ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 80

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Aweee dat ws such a sweet update meera loved rannvijay and now he will understand dat how it feels... hope to see manveer together in the next update and thanxx for the two update jst luved them 👏 And thanxx for the pm


Awww thanks soo much! So glad you liked it! 😳
And yep, RV knows too how heartbreak feels now
Dont worry, there will be loads of ManVeer in the next part I promise! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx


Dear, UV trusting Manyata will be the next step in theri relationship! I promise, he will learn. You know its not even that much a trust thing - its just that our UV is so possesive when it comes to Manyata that seeing her with anyone just infuriates the angry young man in him which im sorry but I love too much! 😳 😆 But still, he wil trust his Princess..he doesnt have another choice!

Liking the whole cupid idea! 👍🏼 Thanks for suggesting. 😃 I actually have to sit for a while and figure out properly what I am going to do next! 😳

Anywyas thank you again and do keep supporting me and this SS! 🤗



hey even i love the angry young uday... i mean who doesnt😳😳
yes i can see the love and possessiveness behind the love but somewhere i want him to trust her as well.. coz i find her innocent n sweet...

i like the way u r showing manyata... in the show they butchered manyata's char so much... making her runaway from d mandap... wat not.. getting engaged to uday n hugging akash on the same day.. nightmares for d audience 😭 the show wala manyata was sometimes unbearable... forget the looks n uday being hot sexy etc😳😳 but which girl wouldn't love a guy who has changed himself completely bcooz of her and for her... (even in real life girls r not that stubborn n selfish).. even if they had been in love with someone, they'll change... yes even in d show they showed dat she has changed but it was in a rushed manner... err i will never stop complaining abt dek.. forget that now i'll come back to ur story

its nice that she has fallen for uday n wants to show her love as well... u had quoted "uday had to face her anger till now n from now on he will have to face her love" not sure of the exact words.. but something similar to the line...

cant wait fot the next chapter... i am liking meera and ranvijay as well... wow man your story has so many intersting and lovable characters 👏

pls update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shana0127

Fantastic ...ek love story ke saath doosri free

Am loving both the stories really u can swap all four to each other whenever required to make it more interesting (its already is one heck of intresting I tell u )

Put UV with Meera to make M jealous

Put UV with Meera and M to make Ranvijay jealous like how does UV get everything first M and now my meera

Put RV and M together to make UV jealous , well u have successfully done it.


I midst of all this we have full entertainment of Manveer love and love u not relationship and Meera RV lets fall in love relationship 👍🏼


You knwo Shanu I really look forward to your comments...they are always so..different? 😆
Im so happy you're liking this umm...love square? LOL
And yea you're right - for sure am going to use these four characters in a twisted way 😈
Agreed have showed everything except UV-Meera I may avoid showing any romantic side as they already have a fan or two of that jodi and man I know if them two were to be together in a kidna romantic scene like M and RV have been before it would be a bit too much hotness. 😆 Anwyyas thanks again! Love ya! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tannu-

lovely update <3
but manveer were soo less in the updates..actually manveer the hi nhi 19 part mein :/

nd yes ritvik really suits for rannvijay character..neither good nor bad
nd i did imagine ritvik in rannvijays character.. ;)
luved the trio frndship.. :)
hope the misunderstandings between uv nd rannvijay will be soon cleared..
n plzz nxt update mein manveer ko zyada rakhna plzzz... :)

cont soon :)

ranjana pls make this ss into ff ;) :)
Luv Fallen Angel <3


Thanks Tannu. And yea I know there wasnt a lot of ManVeer this time but dont worry, next update will make up for it I promise! 😉
Happy you liked Rithvick as RV! 😳 ANd that you enjoyed the chapters and the awesome trio! 😃

LOL FF ya SS same thing right? 😊 Well if you're thking about the length well then I think I've long surpassed the length of a normal SS anwyyas. 😆
And AWww thank you so much for loving it! ☺️ ANd dont worry - my only rule is to write until I have ideas flowing in my mind and as of now theres so much that has to happen! 😉
Thank you once again Tannu! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

Ooo Ranjiii u ask if the updates were worth the wait ya bet they were!! they were worth the every second of wait that was jst awesome Ranjiii loved it so so mch... ok first of all when i saw the pm of urs that u updated i was like thn when opened n saw it was double update thn the chaps chapy18 the start u took jst fab manyata missing uday wanting to see him thn she thinking that now uday will hve to face her love that was jst superb thn the manveer scene that was so so nicely portrayed by u u explained the feelings of both of em so well the conflicted feelings of uday uncontrollable jst brilliant👏.. Meera came entry was good manyata jealous😆... manyata unnati part was good unnati taking manyata thru the past history of uday runvijay and meera.. the way u used the part of runvijay entry n uday talk with runvijay here to support the past story was jst fab shows the deep buildup... chapy19 was so good too although it didnt had any manveer scenes bt despite of that it was really gr8 Uday n Runvijay were so good friends amazing how the things change with time 1st flashback was so fun uday n runvijay talks n meera annoyed locked up in lib n uday n meera talk was really touching when she said I really wanna be there to see the fall of the great Udayveer Singh & man did he fall hard in love later😉 jst as meera said love happens n u've no control over it... thn mission get over runvijay bt poor meera it didnt go as planned n she was left heart broken... uday broke his friendship with runvijay for what he did with meera so sweet😳.. u wrote the flashbacks really well n they were not at all a sort of confusing summary i loved em.. oh my comment has become so long😲 hope i didnt bored ya... now Meera can b back with runvijay she loves him n now runvijay is changed too he has kinda gone thru same heart break as once meera had to go thru due to him now there story will start cool... & wow nxt update full of manveer ooo i jst cant wait for the nxt manveerlicious update thnx for sch awesome updates🤗 update as soon as u can... love ya


Wishyy!!! Sorry for replying so late but ever since my work schedule got changed I have to get up early and start work at 8 which kinda sucks and makes me all sleep-deprived and tired by the time I wanna sit adn comment! But I'll reassure you that each comment short or long is immensely important to me, especially yours that I always look forward to you as you always point out things that kinda give me relief that someone liked it! 😳 Seriously thank you sooo much, you really flatter me too much adn inflate my ego! 😆 But seriously I am soo happy that although you missed ManVeer you still enjoyed the flashbacks.. Next udpate I am going to try to maintain more balance but at the same time I dont think its fair that you guys only get half the ManVeer scenes that you usually get which probabaly means my updates are gonna have to be super long from now on. haha I bet youre excited but for me - 😳 its just like SHIT Imma have a lot of work to do! But I will do it for amazing readers like you which really make writing worth it!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVE LOVE LOVE the double update Rans!
It was simply awesome. I read it the day you update but was too lazy to comment.😳
I thought about Mouni Roy as Meera too and I KNEW IT! Ranvijay and UV were best friends. I want more ManVeer scenes though!😉😆
Update soon yaar.

Love,
Piggies🐷
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: showstealer

that was an superb update thanx for the double update really loved it


Thank you soo much!! 😳Happy you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

gotta love it, awesome updates!


Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ab edit kaun karega? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

wooww,it was amzingg,wnted to read on and on!!!!!!!! m jealousy is a treat to watch!!!!!!!!! ranvijay and meera sounds vryy intrstngg,and manveer to always rockss!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Awww!! 😳 Thanks soo much! Means so much to me that you enjoyed not only ManVeer scenes but Meera Ranvijay as well! 😃

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