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Posted: 13 years ago
Do you even know how...Gosh! Look what you just did to me!! I'm short of words..! Like freaking seriously, NOTHING I say can explain even a fraction of the impact this update had on me..! I FELT for them Ranjana, each one of them..! This update just gave a new diamension to my perception of the characters.! Its the very first chapter that Meera got introduced in and I already feel so deeply for her! I have seriously never read anything better than the way you write! Each and every chapter seems so effortless..u really really have so much in you to be a brilliant story-teller!!
I have seriously never in my wildest dreams imagined Uday and Ranvijay could be best friends. That was such an interesting twist! Fallen Angel is seriously, one of the very few reasons I visit this forum for!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx


Fia I totally saw this coming! πŸ˜† No for some reason I knew that whether anyone else likes it or not this is for sure gonna be Fia's most favourite chapter so far! πŸ˜†
First of all let me just say that I've read your comment over and over adn still dont get tired. Really it brings such a smile on my face! Makes me wanna cry out in happiness pretty much! And the second reason is that honestly, so many times your comments help me out so much, give me not only inspiration to write but fresh new ideas that I never even thought of that click in my head thanks to you! Like this part you wrote:
Meera sounds so much like Manyata, maybe that's why Ranvijay fell in love with Manyata. Maybe she reminds him of Meera and somewhere in his heart he regrets what he did to Meera and was trying to make it right by hoping to be with Manyata. Did I make any sense at all?
Those lines right there solved my problem. 😳 To be honest, and you caught right, this whole three best friends thing was a recent development in my head and I didnt even get to sit and figure out how I am goign to tie so many loose ends together, but this line just made me go like 😲! BINGO!

Awww man, you love Meera so much! 😳 Now comes the explaining part...remember when I told you that Meera originated from you? I dont know if you saw it yet, actually you will probabaly see more clearly in the next updates but basically Meera is going to be the living example of why love is not something to be depressed about, but happy. Remember when you said that all three of them only have seen the pain side of it. Well, Meera is gonna be changing that! And all that came only from you! Your comments give me so much to think about! πŸ˜ƒ

Uday is wearing a black vest. Seriously Ranju, you won't even let the poor guy wear a vest of a different color would you? πŸ˜› . Lol.

🀣 OH man! Even I didnt realize this! Hahha..seems like not only my conscious mind but my subconscious mind is also obsessed with UV in black! 🀣 And come on, I don't hear anyone complaining...man if it was up to me I would change UV's wardrobe overnight and get all his shirts coloured black πŸ˜†...I dont know man, theres something about that colour on him...goes well with his complection, makes his hair look sexier, makes his abs look sexier, make his face look sexier... 😍 O man, I'm such a wierdo. 😳

I am so glad that you liked the whole pool side scene! 😳

The whole time I was reading the paragraph above, I kept on thinking that this is so YOU Ranjana!

I knew you would catch me! 😳 Basically Fi, I wrote this after I was missing him too much and after spending like 3 hours watching just UV vms... And I knew for sure that anyone who reads this paragaraph and is a UV fan can totally relate to everythgin I wrote. Pretty much I analyzed myself to see why the hell do I love this guy THAT much. If it was just looks than I'd be fainting all over the place after seeing Sahil shirtless...but no. It's Uday and just Uday - Sahil is cute - but Uday..Uday is pure sexiness. And its NOT the looks. Its the persona! πŸ˜‰ And the irony of the whoel situation..i mean the Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh falling for Chawl kumari! And the depth of that love... 😲. Jeez, here I go again! πŸ˜† Sorry man, cant control myself when it comes to Uday.

Manyata was smiling a little too much.

Fia what did I tell you? Number one sign of falling in love - excessive random smiling for no apparent reason. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† But okay I know it make her seem all goofy πŸ˜† will have to control her for the next chap!

