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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome i just loved it so manyata finds out about her and udays rokha and she is stubborn not to get married... i wonder how she will agree... loved the manveer scenes update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was a very good update but I don't get why Manyata doesn't wanna marry Uday? I mean there is no Akash in her life in this story...

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates
loving this story
do update sooon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sim1623

It was a very good update but I don't get why Manyata doesn't wanna marry Uday? I mean there is no Akash in her life in this story...


Simran :D...

im so dear if i confused u
but soon u will get the track😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 15

Uday was admiring himself in the mirror,

Unnati:dada did I heard right

Uday:heard wat choti?

Unnati:dada manyata ne…

Uday:wo haan kar degi choti

Unnati:dada itna over confidence

Uday:over confidence hi sahi choti par yuvraaj udayveer singh ne ek baar jo keh diya bas wahi hota hai.

Unnati:but dada

Uday:bohot raat ho chuki hai,chutki.jaao jaake so jaao..gud night

Unnati:gud night dada..

She left the room,uday just looked himself in the mirror.he turned and called someone "yeah just do it" and he cut the call.

In the morning manyata got up yawning when her eyes got widened

Her room was filled with beautifull flowers and bouquets,for a moment smiled curved on her face but her smile faded on hearing that voice "kaisa laga princess"

She got off her bed and moved to uday,pointed her index finger to him

M:tum kya samjhte ho khud ko,yeh sab bhej kar tum mujhe khud se pyaar karne par majboor nahi kar sakte,haan nahi toh

Uday:princess,humne aapko kaha majboor kiya,hum toh bas aapse dosti karne aaye hai

M:dosti aur tumse

Uday:kyun princess kya hum itne bure hain ki humse dosti karna bhi tumhe gawara nahi..

Manyata was quite and was thinking something

Uday:ab ye mat kehna ke dosti karne ke liye bhi tumhare haathon se thappad khana padega

Manyata just smiled and said "tum bohot ajeeb ho"

Uday:pata hai

M:pagal ho

Uday:who bhi pata hai

M:mein kya karun tumhara

Uday:just friendship

He extended his hands and manyata too did and they shaked hands

Uday:chalo first step complete

M:kaunsa first step

Uday:tumne suna nahi princess

M:kya?

Uday:yehi ke dosti pyaar ki pehli seedi hoti hai,haan nahi toh

Hearing this manyata run behind him "tum na ,aaj toh gaye mere haathon se,haan nahi toh" .uday run from there "breakfast table par milte hain princess"

Maya on phone "kya khabar hai"

"maam ussne shaadi ke liye inkaar kar diya"
there was a evil smile on maya's face "g8,tumhe pata haina tumhe kya karna hai"

"yes maam"

She hanged the phone

Maya:manyata tumhe nahi pata tumne mera kaam kitna aasan kar diya hai

She called aakash

Maya:hello aakash tum tyaar ho na

Aakash:haan maya mein apne pyaar ko paane ke liye tyaar ho

Maya:good

In tha mahal,on breakfast table

Ds:manyata hum aapse baat karna chahte hain

M:ji dadisahab

Ds:manyta kal job hi aapne kaha

Uday:maaf kijiye dadisahab par hum manyata ki baton se sehmat hain.unhe abhi waqt chahiye adjustment ke liye(giving an assuring look to manyata)

Ds:par uday beta

Uday:yeh humari bhi khwaish hai dadisahab

Ds:thik hai uday beta,par dekhiyega yeh baat jyada na bigde

After the breakfast, in manyata's room

J:jiji kya hua dinner toh thik than a

M:haan j,par tum aisa kyu puch rahi ho

Vb:kyunki tumhara faisla sunkar toh humme aisa kuch nahi laga

M:vijay bhai,dosti aur pyaar mein farak hai

J:par jiji aapka roka toh bachpan mein hi ho chukka tha

M:par meri marzi toh shamil nahi thi na

Vb:aur waise bhi j bhai sab tumhari tarah ghode pe sawar toh naho ho sakte na,jaise tum aur jagat ne jet speed pakdi waise sab kaha

M:I tell u

J:whatever!!

Vb:seriously m bhai tumhara faisla sunkar humme laga k uday ke hotel mein kahin khane mein mirch toh jyada nahi pad gayi tha na

Uday(standing on the door)manyata ko mirch ki kya zaroorat hai,wo khud kisi theeki mirch se kam thode hi hai

They all laughed at it except manyata

M:tum yaha kya kar rahe ho

Uday:sahi kaha ab shaadi ko toh waqt

M:mein koi shaadi nahi karnewali,tum ne suna nahi tha kya,humari shaadi cancel ho chuki hai

Uday:princess sunne mein problem tumhe hui hai,humari shaadi cancel nahi postponed hui hai

Vb:in this matter I m with uday

J:count me in

M:tumne mujhse mere bhai aur behen bhi cheen liye ab dekh mein kya karti hu,haan nahi toh

Suddenly a maid came running

Maid:yuvraaj sa aap sab ko rajmata ji ne abhi neeche bulaya hai

In the hall when they all reached,they were shocked to hear the news flashing on tv

The reporter spoked

"rajwadon ka insaaf,pyaar ke dushman

Barson se khoi hui rajkumari jab wapas mili toh unki pairon se zameen bhi kheench li gayi"

Then the camera turned to a face which shocked uday and manyata

He joined his hands and spoked

"Namaste mera naam aakash verma hai,mein ek middle class family se hoon

Mein aur moniya ek dusre se bohot pyaar karte hain"
reporter "ye moniya kaun hai

Aakash:rajkumari manyata,par uske pariwaar waalon ne use kaid kar liya hai"

Re:par aakash ji rajkumari manyata ka roka toh yuvraaj udayveer ke saath hua hai na

A:ji nahi meri moniya ne who roka tod diya hai,par uske pariwaar waale uss par dabaav daal rahe hai,ussne mujhe phone karke sab kuch bata diya hai.usne mujhe bataya ke us par dabaav dala jaa raha hai ke who mujhe pehchaan ne se bhi inkaar kar de

Re:dekha aap sab ne yeh thi ek dukhi premi ki guhaar

Uday just switched off the tv.

Ds:ye kya hai manyata

M:(with tears in her eyes)dadisahab sach mujhe iss bare mein kuch nahi pata.

uday:dadisahab manyata ka ismein koi dosh nahi hai.

Brij:maasahab ab hum kya kare,ye media wala toh humme badnaam karke hi rahenge

Uday:uncle brij hum sab sambhaal lenge

Manyata run in her room crying.

M:kyun mera saath hi aisa hota hai

She sat on her bed crying, just when uday entered

Uday:(with a pain in his voice)princess…

So sorry guys if u don't like it

Aaj bohot jaldi jaldi likha hai

Next time acche se long update karne ki koshish karungi

Plz hit like and comment

I will try to reply back to u ll

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh that was awesome da...continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update:) waiting for d next one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update.. waiting 4 nxt..
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys i personally say sorry to u for sending pm so late
and with so confusion
plz forgive me and enjoy the chapter
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jazzthakur can send me a PM too...

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