ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 78

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awesome updates ranjana !!

rithvik as ranvijay good..

I was actually njoying the trio...loved UV n RV bonding hmm UV considered meera as choti :P
Soo now manyata will the cupid between RV n meera and a good heart angel to unite friend together
loved it :D
Cont soon :)

Awesome ranjana! Double bonanza!! Absolutely brillaint! I loved the flashback and the buildup of UV-RV-meera story. Both the chapters were superb and loved the male bond between UV-RV

Great updates!! Loved it

👏👏thanks...awesome...fabulous...👏👏

This double was simply MINDBLOWING Ranjana!! I really loved both of them! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D

Awesome Update Ranjana

Originally posted by: sonam2801

Fantastic update.👏 👏 👏

I loved it.👍🏼

Thanks for the beautiful update & PM.😛

Do continue ASAP.😊

🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Marie_789

Wow really nice update. So Ranvijay and Meera sounds interesting.

Originally posted by: fia21

Omg omg omg omg omg omg *majorly hyperventilating*
Please give me a moment to digest the fact that I juts read the two most amazing chapters in the history of FFs and SSs 👏👏
And you stupid stupid girl.Why did you exhaust yourself with two chapters? 😲 . I won't lie, I absolutely loved reading two amazing chapters in a row, but I didn't want you to do it out of guilt over something so petty 😕 . Anyway I love you so freaking much for that 🤗
I think I am going to be doing a lot of omg-ing today 😆 . But seriously Ranju OMG for Meera! Man I love her. Honestly speaking, I am really impressed at the way you have introduced the most brilliant and interesting characters in this SS. First Ranvijay, and now Meera. W-O-W! Hats off to you girl. While I was reading this, a part of me kept on yelling that "Kash yeh Uday ki Meera hoti" 😳 . Lol. I know people would want to kill me for saying this 😆 . Lol, but I don't care . Because Meera is like seriously the prefect girl for any guy and the kind of bond that she shares with Uday is so pure and out of this world. And imagining Mouni as Meera just doubles the fun. But then again, I love Ranvijay too, so wouldn't mind her romancing him either 😉
Mouni as Meera + Rithvik as Ranvijay = Hotness Personified 😍
Although yes I still want her to be with Uday 😈 . Hahahahahaha 🤣 . I have loads more to say about Meera but I shall do that at the end of the comment.

CHAPTER 18

Manyata's restlessness on not seeing Uday is honestly a treat. But I want Uday to tarpaofy her a little more 😈 . I want her to want him BAD 😉 . Lol.

Until now Udayveer had only had to face Manyata's anger. Now he would have to face her love.

Wow can't wait to see that one playing out. I wonder how she'd do that. I really loved the entire pool side scene. It was so utterly romantic 😳 . And Uday is wearing a black vest. Seriously Ranju, you won't even let the poor guy wear a vest of a different color would you? 😛 . Lol.

Uday felt a head rest on his back and a pair of beautiful hands crawl onto his chest as their owner hugged him from behind. He felt pleasantly shocked and a genuine smile played on his face as he could recognize that touch anywhere.

This was SO BEAUTIFUL 😍 . You know I have always wanted to see a scene like that in the show too. And thank God I have your SS to quench my thirst for that. You know I am not really a romantic person or a fan of lovey dovey mushy stuff, but whenever it comes to ManVeer or DEK, they automatically become an exception. Sigh. Then the entire promo scene was again really nice. I already commented on that earlier but I shall write it again anyway. She's ready to accept Uday in any form, even his anger makes her admire him. She can read his eyes and understand him even without any words spoken between them. And her love for him has grown to such an extent that she's ready to burn away in it. In just 9 lines, you summed up her feelings and the intensity of her love for him so perfectly.

Manyata continued to stare at Uday and this time her eyes reflected pure devotion. He was her Prince and she couldn't get enough of him! Surrounded by him, her mind drifted to that delicious hot smirk. His persona, that mystic aura that surrounded him. That air of confidence that never left him making it seems like he always knew what to do, how to act. The sexy, cunning, and calculative Prince with looks to die for, and the attitude that made people go weak in their knees. But under all those intriguing layers was an Udayveer with a heart of gold. Who cared and loved his Princess and only his Princess, with an unmatched passion, a love so extreme whose depth was impossible to measure. She loved both his sides Manyata realized. The evil arrogant one and the pure loving one. She felt like she could never get tired of looking at him.

