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@ Kesarmania

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Awesome update, please continue :) Lovedd it :D
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really nyc...hope to read next part also...n hope to see da manveer romance...
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thanks and ya there will b a lot of manveer scenes in future updates
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Part 7

Uday n Manyata reached Mahal.The whole Mahal was being decorated for the reception...Manyata n Uday met Brijraj n Giriraj at entrance who were super exited to see M and Uday happy...

Brijraj:Aakir aap dono ki dosti ho hi gayi...good...

Giriraj gave smirk to Uday...n asked Manyata beta tho kaise rahi aapki shopping...

Manyata:bahut acchi uncle...

Brijraj:Today is great day for u ma daughter. ...Be ready for all ur challenges n ya Uday will a great help for u in handling riyasat efficiently...U have a lot to learn from Uday...

Manyata:jee dad...

Brijraj was really happy in hearing the word dad from Manyata...he blessed her n hugged..Meanwhile komal came

Komal:Uday Manyata aap dono aa gayi...aap dono jaakar thaiyyar ho jayiye...Der nahi honi chahiye...

Manyata:jee maa...

Saying this Uday n M went to their room...While going Uday told manyata princess aap ko yaad hain na...aaj ke reception mein aap humari di hui dress pehanungi...Manyata nodded n went to her room...

After half an hour Uday gor ready n came to check if Manyata is ready...he entered without knocking...Manyata was trying to wear the diamond set gifted by him...Uday came close to her n asked may i help...

Manyata :tu yahaan!!! besharam tu knock karke nahi aa sakti...

Uday(smirking):Ab bhak bhak karna bandh karo princess.Neeche sare guest aa chuki hain.Let me help u...

And he helped Manyata in wearing the necklace...In the act his cold hands touched her open back,and as usual butterflies started moving inside her stomach.She couldn't control her mind which was waiting for Uday's mere touch..Her heart started beating heavily.She leaned more towards his chest...Both shared a eye lock which was broken by a servant(kabab mein haddi) announcing that DS is waiting for them.

Uday:Ab chale princess.And by the way u r looking hot princess n he handed over a red rose to her..Manyata smiled at Uday

As usual hand in hand they went downstairs.DS was proud to see M and Uday together...

All guests welcomed the new Yuvrani with claps n gifts...

Unnati:wow Manyata aap sach mein bahut cute lag rahi hoon iss dress mein...shayad ye dada ka choice hain na..

Manyata replied with a smile.and both Vijay n Unnati gave a confirmation smile to eachother

DS came to them

DS:Manyata beta aap bahut khoobsurat lag rahi hain...

Manyata:Thankyou dadisaab...

DS:chaliye beta hum aapko sabse milvathe hain...

And DS started introducing Manyata to special guests of the evening...But Manyata was half minded she was feeling lonely ...Her eyes were searching for Uday...Manyata made a excuse from DS and went in search of Uday...She almost reached near Uday that Brijraj called her since he wanted to introduce her to his friends...Manyata was desperate to meet Uday n she spoked

Manyata:Dad kya hum ab jaa sakti hain...

Brijraj:Kyun beta...

Manyata:woh humhe Uday se kuch kaam tha...

Brijraj n Giriraj gave a small smile n agreed...

Manyata (to herself ):ye halkat kahan chale gayi n went searching

Meanwhile Uday was talking to Rajkumari Meenakshi ...Manyata was more irritated now.She went directly to Uday n hold his Hand n told Meenakshi to excuse them..and took Uday to a corner

Manyata:main yahan tumhe doond rahi thi aur tum is stupid rajkumari ke saath baat kar rahi hoon...Tu kabhi nahi sudharoongi... n she left without a word...

Uday gave a smirk hmmm toh aap aaj kal humhe lekar kuch zyaada hi jealous ho rahi hain...

Music was being played nd all couples came to dance floor.Rajkumari Meenakshi asked Uday for a dance n inorder to make Manyata jealous he went for a dance with Meenakshi...Manyata was seeing all these n her eyes soon became filled with tears n left the place...Uday noticed nd felt guilty for tears in Manyata's eyes...He also soon went behind her...

