manveer :an eternal love story (ch 31-pg 92)ended - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part.
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update!!!! Continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome... so akash and mayaa have joined hands to break manveer really cant wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm
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👏👏thanks...great job.awesome..brillaint...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb...the pictures were really very nice. Just love VB's comic. At last I was thinking about punching him. Akash and Maya should have known that no one can seperate manveer. And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: imkool

awesum update like always...👏👏
hey just a small reqest i want manyata and uday too fall in slowly and slowly nt like maonash where in first meeting they met, and in second meeting they fell in love...
u getting ...wht i m saying...😉
newys awesum update as usual...

yeah dear i got u
i will try my best to do it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow JAZZ! loved the chapter!👏 SO Uday is falling hard for Manyata,Nice!😉 I so want even Manyata to feel the spark, and to flow in his passion. And thanks for keeping Jay as a positive character. I so love this J, Manyata and Vijay's tigadi.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 14

Uday and manyata were in the car

M:sach uday aaj toh bohot maza aaya

Uday:humme bhi princess…..glad ke tum aur bore nahi hui

M:uday tum itne bhi bure nahi ho jaisa meine samjha tha,

Uday:accha aisa kya samjha tha tumne

M:who humari first meeting mein

Uday:c'mon princess uss incident ke liye toh humme tumhare bare mein bura sochna chahiye tha

M:wat!! Tum

Uday:arre hum mante hain ladkiya humare gaalon ko chune ke liye tarasti hai,but tum toh kuch jyada hi desperate thi.

M:awww……tum na

Uday:ek toh galti upar se argument ,maan gaye tumhe princess

M:meine koi galti nahi ki thi,agar tum kisi gunde ki tarah ladki ke peeche bhagoge toh who kya tumhari aarti utaregi ,haan nahi toh

Uday halt the car,and walked out,and manyata followed her

M:ye gaadi kyun roki..

Uday:ssshhh….(and he pinned her to the car)

He moved towards manyata,she got scared and gulped hardly

Uday:humari galati?

He was too pretending to be serious which scared manyata even more

M:uday tumm

Uday:sshhh….

He extended his hand and holded manyata's wrist and with the other hand he removed the bracelet and put it on her hand's wrist.when manyata's gaze falled on it she was shocked and surprise

M:ye toh mera..

Uday:rajkumari manyata humari gustakhi yehi thi ke hum isse iske hakdaar ko lautana chahte the,aur humme toh aapki adaalat mein safaai dene ke bajaye saza suna di gayi

Manyata and uday were looking deep into each other's eyes,she really felt guilty for her action.

M:I m sorry..

Uday:meine kaha sorry kehne ke liye?

Manyata just moved her neck in no.he just couldn't control himself on her so innocent behavior and bursted out laughing.

M:uday.. tum ..

Uday:sorry princess tumhe dara diya

Manyata just started hitting him playfully,he holded her her "kamaal hai princess tumhare haath bohot hi jyada chalete hain"

Manyata just freed her hand and got in the car and uday trying to control himself got in.

They reached the mahal

M:uday kya mein tumse kuch puch sakti hoon

Uday:princess tum humse kuch bhi puch sakti ho,tumhara humpar pura hak hai

M:mujhe wahi hak janna hai

Uday:hum kuch samjhe nahi princess

Manyata was getting little serious,she sighed and turned to look him "tumne uss din mujhse kaha tha ke mein tumhari hoon humesha se aur humesha ke liye,..uska kya matlab tha uday?"

Uday puled her and surrounded his arms around her wraist

Uday:kyunki wohhi sach hai manyata

M:mein kuch samjhi nahi

Uday:samjhna bohot aasan hai manyata,hum dono ka roka bachpan mein hi ho chukka hai,haan nahi toh.

Manyata's eyes widened in shock "no"

Uday:c'mon princess ab itna shock hone natak bhi mat karo

Manyata just jerked him away, "meri marzi ke bagair meri shaadi kahin nai ho sakti"

Uday:shaadi kaha princess ,abhi toh sirf roka hua hai.shaadi toh bohot jald ho hi jaayegi

M:aisa kuch nahi hoga………mein tumhe pasand nahi karti

Uday:toh bohot jald karne lagogi

M:tum khud ko samjhte kya ho,meine acche se baat kya kar li,tumne ek baar help kya kar di..tum jo chahoge wahi hoga kya

Uday:nahi princess hum jisse chahenge woh humari hi hogi

M:yeh tumhari galatfehmi hai

And she jerked him off her and run in the mahal,uday smirked at her "humari toh tumhe hona hi hoga princess"
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In mahal

ds:brijraj humme lagta hai manyta aur uday ke beech ab understandings badh rahi hai

brij:sahi kaha aapne maasahib,ab bohot jald hum unn dono ke beech ke iss rishte ko aage badha sakte hain

"aisa kuch nahi hoga papa"

They turned to look at the shocked manyata standing at the door.

Ds:beta aap..

M:kya dadisahab? aap humari ijajat ke bagair humara rishta kaise kar sakte hain

Brij:beta yeh rishta bachpan mein hi ho chuka hai

M:toh..kya mujhse pucha gaya tha?..nahi na

Ds:MANYATA…(with stern voice) aapka aur uday ka rishta jaroor hoga yeh humara faisla hai

M:(with same tone)aur meri marzi ke bagair aisa kuch nahi hoga yeh mera faisla hai

And she run to her room…

So sorry friends for such a short update but as I told u all that my admissions are there

I hav to look at that and I m having very less time to spend on pc

I will try best to give u better update ASAP but plz forgive me now and so sorry but I have to go for my admission first as it is my very important step for my career

Don't forget to hit like and give comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was short and beautiful da.👏..pls dnt keep manyata and Uday seperate..pls
Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏thanks...great job..awesome...👏👏

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