Uday U r mine..FF (last part 44 pg 150 )

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INDEX

Part 1-pg 1
Part 2-pg 2
Part 3-pg 3
Part 4-pg 5
Part 5-pg 6
Part 6-pg 8
Part 7-pg 9
Part 8-pg 13
Part 9-pg 16
Part 10-pg 19
Part 11-pg 23
Part 12-pg 26
Part 13-pg 29
Part 14-pg 32
Part 15-pg 36
Part 16-pg 40
Part 17-pg 43
Part 18-pg 45
Part 19-pg 49
Part 20-pg 52
Part 21-pg 53
Part 22-pg 56
Part 23-pg 60
Part 24-pg 65
Part 25-pg 69
Part 26-pg 74
Part 27-pg 78
Part 28-pg 81
Part 29-pg 86
Part 30-pg 90
part 31-pg94
Part 32-pg 98
Part 33-pg 104
part 34-pg 109
PART 35 -pg 114

Part 36- pg119
Part 37- pg124
part 38-pg 129
part 39-pg 132







PART 1


She was lonely, irritated,angry and above all Hurted But y...She herself don't know.She tried to forget the whole events that occured a while ago ...She talked with Unnati n Vijay.She tried her level best to keep herself happy infact to pretent Happiness but all in vain...
Manyata (to herself) : Why why am i irritated .Afterall who is Uday a friend who helped me ..Whom i utilized many times for Akash...Monya b brave..Leave the matter..Let Uday flirt with anyone Y should ubother .I am Manyata Yuvrani of Devgarh...Uday ke alava bhi bohut saari log hain meri aas paas...But...still...
Meanwhile Jai came downstairs and told Komal that she arranged the room belonging to Yuvrani of devgarh for Manyata...

Manyata stood puzzled

Uday:Aunty Komal let Manyata sleep in her own Room ...Let her shift the room tomorrow.Ek baar rajyabhishek ho jaye tab kamra badal dena...philal jaise hain vaise hi rahne do...
J:( To her herself).This is what i wanted Uday...and gave a smirk to Tayisaa...

M: Nahi maa meh ussi kamre me saungi jo J ne thayyar karvaya..and gave a angry look to Uday...

Uday was puzzled

Komal: Teek hain beta jaissi aapki marzi...

j:(gave a sad look to thaisaa)...Teek hain jiji gud ni8

M:Gud ni8 J aur kamre thayyar karne ke liye Thankyou..

Uday was confused(to himself):what's Jai's plan...Woh M ke yuvrani waali kamre meim rahne ki baat sunkar kyun pareshan hui...Aakir kya chahti hain woh...Mujhe uss par nazar rakna hoga...Manyata ko mein kuch nahi hone doongi...

He went to M's room...which ws on the same floor as his...
Uday entered the room.M was in her ni8 dress.M was shy in being in front of Uday in night dress...It was evident in her face.

Uday: gave his usual smirk😉 n said Kya baat hain Princess aaj kal aap Night dress mein...

M: In angry kyun sirf teri Rajkumari Meenakshi hi Night dress pehen sakti kya.Tum hoti kaun hoon mujse sawal puchne wale...Aur Halkat vede.. kisi ke bhi kamre mein aane se pehle khatkhatana(knock) saroori hein...Ye teri Meenakshi ka kamra nahi jo tu bin bhulayi mehmaan banke aajaye..ye kamra mera hain...



Uday: Uffo princess Humare beech ye sab kuch kab ayi..Main toh jab chahe aapki kamre mein aa sakti hoon na Haan Nahi Toh😎

M: Tu jaa mein tujse baat nahi karna chahti..

M was about to move then Uday caught her hand


Uday: Kyun princess kya hua.Humne aisa kya kar diya ki aap itne naaraz...Accha kahin aapko Humari aur Rajkumari Meenakshi ki baat karne se bura toh nahi lagi..

M was silent...

Uday: Apko itni boora laga .kyun princess..Hum apke hain kaun😉

M:uhhh Mujhe kyun bura lage.. Tu Meenakshi se ya kisi aur akshi se jaakar baat kar.Mujhe koi pharak nahi padtha...Haan Nahi Toh...Ab tu mera haat chod

Uday:Itni jaldi kya hai princess.chalo hum apko humari aur Meenakshi ki pichle mulakat ki kisse sunathi hoon...

M:Mujhe nahi sunna.Mujhe neend aa rahi hain..Tu ja ...

Uday: Priness... ab itna bhi naaraz mat ho...sach to yah hain ki humhe naaraz hona chahiye..aapne humari baat nahi maani..

M:Maine kya kiya...

Uday: Humne aapko ek letter aur bouque bejkar kaha tha na ki humse aakar milne keliye.

M:Letter kaisa letter...Accha bachu galti tum kare aur yun bina baat pe humse naarazgi...Humhe koi chitti nahi mila samjhi...tu ja

Uday:(so i was ri8.J took it away)Nahi princess humne sachme ek chitti beja tha..