Manyata was up in her room.Uday went to her...

she was standing near an open window...

Uday :princess...kya hua...

Manyata throwed a pillow at Uday ...Uday understood that he hurted his princess.

Uday:Princess yeh sab kuch chodo hum aapke liye kuch lekar aayi hoon.

Manyata:kya????????

he went near her turned her towards him n handed over a CD.

Manyata:yeh kya hain...

Uday:yaadein.Mmm philal hum neeche chalthe hain aur party ke baad hum ye dekhengi k

Manyata nodded and went down...She held Uday's hand n never left him alone.All guests noticed it ...

By 9 party was over n Manyata was anxious to watch the CD.Uday n Manyata went to her room...

Uday put on the CD...

It was the CD of Uday-Manyata Roka...Unlike usual she was exited to see the ceremony..Uday n Manyata sat on the bed and was about to watch that Unnati n Vjay entered..

Vijay:Ye kya kar rahi hoon aap dono bandh kamre mein...

Manyata:Vijay bhai Uday mujhe humdonon ki Roka waali CD gift kiya.wohi dekh rahi hoon...

Unnati:wow humne bhi aaj tak ye nahi dekha...Dada hamesha humse ye CD chupathi thi...

Vijay:Oh unnati hum aaj dekhenge k.

They also sat on the bed n all four started watching...

16yrs b4 a flashback

It was the day of Uday-Manyata roka ...

Komal was getting Manyata ready

Manyata:Mamma aaj kya ho rahi hain.guests kyun aaraha hain...

Komal:Aaj meri rani bitiya aur Uday ki roka hain...

Manyata:Roka ,woh kya hain

Komal:woh beta aap dono ek doosre ko ring pehnaungi...aur jab aap bade ho jaoongi to aap do ki shaadi karvayenga...

Manyata:woh kyun...

Uday n his mom entered

Uday's mom:woh isiliye kyunki aap dono acche dost hain na...Shaadi karke aap hamesha saath rahenge...

Manyata:sach mein

Uday's mom:haan beta..

Roka ceremony beginned and Uday n Manyata exchanged ring all were happy...

It was evening and both were feeling sleepy...Both went to Manyata's room...

Uday:Manyata dad ne kaha ki aaj se aap meri fiancee hain...

Manyata:woh kya hain?

Uday:Matlab jaise humari mom aur dad vaise hi hum dono...

Manyata:accha..teek hain.ab hum sothe hain..

Uday:Manyata tumhe pata hain humne dekha hain dad hamesha sone se pehle mamma ko kiss dethe hain...

Manyata:To hum bhi aaj se hamesha sone se pehle ek doosre ko kiss karongi...

Uday :teek hain

Uday kissed Manyata on her cheek and both slept...The whole four komal,Brij,Giriraj n his wife was seeing this they all burst in to laughter...

Present:

Vijay paused the CD.Unnati ,Vijay and Uday started laughting n Manyata was blushing now she didn't knew what to say...

Vijay:oho '.Tum chinda math karo behna Bade Udaybeer kiss karne mein maahir hain..Har raath nahin woh tumhe har pal kiss karenge hain na Uday...

Uday:ahem. haan ofcourse hum aapko shikayat ka moka nahidengi princess

Manyata was silent..

Manyata:ab bas bahut ho gayi..Baaki hum kal dekhenge...humhe sona hai

Udaybeer thought of teasing manyata...

Uday:to manyata aapko apki kiss dede abhi ya...

all started laughing n manyata gave a punch to udaybeer

To be continued...

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Edited by krishna1989 - 13 years ago
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Nice, liked it---😊
Thanku
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Gud wrk dear nd fb was chooo cute..
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Itz awesome dear ,,,,, awww manyata jealous
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww its reallly cute...awww...even manveer were cute n romantic in dere childhood...how cute...

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