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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks to those who presssed the like button coz im happy that u liked this part

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Thanks to those who left their wonderful comment it really means a lot to me and while reading ur comments brings a smile on my face

@ vampire12345678: hey saira' thanks for the comment' glad u liked manveer scenes' hehe ur welcome for the early update and im sorry for the late comment'. Yep manyata has taken things maturely but don't forget unnati is joining hospital so seeing her in doctors attire will make manyata a bit upset but she will have to overcome it soon hopefully' lol yep unnati and rithivic are dating haha I knew most of u were thinking that it would be vijay and unnati 😆but nope they are only friends😊 and u will see their friendship in in the future parts. Glad u liked the gowns and hehe about udays dialogue😳 I thought I was being too cheeky but still decided to write it down😆.. glad u liked the whole part will update soon and ur welcome for the pm😃 xox

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@ roshni101: hey rosh'. Thanks for the comment im happy u really liked this part' hehe yep UV is naughty haha I thought I was being cheeky on that dialogue but still put it down😆😉'. aww glad u liked the room scene with manveer cute kisses😳. Yep lol uday doesn't like strawberries but loved it by tasting manyatas lips😳'. Yep unnati and rithvix r dating😉' hehe even I don't know udays reaction yet lets see😆😉'. Glad u liked the precap'. Lol haha I know u wont leave me easily so im gone update soon before u get me this time lol haha yes bosss I know I will have to update fast otherwise u will haunt me down😉😆😃xox

@ Vasishtha: hey sonam' thanks for the comment'. Haha yes u did say I was a metro😆 but I guess this metro of urs slowed downed a bit but will be back soon with the next part😊' but I see u have become a metro by posting a promo for ur ss but i am still waiting for the part😉'haha a dictionary omg ur making me shy by praising me a lot and I don't think I deserve it that much😳' aww thanks for the words' glad u liked the shopping, and lunch scenes of manveer and also im happy that u liked udays mom and manyata scene😊' hehe im happy u enjoyed especially manveer room scene😉' haha yes I can see ur emotion they are telling me but ur words r showing ur emotion as well😃.. haha yep unnati and rithvic r dating haha not only u everyone was thinking its its gone be vijay and unnati😆' haha yep dw our vijay soon will get someone once he starts dating girls which he is always running away from😆😉. Glad u liked the precap' hehe u will soon get to know udays surprise😉' thanks again for ur comment and welcome for the pm😃 xox

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@ pia.raha: hey pia thanks for the comment' I missed ur comment but happy to see u back😃'. Yep even I felt bad for manyata when she had to choose between her dream and responsibility😭' glad u liked manveer convo and the room scene in uv room😊'. Haha yep bohut effect ho raha hain m par😆.. she hated parties but uday made her agree😳' glad u liked this part will update soon and do comment next time coz I really look forward to all ur comments 😃xox

@Swetsurati: hey sweta thanks for the comment' im glad u liked this part especially manveer scene'. Yep rithvic and unnati r dating😊' haha many people thought that it will be vijay bhai and unnati😆' glad u liked udays mom and manyata convo will update soon and ur welcome for the pm😃 xox

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Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Rithivic: he is really possessive about unnati and at the same time I don't want to break my friendship with him but please don't tell him for now

Manyata: don't worry I wont but u need to do something soon before its too late.

Uday: do wt before its too late. They both turned to see uday looking at them curiously

Rithvic: that i should go for this business deal before its too late he said uday looked at manyata who nodded she didn't want to hide anything from him but she had no option coz unnati didn't want uday or anyone else to know yet

Uday: anyways I think u had enough dance with manyata now its my turn

Rithvic: jealous that im dancing with her now. Both of them smirked back at each other and uday held out his hands to manyata which she happily placed and both manveer started to dance again together'. Uday pulled her closer to him and was holding her by her waist while manyata hands were around his neck both lost into each other.

They were still dancing closely everyone were changing partners except them' both were aware of their surrounding uday didn't want to let her go and dance with anyone else.

Manyata: uday

Uday: hmm

Manyata: shouldn't we be swapping partners I mean everyone is doing that except us

Uday: everyone has danced with you enough now its only my turn to dance with u

Manyata: yh dancing with me again' she said with a smile. She suddenly felt goose bump when uday started to caress her waist slightly' while uday was giving her a teasing smile she was trying to look away as if pretending that his hands were having no effect on her waist

Uday: princess I think we should be going.