No not that threesome you dirty brain πŸ˜› . Hahaha. Although I wouldn't mind reading one between them πŸ˜‰ . Hahahahaha πŸ˜†

Fia you bad girl! 😲 And omg..okay bad mental pictures. 😳

Fia man what would do without you!? 😲 You've buttered me up to teh extent that I think about you and whether you will like it or not before writing every line! πŸ˜† And man you never disappoint me - you ALWAYS point out exactly the parts I want soemone to tell me that made them smile, that made them laugh.. Its so satisfying as a writer to know that your writing has its desired effect! 😳 Thank you man..thank you so much! πŸ€— I dont even think there would be much point writing all those lines if I didnt have you to tell me how they made you feel or what you liked or didnt like. It makes the hard work soo worth it! 😳

Here I was hoping for Meera and Uday to become a couple and you just flooded my hopes by making Uday say that she reminds him of his sister *major facepalm* πŸ˜† . Why isn't there any romantic involvement between them even in the flashbacks πŸ˜’ . Holy shit I sound so desperate.


And that right there my dear is the reason why I had to include that specific line! I kenw in my mind, haaha Fia is gonna kill me! πŸ˜† But okay think about it..Meera is sooo lovable, anyone including UV could fall in love with her easily and to be honest he already does love her..but then this is Fallen Angel, a ManVeer SS, so had to add the sisterly twist πŸ˜† Otherwise you also think about it..Uday would have fallen for Meera..shes too amazing

You know something just hit me right now 😲. Dude I just realized that Meera is like the mix of both of us! 😲 Shes got that mischievous, straight-up-in-your-face, and naughty side πŸ˜‰ and that dreamy, lovey-dovey, head-stuck-in-the-clouds side too! 😲

Haina humari perfect mix? πŸ˜‰ No wonder shes so perfect! πŸ˜†


This has got to be like the best confession ever. Meera is hilariously cute 🀣 . Mission Get-Over-Ranvijay. Seriously Ranju, how do you get such innovative ideas πŸ˜†

Like you said, I tried to make their scenes refreshing so obviously couldnt get away with a typical cnfession now could I? πŸ˜‰ To be honest, I have two sides to me when I write..one side where I have the scenes planned out in my head from the beginning, then the second side in which I just sit and type and some of the most amazing ideas just enter my head and that was the case for this Mission Get-Over-Ranvijay! It just hit me and trust me when I strated with that library scene I had no idea how things were gonna go on after that, but I guess they went well. 😳

I loved how the first person that she counts on in times of a problem is Uday. And Uday cares about her so much that he was ready to break his friendship with his best friend. Especially his restlessness at finding Meera in that condition, all broken and shattered. I love the bond that Meera shares with both the guys. It's so genuine.

Oh man..you really love UV-Meera dont you? Well I already have a scene or two planned for them in the next chap which Im sure you'll adore. But its obvious to me after reading your comments that Manyatas gonna have to step up her game! πŸ˜†

"People who look like they have everything often have the deepest of sorrows buried in their heart"

This line was bang on sister πŸ‘πŸΌ . So nicely put and again, so so true. Why do you write such beautiful stuff Ranju? 😳


I write such beautiful stuff Fifu because I know that I have some beautiful readers who understand the depth and soul beneath each line. 😳 Otherwise why would I spend so much writing, rewriting these kinda lines, which trust me arent effortless for me or something. 😊

Mission Get-Over-Manyata?

See what I mean about getting so many ideas just from reading your comment! πŸ˜† I may go that way. Who knows man..I dont. πŸ˜† I just sit and stare at my screen and meditate and wait for that inspiration to come! πŸ˜†

For right now - I'm working on developing a master plan...UVs master plan 😈. you know how you said you wanna see a bit more of bad boy UV! Well thats exactly my point..missing my badass Uday so yes of course im gonna give him a dose of evil once more! 😊

OKay now my reply is getting too long! πŸ˜† Alright have to go read your epi and comment on that too!

