnati: when the right time comes plz guys. Both nodded and after a while both the boys came back and decided to have a dance' vijay- j danced together, manveer dance together and rithvic and unnati dance together but whenever the songs changed all had to dance with another partner

Uday: princess

Manyata: hmmm

Uday: I got a surprise for u

Manyata: and wt is that

Uday: u will soon find out.

Manyata: y cant u tell me now

Uday: then there will be no point for the surprise

Manyata: udayyy

Uday: manyataaa' but both couldn't continue as they had to change dancing partner unnati was with vijay, j with uday and manyata with rithvic. Manyata saw unnati and winked at her

Manyata: so rithvic how long have u and unnati been in contact for he looked surprised

rithvic: since I year and 6 month.

Manyata: What? She said shouting Luckily the music was loud so nobody heard her but she saw uday looking in her direction and smiling at her which she returned

Rithvic: but how did u know

Manyata: because me and my sister saw the look u and unnati exchanged and she had no option but to tell us but I cant believe it u were dating her since we were in abroad and doing our internsh' she stopped when she had a flashback of the good time she spent as a internship' rithvic noticed her going quite

Rithvic: she didn't tell u because I told her not to tell anyone at that time but y did u go quiet

Manyata: nothing anyways forget about me' its strange u r udays friend and u didn't tell him

Rithivic: he is really possessive about unnati and at the same time I don't want to break my friendship with him but please don't tell him for now

Manyata: don't worry I wont but u need to do something soon before its too late.

Uday: do wt before its too late. They both turned to see uday looking at them curiously

Rithvic: that i should go for this business deal before its too late he said uday looked at manyata who nodded she didn't want to hide anything from him but she had no option coz unnati didn't want uday or anyone else to know yet

Uday: anyways I think u had enough dance with manyata now its my turn

Rithvic: jealous that im dancing with her now. Both of them smirked back at each other and uday held out his hands to manyata which she happily placed and both manveer started to dance again together'. Uday pulled her closer to him and was holding her by her waist while manyata hands were around his neck both lost into each other.

Precap: udays surprise and a boys vs girls thing

K guys I am going to end this part here . Thank u all for liking the previous parts and also thanks to those who commented and also who liked it really it means a lot to me. I will be waiting for ur comment for this part so don't take ages to comment lol and don't forget to press the like button

ps: if anyone wants pm do write it in ur comment or just let me know by pm me and i add u

sorry for any spelling and grammar mistake and sorry if i forgot to pm someone

Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome and beautifully written the whole thing rocked
loved manveer scenes as usual
thanks for this early update
i loved this manyata she has taken things so maturely
unnati and rithwik are dating wow
i thought it will be vijay and unnaiti but rithwik and unnato make a good pair too
loved the gowns
loved uday's this dialogue
Uday: a gown… he went closer to her and whispered in her ear but I don't mind u wearing nothing at night when ur only with me… manyata felt a shiver when he said that and her cheeks turned slightly red. She ignore that comment of his totally
that whole scene was fab and manveer in the room and all those kisses were super awesome ☺️
please update soon and thanks so much for the pm
please please update soon
this update rocked
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Posted: 12 years ago
nce loved it continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Preya...so fast update and it was so cute and romantic☺️

You did more than my expectations sweety👍🏼

thanx for the pm dear and update soon🤗

Edited by adorable_rana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow wow wow wat a fabulous update
Truly loved it to da core
Uday is so naughty, loved da dialogue he said to manyata at the mall
The room scene was so cute espacially the sweet kisses uday gave to his princess
Aww so uday doesn't like strawberries bt tasting it from manyatas lips he enjoyed and took another kiss
So ritwik and unnati are dating, interesting
Can't wait to c how uday will react
Awesome precap
I'm nt gonna leave u so easily, I will haunt u once whether today or tomorrow so keep trying to avoid me bt il get back at u if u don't update fast
So do update da nxt part as fast as u updated the or els u no wat 😉 😈 😈

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