Manyata: really uday I thought u stay till the party ends

Uday: I do princess but I know u don't like parties and if u do go then u don't stay there for long that's y so shall we

Manyata: k but lets tell the others before we leave. Uday and manyata moved out of the dance floor and waited till the others finished dancing once they did they all came there

Uday:rithvic thanks for the party man really enjoyed it but to go now

Rithvic: man y go so early stay for a while

Uday: no dude have to go now thing is manyata came to the party for me and she actually doesn't like parties so decided to leave and also she has started to recover from her fever so don't want her to catch a cold

Rithvic: k man because of manyata im allowing you to go anyways bye dude and both friends hugged. Bye manyata it was nice meeting u

Manyata: same here rithvic

Uday: so guys u coming with us or staying till the party ends. He said looking at j, unnati and vijay

Manyata:uday let them enjoy they will come after the party ends right guys but she looked at unnati and rithvic for a brief second while j just winked at unnati

J: of course jiji see u at home she said hugging manyata. Manveer soon left after few talks while the rest stayed.

Vijay: they r so cute I just love how uday is taking care of manyata

J: u r right vijay bhai erm come lets go and get a drink she said as she wanted to leave unnati and rithvic together

After 30 minutes manveer reached home' uday got out from his side and went to open the door for manyata and both walked into the mahal once reaching the hall

Manyata: thanks for the party uday and also thanks for the day out so see u later then bye

Uday: princess I think ur forgetting something

Manyata: and wt is that

Uday: ur surprise he said with a smirk

Manyata: oh yeah how can I forget about that k so where is the surprise she said looking around

Uday: for that we have to go in ur room manyata agreed and both went there and once reaching manyata room uday closed the door

Manyata: uday where is the surprise she said getting a bit impatient'. Uday started to speak while walking towards her

Uday: princess u may be surprised to hear this from my mouth but I wanted to get this out'. Princess you know how I don't like strangers coming close to you especially ur friend jagat (manyata was about to say something but uday interrupted) plz princess let me finish' u may think im just making a fuss out of it or im over reacting but I cant help it' when I was dating other girls before and when other boys touched or talked to to them closely I didn't care but when it comes to you I do care' manyata like you even I was unaware of our rokha but I got to know from our family few years earlier and that time I had to tell my mind that now I have to be committed to only one person' I don't know what it is princess but I actually care for you more than a friend I don't know if its love because I have never fallen in love with anyone but whatever my feeling is its very special and I care for those who are close to me you may think y am I saying this but I had felt that I should share this to you' Till now he was standing in front of her and he could see that small smile playing on her lips

Manyata: uday i' but again she got interrupted by uday

Uday: plz princess not until I finish he said he slowly bent down on his knees and manyata could see something was folded in his hands ... princess I know that our rokha had happened when we were young and now your my fianc but I still want to ask u' he bought his hand forward' will u marry me' now manyata can see the ring he was holding. She was shocked and surprised he really did surprise her' uday could see tears in her eyes after few minutes of silence

Manyata: Yes uday I will marry you she said with a smile and uday smiled back and was about to put the ring in her finger when manyata stopped him.. he got up and asked

Uday: wt happened princess

Manyata: uday as we know our rokha happened when we were young and hence we were given small rings to fit in our finger she said slightly laughing but now we cant wear it because of the size but since u proposed me how about we start the ritual from the beginning as in from the engagement where you can put this ring on me that day in front of everyone

Uday: princess this is actually not a bad idea hmm im impressed he said smirking' both went silent as it got quite awkward

manyata was hesitating for a while but she tried to make the first attempt after a lot of struggling she finally went near him and hugged him her hands were around his waist while her head was resting on his chest'. Manyata again left uday in surprise but after he hugged her back thinking that manyata is trying to make attempts

manyata: thanks for the surprise uday

uday: im gld u liked it so princess may I have the honour to dance with u he said forwarding his hands