Love ya! πŸ€—





Hahahahaha well it's your fault for making such brilliant characters like Ranvijay and Meera and literally getting me so hooked to them πŸ˜‰ . You know I actually kind of did drop a hint for you because I didn't know how you had planned on making Ranvijay falling in love with Meera when currently he loves Manyata. So for me this theory was the perfect reasoning since Ranvijay has to realize at some point that Manyata was never his true love, she was basically just Meera's reflection for him, and at that point he will realize who her true love and soul mate really is (I am still cheering for Uday and Meera by the way 😳)
Yes I remember, and I noticed that after reading both the chapters. Because Meera, as I said earlier, is like a breath of fresh air. And a person like her is much needed in the lives of Manyata Uday and Ranvijay to drag them back to the happiness in life. Aww I am so glad that my comments help you out 😊
Hahahahaha well I don't doubt that πŸ˜† . And it's not your fault, he really does look smoking hot in black ☺️
Exactly, I completely agree with you. It was his character more than looks that made us fall in love with him. Like the way he talks, walks, everything, and even his ability to love someone to SUCH an extent. All these factors made me fall in love with Uday.
Lmao yes I remember that πŸ˜† . But she is already in love with him πŸ˜‰
Awww you're always welcome Ranju πŸ€— . But honestly speaking, you deserve it. If your writing wasn't that good, you wouldn't have earned all this appreciation. So all this is worth it only and only because YOU make it worth it πŸ˜ƒ
I know it's a ManVeer SS but come one, Meera is AWESOME! And I would have loved it if DEK had someone like Meera as their lead character. Lmao you know what I just noticed that too. And if I am not wrong, I am the mischievous, staright-up-on-your-face and naughty side of her whereas you are the dreamy, lovey dovey, head-stuck-in-the-clouds side right? πŸ˜† . Hahahaha true that, she really is perfect then! πŸ˜‰
I have those two sides too. And I actually love the other side more where without any proper planning, some really amazing ideas just hit your head and you keep typing and typing.
Yes I really love Uday-Meera even though I know I can never get to see them as a couple . Honestly speaking, I never liked Manyata's character. It was never too appealing for me. Yes it was interesting in a way, but the thing is, the only thing that attracted people towards her was her I-don't-care-a-damn attitude towards Uday. Otherwise if you think about it, there wasn't anything special about her character. The only reason I used to watch her was because our dear Prince fell in love with her and she happened to be the female lead so I didn't have a choice πŸ˜† . And even Priyal as an actress never impressed me. The only thing different in Manyata's character was her swearing and cursing at Uday. THAT IS IT! But if you look at Meera, she has everything. Yes she is like Manyata in a way, but she is SO much better. Even she didn't give two hoots about Ranvijay or Uday being the hottest dudes in her university but she still had that appeal to her attitude that made both the guys admire her and consider her to be a friend which they don't ever do with girls. She has this spark that I never found in Manyata. And imagining Mouni as Meera makes it all the more better. I don't know if someone else feels this way but for me, Manyata never deserved Uday. Simple because the only reason she accepted him in the first place was when her ex rejected and betrayed her (in the show) . Anyway I could go on and on about why I don't like Manyata and why I love Meera but you must be getting bored πŸ˜† . I just feel that Uday deserved a girl like Meera 😳 . Gosh Ranjana how the hell did you come up with such brilliant characters. First Ranvijay, now Meera. Man you are brilliant πŸ‘πŸ‘
Hahaha you know I have more ideas about Mission Get-Over-Manyata πŸ˜‰
Omg really?? Eeep I can't wait for the bad boy Uday to come back in action. It's going to be epic πŸ˜ƒ
You better update soon because I am seriously really really excited about the future track. And I really want more flashback scenes on the Awesome Threesome 😳
Love you baby! πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
the was super loved both of the parts so thats y uday and ranvijay are enemy really loved it especially where u showed how uday meera and ranvijay chemistry was please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome
wonderful
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stupendous
impressive
brilliant
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please update soon and please can we have more manveer next time please πŸ˜ƒ u arer an amazing writer and thanks for the double update


Oh Vampy!! ☺️ Thank you sooo mucchh!!
Love you girl! You're like my motivation to write caz like I know that with you here I can never get off track! πŸ˜‰ Love ya soo much!! πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

i just loved it agla jaldi update karna plz...


Thank you!! Will trryy my best to update soon! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Gowri05

Yikes!!!!!! ritvik dhanjani!!!!!!!