The whole time I was reading the paragraph above, I kept on thinking that this is so YOU Ranjana! And then I recalled your words on how you said that the next update would have Manyata's words but your feelings for Uday. Seriously you are so adorable. And you know, that is exactly the way I feel about him. But you summed up his character so beautifully in words that I think I just fell in love with Uday all over again. The whole making-a-wish scene was really cute. Manyata was smiling a little too much 😛 . Lol. And then enters Meera. Omg omg omg I was so happy to finally get to read about her. Aaahh. And I must admit, I did not expect her to be best friends with Uday. You know a part of me always wanted Meera and Uday to be friends the moment you mentioned a girl for Ranvijay, but I was seriously ecstatic to find out that Uday and Meera are old buddies 😃 . And he hugged her. Awww so cute 😳

A smirk that should on be reserved for me! Manyata thought angrily. She was further dismayed and shocked as Uday and Meera finally hugged each other. They can hug in a friendly way too! No need to try to suffocate each other!

To say that Manyata was burning with jealousy might be an understatement 😉 . Lol. But seriously I couldn't help but laugh at that. She was so hilarious here 😆 . I simply LOVED the entire conversation between Uday and Meera. It was fantastic. I could see them go on and on forever and still not get bored 😳 . And then Meera's excitement on finding out that the girl standing before her was Princess Manyata was so adorable. Seriously she's so cute. Then comes my favorite twist. Uday and Ranvijay used to be best friends 😲 . I must say that was a shocking new revelation. Although I did feel they could become good friends since they are both exactly alike, and their hatred definitely had a back story to it (which maybe you yourself only just figured out after thinking of introducing Meera 😆)

The entire flashback scene from 5 years ago was fan-flipping-tastic 👍🏼 . Loved it to bits. Their bickering was so cute and refreshing. Ranvijay and Uday calling Meera as Myra and Maya was hilarious 😆 . This trio is truly awesome! Some of the one-liners by Ranvijay totally cracked me up. I can't even chose my favorite parts from it because it was just so perfect and interesting, but I am still going to list some anyway.

"This one's a first... Usually girls would die to be in our group. Evidently this Myra already has a boyfriend or she's lesbian for sure," Ranvijay said to Uday who laughed.

"Yea but even if she did have a boyfriend, I'm pretty sure she would be rethinking him now...I'm gonna go with option B," Uday said thoughtfully.

"Oi! Tum toh naraaz ho gayi! Hum dono toh yuhin mazaak kar rahe the. Asal mein toh hum dono bohat shareef larkein hai!" Ranvijay said smirking at Uday.

"I was just going to say, look at the bright side, at least you're locked in with two hot guys..." Ranvijay announced. 🤣🤣

"What girls wouldn't give to be in your place!" Uday added.

"So sweetheart, you're gonna be spending the night with us. Lucky you!" Ranvijay said and put his arm around Meera's shoulder.

"Hey Meera..I'm bored. Wanna do something more fun?" Ranvijay asked mischievously and received the dirtiest look Meera could muster.

"Yeah stop otherwise I'll have to use my foolproof method of shutting girls up!" Ranvijay said and raised his eyebrows up and down at her.

"Hassi toh phassi!" Ranvijay said and by now Meera had started to giggle out loud.

Ranvijay was a ROCKSTAR in this part. He cracked me up big time 🤣 . And I loved the last part of the flashback so much where both Ranvijay and Uday are trying to console Meera. It was so adorable. Uday + Meera + Ranvijay = Awesome Threesome! No not that threesome you dirty brain 😛 . Hahaha. Although I wouldn't mind reading one between them 😉 . Hahahahaha 😆

CHAPTER 19

Friendship occupies your mind. Love occupies your soul.

This was so utterly beautiful. I seriously love it when you write such stuff because it always feels so true. And this sort of describes the relationships that Uday-Manyata-Ranvijay-Meera share with each other, one way or another. The Uday-Meera scene in the beginning was again really awesome. I could read about these two forever. Seriously. Not kidding. I love the way Meera understands Uday, and love it even more on how Uday is so comfortable in sharing everything with her.

