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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 18

Manyata yawned lazily on her bed.she was very tired from yesterday's drama,but it proved her strength to others as well as her too.

She got up and sat on the bed starring to the photos hanging on the wall.

She said to herself "kal ka din kitna stress full tha but sab acche se nipat gaya,chalo saara syappa khatam hua,haan nahi toh"

And then vijay bhai entered "syappa toh ab shuru hoga M bhai"
m:kya matlab vijay bhai?

J:(entering the room)matlab aapki training ab shuru hogi

M:training kaunsi training? meine apni education khatam kar di hai

Vb:ohh fo M bhai ye koi ordinary training nahi hai.

M:(still confused)matlab????

J:matlab aapki yuvrani banne ki training

Vb:abhi abhi hum niche nani sahab aur mama sahab ki baatein sun kar aa rahe hai,tumhe aaj se hi ek perfect yuvrani banne ki training di jaaygi,and also to be a perfect maharani

J:yeah afterall aap jaigarh ki maharani bhi toh banengi

Vb:I tell u,uday se shaadi ke baad..

M:ek minute tum dono se kisne kaha ke mein uday se shaadi karungi?

J and vijay looked at each other "of course tumne"

J:jiji aapne hi toh kal press mein announcement ki thi na

m:wo sab toh sirf ye bakheda khatam karna tha isliye,bas..

j was about to say when her phone buzzed and she moved out.

Vb:hum bhi chalete hai hain M bhai

He was leaving the room when manyata said

M:yeh mera phone kaha gaya

Vb:ab kisse phone kar rahi ho

M:uday ko ,ab usse hi puchu ke ye training ka kya jamela hai.

Vijay just smiled and stood there

Manyata dialed uday's number,but he was not picking it up.she tried but got no answer,she got irritated and threw away the phone on other side of the bed

Vb:kya hua M bhai?
m:iss uday ko aane do phir batati hu,mera phone hi answer nahi kar raha hai.

Vijay just smiled and thought something

M:aap kyu itna muskura rahe ho vijay bhai?
vb:kuch soch raha hu.

M:kya?

Vb:tum abhi nahi samjhogi,waqt aane par jaroor bataonga.

And he left the room smiling,

M:pata nahi

she got up and went to get ready.she left her room and was walking down when her phone buzzed she saw the caller ID but again got irritated

m:hello'kaun

uday:hey princess itni jaldi humme bhul gayi

m:nahi nahi mein kaun hoti hu tummhe bhulne waali..huh?

uday:princess kya tum humse gussa ho

m:na na bohot khush hu ke tumne mere calls ka reply hi nahi kiya

uday:sorry princess thoda busy tha

m:of course janab ko bohot kaam hai,mein toh humesha hi disturb karti hu na

uday:aisi baat nahi hai princess..

m:don't ever call me that,yuvraj udayveer singh ab aapko jyada time mujhse baat karne mein barbaad nahi karna chahiye

uday:humari baat toh suno,soch lo ab baat nahi karni toh hum bhi kabhi baat nahi karenge

m:good bye

uday:but prin..

before he can say anything she cut the call.

Vijay and j were listening her

J:jiji itna gussa?

M:kyun ab kya mein gussa bhi nahi ho sakti

Vb:shaant gada dhaari bheem shaant

Manyata was still angry and was moving down the staircase when a voice caught her attention

"MONIYA'."

She lifted her gaze to look and was surprised to see her ,here in front of her eyes.

M:shivu..

Shivangi run and hugged her.they both were so happy that it seems they got their world back

At last breakinging the hug

M:shiv utu yahaan

Sh:haan mein wo actually na..

J:jiji..

Vb:humme toh bhul hi gayi tum m bhai,I tell u

M:arrey nahi aisa kuch nahi hai

Sh:mujhe nahi milaygi kya

Vb:yeah humme bhi milwao m bhai

M:(whispered in vijay's ears)she is already committed.

Vb:my bad luck

Sh:kya hua

M:kuch nahi shivu,idhar aa ye hai j(pointing towards j) I mean jaynandini meri choti behen'aur ye hain vijay bhai (pointing towards him )humare bade bhai.