manyata: I would love to but what about music she said placing her hand in his

uday: imagine it playing he said pulling her closer' both were doing close dance and after a while uday twirled manyata around and her back hit his chest both were lost into the dance .. uday saw her bare shoulders and couldn't stop himself from placing a kiss there manyata shivered and moved away from him slightly but uday held her wrist and started to place wet kisses from her fingers going all the way to her shoulder and the side of her neck manytaa was breathing so heavily that she felt she will drop soon and turned around in a swift second and hugged uday' after a while uday picked her in his arms while manyata still hugging him her hands were around his neck ' he walked towards the bed and place her down on it' manyata was sitting with her eyes closed still hugging him and udays went towards manyata hair which was in a bun nd let it lose to fall down on her bare shoulders he then broke the hug and made her lay down and was slightly on top of her he was caressing her lips and they both were cm away when they heard someone speak. Manyata opened her eyes and both and her and uday looked towards the door and at each other after a while they came out just like the other family members did and saw vijay and j arguing for some reason and unnati was trying to stop them

unnati: j relax and vijay banna just stop plz

vijay: no I wont u girls cant accept fact' I TELL U

j: yes we can we r not like you guys who think they r right in everything

DS: j, vijay what is happening and what r u both arguing about she said strictly

Vijay: dadi saab please don't stop us today it will be decided ' yes u r jay u girls,, just want attention from boys and put a lot of make up to look good but if one of the guys tell u the truth that u don't look good or did a lot of make up u feel offended and start swearing at them y? because u cant face the truth.

J: oh really then vijay bhai y r u guys desperate to go around to look for good looking girls let me guess so that u can tell ur mates that u got a hot girlfriend' wait hold on a second y am I even saying this to u coz u run away from girls your self'.

Vijay: forget about this example I have another 1' girls really cant do much unless if they have boys to support them

J: oh really that's y many women be it politician, boxing, acting, sports r leading the country and matching the mens without their support' before this could any worse manyata jumped in

Manyata: j relax plz k lets end this over here plz

Vijay: wow m bhai ur telling j just because she is a girl' see this is another thing women don't agree with men. all the elders were annoyed with this

Manyata: vijay bhai its not like that

Vijay: yes it is but I have no worries because I have uday banna with me he said

J: yh jiji come we don't need to talk to these boys' both manveer looked at each other as they were getting dragged into this

Vijay: uday u will have to support me come on after all we have to make these girls believe that they r not right at all and for manyata sake u will support me both manveer looked at each other shockingly and then at vijay

Uday: vijay banna y u dragging us into this

Vijay: because m bhai has joined the other team and I made u join mine

Brij: guys plz stop this useless fights

J: no dad we r gone prove these boys wrong unnati we will see u 2moz k bye take care and she gave a quick hug to her' come on jiji they were about to go

Unnati: guys lets have a competition

Vijay: what do u mean

Unnati: vijay banna lets have a competition where there will be a boys team and a girls team and both we will be given the same task and we have to see how well each teams does and to warn u there wont be only one task but many

Vijay: and whoever wins has to do what the winning team tells them to

J: agreed

Unnati: k then we will start the competition after two days

Vijay: that's fine but who will give us the tasks

Unnati: well being the elder dadi saab can u set the task up please everyone looked surprised and waited for ds response

Ds: u guys will never change ok but make sure you all don't get carried away with this competition all the elders went of and now its was only the youngsters

Vijay: so uday banna see u tomorrow

Uday: y tomorrow I thought the competition is starting after two days

Vjay: yes it is but we have to discuss things u know men things which cant be said in front of the girls he said looking at the three girls now manyata was annoyed

Manyata: enough vijay bhai what is it that u cant discuss in front of us and stop thinking that u r the best k anyone can win u never know

Vijay: well now ur telling me first but you could of said this to j but no coz she is a girl and is on ur side u told me

J: enough vijay bhai we will see who wins come on jiji and she dragged manyata along with her

Vijay: k guys see u 2moz then' uday and unnati soon left and vijay went to his room

Later in the night

Manyata was really not happy with this competition she hated it when men tried to prove women wrong and women trying to prove men wrong all she believed in was that everyone was equal soon she came out her thoughts and saw her phone ringing nd saw uday calling

Manyata: hello

Uday: wow princess picked up my phone in seconds I never knew u would miss me

Manyata: uday y did we get dragged into this

Uday: princess its only a competition it will finish like that

Manyata: yh but then I feel bad when the other team looses

Uday: oh so u know ur team is going to lose must say unnati shouldn't have thought about the competition because after all we r going to win

Manyata: how mean uday I didn't say anything like that and how do u know our team is going to lose seriously uday don't get ur hopes to high

Uday: y ur scared

Manyata: u know what even though I believe everyone is equal but now lets see who wins

Uday: princess I have always won so defo the boys team

Manyata: and I have never learnt to lose so hopefully the girls team

Uday: wow over confident huh?