"Yeah, right. Okay what if we stop analyzing my life and talk about yours for a change. Why the hell are you still single? I mean the only guy who doesn't hit on you is probably me and that too only because you remind me too much of my Choti," Uday admitted.

Here I was hoping for Meera and Uday to become a couple and you just flooded my hopes by making Uday say that she reminds him of his sister *major facepalm* 😆 . Why isn't there any romantic involvement between them even in the flashbacks 😒 . Holy shit I sound so desperate 🤣

"Guys, I fell in love with my best friend. How cliched?" Meera confessed.

Udayveer and Ranvijay looked at each other with wide toothy grins.

"Which one?" They both asked together.

Meera put her elbow on the table and rested her face in her hands and looked right at Ranvijay.

"You," Meera said regretfully.

This has got to be like the best confession ever. Meera is hilariously cute 🤣 . Mission Get-Over-Ranvijay. Seriously Ranju, how do you get such innovative ideas 😆

"Wait what? So Meera fell in love with Ranvijay? And Uday and Ranvijay were going to help Meera get over Ranvijay because he's a jerkface and Ranvijay doesn't want to break Meera's heart and Meera doesn't want to get her heart broken and because Uday also doesn't want to see Meera heart-broken?"

I burst out laughing when Manyata said that 🤣

"Alright first we have to figure out the root of the problem. So tell me Meera, why do exactly do you love me? Besides the obvious of course..." Ranvjay declared.

"The obvious?" Meera raised an eyebrow.

"The obvious being that I'm sexy, hot and attractive..."

"Meera what the hell man! If you're gonna keep talking in riddles how am I supposed to believe that your love for me is true!" Ranvijay whined.

"She's not trying to prove her true love to you! We're getting majorly sidetracked here!" Uday interrupted.

Hahahahahahahahah 🤣🤣🤣 . Holy freaking crap this was just superb. Especially this lat line of Uday, gosh I laughed so much at that 😆 . Oh man I love these 3 idiots 😛 . Lol.

"You really dreamed twice about kissing me?"

Ranvijay is freaking hilarious. After hearing such a long speech of Meera, all he caught was the part where she said that she dreamed about kissing him twice. Lmfao 🤣 . Ranvijay showing demonstrating his jerkface acts infront of Meera was again such a hilarious scene. Hahaha 😆 . Omg I so knew Meera and Ranvijay would have ended up sleeping together. Awww poor Meera. Felt so bad for her. But loved that entire scene 😉 . I loved how the first person that she counts on in times of a problem is Uday. And Uday cares about her so much that he was ready to break his friendship with his best friend. Especially his restlessness at finding Meera in that condition, all broken and shattered. I love the bond that Meera shares with both the guys. It's so genuine.

"People who look like they have everything often have the deepest of sorrows buried in their heart"

This line was bang on sister 👍🏼 . So nicely put and again, so so true. Why do you write such beautiful stuff Ranju? 😳

Fantastic update baby. Really it was marvelous. Meera is like a breath of fresh air. I loved all the flashbacks of her with Ranvijay and Uday and wouldn't mind reading more. I actually really want to read more 😃 . Meera sounds so much like Manyata, maybe that's why Ranvijay fell in love with Manyata. Maybe she reminds him of Meera and somewhere in his heart he regrets what he did to Meera and was trying to make it right by hoping to be with Manyata. Did I make any sense at all? 🤔 . I am beginning to like Meera way more than Manyata 😳 . Especially because I keep on imagining Mouni as her face in the scenes. But keeping all that aside, Meera is fantastic and I would love to see her love story with Ranvijay and how she helps him get over Manyata. They should go for another mission like the previous one. Mission Get-Over-Manyata 😆 . Lol. Once again amazing job. There is so much more that I want to say but I am running out of time. And you might be bored and freaked out by the size of this thing already so I should just stop here 😆 . Thank you so much for giving me two awesome updates. Love you 🤗

Amazing Part Rajana I'm sorry I'm late in commenting very bad of me