M(giving shivangi a side hug)aur ye hai shivu,I mean shivangi meri sabse acchi aur sacchi dost,I call her shivu

They shake their hands and greeted each other.

M:arrey but tune bataya hi nahi tu yahaan kaise aayi..

Sh:tera hero laya hai mujhe yahaan

They all were confused

M:hero kaun hero?

"hum"

Manyata turned to look and her eyes widened

M:tum!!!

Vb:wow uday banna accha surprise hai.

Uday:thanxx vijay banna

Sh:tujhe pata hai monu,wo aaj subah hi neel ko kaam se pune jaana pada aur jab mein uske saath airport par thi seeoff ke liya tab inhone mujhe invite kiya ke aaj mein tujhse milne aajao,par phir mujhe college se kuch documents lene the toh yuvraj udayveer hi mere saath college gaye,saara kaam khatam kiya aur phir mujhe yahaan leke aaye tujhse milne,cool na.

M:hmm

Manyata was looking at uday with thank you look,there was a smirk on uday's face.he turned himself at her

Unnati:aur humme ghar hi bhool gaye not fair dada.

Unnati run to them

She and shivangi got introduced

J:ab sab chalein breakfast ke liye..

Uday:hum chalete hain,humme bhook nahi hai

M:aise kaise bhook nahi,

Uday:wo kya haina manayta aaj humme kisi se bhi bat karne ka mood nahi hai(turning his face)

She really got sad on hearing her name instead of princess fron him,everyone noticed this.

Vb:humme lagta hai humme chalna chahiye jiska matter wahi solve kare

Unnati:I agree

J:me too

Sh:count me in.

They left them and proceeded,

M:(with guilt in her voice)isliye tum subah busy the

Uday knew his princess ,he was pretending to be sad and hurt

Uday:kya fark padta hai usse kisiko

M:sorry uday

Uday:tum kyun sorry bol rahi ho manyata

M:uday enough..kaha na sorry aur ab ye manyata manyata kya laga rakha hai

Uday:tumne hi kaha tha na call ever call u that

M:but uday..

Uday:good bye

Uday was leaving when manyata caught his fist,the tears rolled from her eyes

M:sorry..

Uday:princess..(he cupped her face)

Uday:hey stop crying princess,hum toh bas Mazak kar rahe the

M:nahi uday,meine kuch jyada hi bol diya bina soche samjhe!

Uday:its ok princess,but ab ye rona band karo warna yaha flood aa jaayega

She hit him playfully

Uday:chalein mujhe bhook lag rahi hai

M:hhmmm..

They reached the breakfast table but only found j,vijay,unnati and shivangi

M:ds,maa,papa kahan hai?
vb:tumhare intezaar mein chale gaye

Everyone laughed

J:tumhe toh bhook nahi thi na uday

Uday:yeah but ab hai

Sh:waise monia..sorry I mean manyata koi programme banaye aaj

Unnati:yeah maza aayega

J:lets go to shopping

M:yupp

Uday:after that we can all go for a dinner in my hotel

Vb:and then for club what's say

M:amazing,waise bhi shivu ki engagement shopping bhi karni hai

J:ooo..

Unnati:congrats shivu

Sh:thanxx

Uday:toh done,aaj humari meeting hai aur sham tak neel bhi aa jayega do we will join u ll there

M:g8,neel bhai ya neel jiju, mein kya bulao?

Unnati:ohh toh unka naam neel hai

Shivangi just blushed at it

M:toh phir plan sealed'

So friends hows this

So sorry for the delay

Had some problems to update

Next part will be updated with some cute manveer scenes

Plz do like and comment

Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...awww...manayta is in love...😃lovec it...i hope she will soon realize her love for uday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Part
poor Vijay bhai get him and Unnati together
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud update.. update soon nxt part,thanku for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Asweme update. When manayta was pactifying uday, it was just too cute. Lovely part. Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loving the story :) thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!! I'll be looking forward to the cute ManVeer scene in the next part so do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Jazz nice one.cont soon yaar.egarly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very cute update. M & UV are so cute.
I really love it.
Pls update soon.
Eagerly waiting for next one.
Thanking you.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
thanks for the PM
do update soon :)

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