Manyata: I know ur being over confident im just being confident' good night uday its really late now

Uday: good night princess he cut the phone and was smiling as he loved the way manyata answered him back

Next morning manyata came out of the washroom in a robe and a towel wrapped around her hair she was walking towards her wardrobe when she saw a sight on her bed ' she slowly turned around and was shocked to see uday sitting on the bed comfortably and looking at her intently

Manyata: uday what the hell r u doing here and that also early in the morning

Uday: princess its all ur fault he said getting up and slowly walking towards her

Manyata: my fault but what did I do she said confusingly

Uday:princess I couldn't sleep last night because we left something incomplete

Manyata: uday wt did we leave incomplete

Uday: kiss he said whispering in her ears. Manyata closed her eyes when she felt his hot breath on her neck

Manyata: well sorry chance has gone she said walking away

Uday: so I wont get my kiss

Manyata: im not in the mood to she said looking at him with a smirk

Uday: princess I hope u know that I get whatever I want

Manyata: of course uday I have know that by now she said still with a smirk

Uday: so if u know it then y don't u give me my incomplete kiss he said moving towards her while she was moving away

Manyata: I told u na that im not in the mood but before uday could get hold of her manyata moved to the other side quickly,

Uday: but u seem to be in a ver naught mood today he said with a smirk and went towards the side she was but this time manyata found that she was in a dead end as she was cornered by the wall however she tried to move but uday was close to her by the and blocked her between the wall and his hand he took of the towel letting her wet hair fall down a little droplets of water went on her neck and face he could see manyata breathing going heavier and her chest was moving up and down' he went even more closer to her and started to wipe of the water droplets with his kiss starting from her face and then going on to her neck' manyata held on to udays shirt as she felt she might drop soon but luckily enough uday got hold on to her waist and crushed her body with his he slowly moved towards her jaw line and then back on to her face and this time he lips stopped nears her slightly brushing it but then soon he locked his lips with her' the kiss started of slowly but soon ended passionately both brke out of the kiss as they needed air

Manyata: I don't know how I lose myself to u she said looking at him

Uday: I told u before nobody can escape from yuvraj udayveer singhs charm not even you see u downstairs princess he said leaving a quick peck on her lips once reaching towards the door he turned around and gave a wink to her before leaving once he had gone manyata went towards the mirror and saw her face all red

Manyata: what r u doing to me uday she said slightly touching her lips

Precap actually no precap lol

Ok guys here is part 32 I thank those who reported parikhan when she made a post about me ending my ff and finally I think she has been banned not sure coz I don't see any of her post' I hope u like this part im sorry for updating late but finally got time to as I didn't not have any lecture don't forget to press the like button and do leave a comment and I have replied to all ur previous comments on page 59and sorry for any spelling and grammar mistakes

Ps: if u want to be added to the pm list then do mention it in ut comment or u can pm me and ill add u but to those if u r not interested in this ff please let me so that I can take u of the pm list and it wont waste both of our time thanks

Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RESERVED. ME FIRST ME FIRST YEEE.🥳
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Fantastic update Preya.Awesome, superb, mindblowing update.
PREFECT is a word which I want to use for your all updates. Your updates are always full of MANVEER n without any mistakes.
I love all the scenes specially J-Vijay scene, Manveer phone convo n the last MANVEER scene of your update. KISS Scene was so beautifully written.
I love this FF n always wait for your updates.
Great work Preya.
Thanks for such an amazing update.
Do update soon Preya, now waiting for the competition between girls vs boys.
🤗

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Preya...thank you for the PM...don't listen to that basher..u r one of the best writers of the forum..she's just jealous of you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update love!
now this is called a writers spirit!
m soo glad you didnt listened to some looser and stopped ur ff.
Sweety people bash you beacause they envy you! they are jealous of you and ur FF.
they cant write as beautifully as you do so no matter how many haters comex continue ur ff😊 ok love.
Edited by MsLuscious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update dear really awesome...pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

That was so cute and romantic Preya...too good👍🏼

Our UV never leave any chance of romancing😉😆

waiting for the competition

thanx for the pm and update soon dear🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. loved manveer scenes.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment edited on Page-59.
Thank u.

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