One damn good choice!!!!!!
Meera and ranvijay!!!!!!
Mouni and ritvik!!!!!
Just awesome!!!!!
Poor poor poor manyata so much in turmoil!!!!
And uday!!!! awww!!! I feel sad for both of them!!!!
Bechari meera!!!! but I hats off to her!!!! she openly accepted that though ranvijay has so many flaws she loves him and never expect him to change.
But this ranvijay fell for manyata !!!!!I mean seriously!!!!! start a mission get over manyata and let meera help ranvijay!!!!! maybe then he will fall for her!!!! but seriously how could this openly reject such a girl who kind a bit like manyata, full of life outgoing etc etc also she is even more sexier than manyata!!! I mean seriously!!!! was he blind in his college days???? and now when his eyes opened he fell for manyata!!!! hmmm I am feeling this guys screww is so loose that it fell and got lost and is not able to find it again!!!!!

Ok enough of this frustration!!!!!!! but seriously, wat an update!!!!!!! lovely!!! perfect!!!
Oh forgot to tell!!! I am liking this meera ranvijay love story better!! :P lol!


You knwo something Gowri? You're really smart! πŸ‘πŸΌ You pretty much just solved my problems! Perfect idea man - RV fell for the Meera in Manyata! 😍 (I hadnt thought much about anything yet.)
Am soo glad you like Mouni Rithvick pair and you enjoyed adn at least were not bored with the awesome threesome! πŸ˜‰
Thank you soo muchh man! Your comment is really so encouraging! πŸ˜ƒ And also dont worry about ManVeer..who cares man when they got each other adn they both love each other extremely! 😳
LOL ur liking Meera RV too much..that means gonna have to add some big dhamakas in ManVeer's love story to spice things up! πŸ˜‰
I guess Ive worked so hard on Meera and RV that I have to shift my focus on ManVeer too although you and I know that their jodi is still and always that ever fresh, evergreen jodi! 😳
Love yaaa!!! πŸ€—

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahnoor2468

*STANDING OVATION i mean utterly butterly amazing 😳 please sweetheart give us a proper dat when u will update the next part because im sensing a lot of manveer,jealousy and stuff :)


Awww!! ☺️ Your literally making me bush now!
Thank you so much I am sooo happy that you liked these two chaps as it was me starting something new! 😊 Will try to update soon adn yes I promise next chap is gonna have some ManVeer dhamaka! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678


i still find manveer much much better and meera is so much like manyata that is why ranvijay fell for manyata


Oh Vampy!! ManVeer ko leke kitni defensive ho jaati ho! πŸ˜† Man your so cute! πŸ˜† And dont get hyper, I know for a fact that Gowri LOVESS ManVeer's jodi!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

the plot is getting really intersting now.. so finally ranvijay gets a girl...
and please teach uday to trust manyata...
manyata knows uday has slept with so many women n still she loves him unconditionally ...
and trusts him so much..

but uday saw her too close to ranvijay n he loses his trust on her and hurts her again n again...
high time uday learns to trust manyata...
he is very lucky to get such an innocent girl... its time he trusts her...
coz love without trust is literally nothing...
may be this meera can play a cupid for manveer...
and manyata can play d cupid for ranvijay and meera...
dono perfect couples ho jaayenge..πŸ˜ƒ


Dear, UV trusting Manyata will be the next step in theri relationship! I promise, he will learn. You know its not even that much a trust thing - its just that our UV is so possesive when it comes to Manyata that seeing her with anyone just infuriates the angry young man in him which im sorry but I love too much! 😳 πŸ˜† But still, he wil trust his Princess..he doesnt have another choice!

Liking the whole cupid idea! πŸ‘πŸΌ Thanks for suggesting. πŸ˜ƒ I actually have to sit for a while and figure out properly what I am going to do next! 😳

Anywyas thank you again and do keep supporting me and this SS! πŸ€—

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

i agree with you completely uday has to trust manyata because she loves him in all ways so he also has to trust her


Dont worry girls..Its coming!! πŸ˜† Be patient and also try to see the love underneath UV's distrust/jealousy/possesiveness. πŸ˜‰

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