ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: thejazzgal
Awesome Update Ranjana

Loved ManVeer small scene..

awww.. cute FB's
love the Trio UV-Meera-RV
loved both the chapters

loved UV-RV bonding <3
its time M to play a cupid for RV & meera..
and also to unite two best friends... RV-UV

do cont sooonn
m waiting
muuuahhh <3

Thank you Jazzyy!! 😳 (do tell me the name you want me to call you by unless you want me to continue adressing you by that name 😆)

I'm so happy you enojyed these chaps and hmm...Manyata playing cupid 🤔

Soemthign like that 😆 I dont even knwo yet! God I am so messed up adn all over the place.

Okay will try to continue soon adn thansk again!! 🤗

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Amazing Part Rajana I'm sorry I'm late in commenting very bad of me
Finally Ranvijay has Meera all they need to is confess so thats Ranvijay sorted... its good you included Uday, Ranvijay and Meera friendship story makes more sense... next update will Manveer scene looking forward to the next part

Ritwick is play Ranvijay and in my ff he play Rajbir😆

Cont Soon

Thanks Mummy!! 🤗

Can breath a sigh of relief now that I got your approval! 😆

ahha thats funnyy...I actually find Ritvick pretty cute 😳 like watchign him in Jhalak 😉

Will try to updaet soon adn not be lazy although trust me Im not being lazy I just have to go to work everyday!

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: Grenade
Do you even know how...Gosh! Look what you just did to me!! I'm short of words..! Like freaking seriously, NOTHING I say can explain even a fraction of the impact this update had on me..! I FELT for them Ranjana, each one of them..! This update just gave a new diamension to my perception of the characters.! Its the very first chapter that Meera got introduced in and I already feel so deeply for her! I have seriously never read anything better than the way you write! Each and every chapter seems so effortless..u really really have so much in you to be a brilliant story-teller!!
I have seriously never in my wildest dreams imagined Uday and Ranvijay could be best friends. That was such an interesting twist! Fallen Angel is seriously, one of the very few reasons I visit this forum for!

Gosh Payal ☺️...lol okay I give up of thinking of ways to say thanks to you. 😆

You are just tooo sweettt 🤗

Love ya sooo much, not because you flatter me so much but because I know you got a busy schedule but you always make time to read and leave your beautiful comments!

Well if Fallen Angel gives you a reason to visit the forum, then your comments give me a reason to continue writing! 😳

PS: I am so happy that you are also a Meera fan. 😉

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: preya_radev
the was super loved both of the parts so thats y uday and ranvijay are enemy really loved it especially where u showed how uday meera and ranvijay chemistry was please update soon and thanks for the pm

Thank you thank you soo much!! 😳

So glad you enjoyed these chaps and yes I will try my best to udpate soon!! 😃

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

hey even i love the angry young uday... i mean who doesnt😳😳
yes i can see the love and possessiveness behind the love but somewhere i want him to trust her as well.. coz i find her innocent n sweet...

i like the way u r showing manyata... in the show they butchered manyata's char so much... making her runaway from d mandap... wat not.. getting engaged to uday n hugging akash on the same day.. nightmares for d audience 😭 the show wala manyata was sometimes unbearable... forget the looks n uday being hot sexy etc😳😳 but which girl wouldn't love a guy who has changed himself completely bcooz of her and for her... (even in real life girls r not that stubborn n selfish).. even if they had been in love with someone, they'll change... yes even in d show they showed dat she has changed but it was in a rushed manner... err i will never stop complaining abt dek.. forget that now i'll come back to ur story

its nice that she has fallen for uday n wants to show her love as well... u had quoted "uday had to face her anger till now n from now on he will have to face her love" not sure of the exact words.. but something similar to the line...

cant wait fot the next chapter... i am liking meera and ranvijay as well... wow man your story has so many intersting and lovable characters 👏

pls update soon😃

Awww Im so happy you like the Manyata in this SS

I will admit she is different from in teh show as in this FF not only is she affected by UVs charm but I guess her love is more innocent because UVs her first love as Akash never existed in her life. 😊

Really your totally inflating my ego now 😆 but thank you sooo much! 🤗

PS: UV will learn to trust Manyata very soon and I definitely see where you're coming from!

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: Piggies
LOVE LOVE LOVE the double update Rans!
It was simply awesome. I read it the day you update but was too lazy to comment.😳
I thought about Mouni Roy as Meera too and I KNEW IT! Ranvijay and UV were best friends. I want more ManVeer scenes though!😉😆
Update soon yaar.

Love,
Piggies🐷

Thank you Izzyy!!! 🤗

Well you commented now so you're forgiven! 😆

Also dont worry, next udpaet will have a lot of ManVeer in it, I promise! 😃

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: a.anu
hey when will u update?

Can't say. I feel very exhausted nowadays because of working But I am going to try my best to update as soon as I can get time this week. Cant promise anything this time though. 😔

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saneha85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Hey ranjana,

This is my first comment to ur ff and i read ur ff in one goo... i liked to much and ur amazing because u did not twisted the love tringle to much while i was reading i tought u will make RV as negative chra... but thank god u did not do it.. thanks a tan for the same

and m loving every chart an ur ff but piz make vijay bhai bit responsible..

and i wanna ask u one thing...

that how UV get to know about her visit to RV place on their confesstion day... i think u did not mention it.

and lastly... great m waiting for ur update...

abd this for u 👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏

five star for ur amaging work

love u gal