M:(Yawning): teek hain Udaybeer ab chod do.humhe sachmein neend aa rahi hain.kal baat karte hain...gud ni8

Uday: (to himself).Princess hum so nahi sakti.J ki dimaag mein kuch toh hain...Hum aapko kuch nahi hone doongi...Hume aapar nazar rakni hogi...Aapki safety hi humare liye sabkuch hain..

M:Udaybeer kahaan kho gayi

Uday:kuch nahi princess gud ni8

M:(Smiling).teek hain .ab kal koi bahana banakar der mat aana

Uday nodded


to b continued...Iam sorry guys .i know its not good.but felt writing...pls 4give if its blunder.Gud/Bad pls leave ur comment

precap: Men in darkness



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Should i continue guys/iam the worst writer over here
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and plz pm me when u cont
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PART 2

Uday soon left the room and Manyata who was too tired soon went asleep...There was storms ...
Uday somehow couldn't sleep inspite of being tired.He was worried for Manyata...A disturbed Uday went to Unnati's Room...
Unnati was sleeping...Hearing the knock she wake up n opened the door

Unnati: Dada aap yahan iss waqt ..Kya hua dada sab tik tho hain na...
Uday came inside the room

Uday:Pata nahi choti mujhe kuch darr lag raha hain

Unnati:Wait a second...Yuvraj Udaybeer Singh ko darr...U must b jocking dada..

Uday: Choti mazaaq nahi hain.Humhe sach mein kuch tiik nahi lag raha hain..Humhe Manyata ki chinda ho rahi hain..

Unnati:Ahem...to yeh baat hain..Dada aaj kal aap har waqt Manyata ke bare mein sochti rahti hoon.Humhe toh jealous ho rahi hain.Aaj kal aap humari bilkul dhyan nahi rakhti😉

Uday:Mazaaq chod do choti.

Unnati:Mazaaq nahi toh aur kya he yeh sab kuch dada..Aap ko pata bi hain ki waqt kya hua...Iss tharah aap raat ko humhe udhakar yeh keh rahi hain ki aapko M ki chinda ho rahi hain...every thing is alright dada.Sablog khush hain

Uday:sivay ek ki...

Unnati (puzzled):J...Oh dada aap chinda mat kijiye..sab kuch ache se hoga

Uday:Nahi choti J ki dimaag mein kuch toh chal rahi hain..Humhe darr hain kahin woh manyata ko chot to nahi pahunjaongi...Uski aankhom mein humhe itna evilness dekha ki hum batha nahi sakti..

Unnati: aap bephikar rahiye dada.Hum sab hain na Manyata ke saath...Unhe kuch nahi hoga... Aur... .Aapko iss waqt bed main hona chahiye ... kal ke din jhitna Manyata ke liye bada hai uthna hi aapkeliye..Aapki Maharani ki rajyabhishek hain kal...Aap befikar hoke aaram kijiye...

Uday:I just hope choti ki sab kuch teek ho...

Unnati:Agar kuch bhi teek nahi hua toh meri dada hain na teek karne keliye...Relax dada...gudni8...

Uday:teek hain choti gudni8 n thanks...

Unnati:U r welcome dada.

Uday came up to his room..And now he is relaxed after talking to his sister..and he soon felt asleep...

Meanwhile a man in black with a mask at his face was moving towards Manyata's room..Ussne dheere se khidki khola aur khamre ki andar ghussi...

Everything was still...He took a knife from his pocket and was about to use it at Manyata that suddenly a wind blown and a flowervase falled with a gr8 noice from the bedside table..Manyata got up in shock and was even more shocked to see a man with mask pointing a knife at her...Her sound was frozen...She couldn't move and didn't knew what to do...She at once dialed Uday 's no from her phone which was near her hand

Uday: Manyata is waqt.he picked the call

Manyata:(to distract the stranger)kaun ho tum...(Meanwhile Uday was hearing this) Aur mujhe kyun maarna chahti...yeh kehkar ussne ek pillow us stranger ki aur phenka...The knife got struck in the pillow..Just then manyata gave a push to stranger and tried to move out of the room...The man throwed manyata away that she had fallen now..Manyata was at ground now and her leg got hurted..She was crying...


Stranger:Shhh.
he raised the knife and was about to use it then Uday came in to the room and hold his hand..

Uday:Itni jaldi kya hain...

Stranger pushed Uday away and was about to escape...Uday caught him by his color and was about to remove the mask...Soon the men in mask attacked uday with knife..and gave a push to Uday..Uday was wounded and in that gap the man escaped.Uday was about to go behind him...Just then he was stopped by M's voice


Manyata:Uday...

Blood was dripping from his Hand...

TO B CONTINUED
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Precap: A worried M





Edited by krishna1989 - 13 years ago
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cool..😎...

i cnt wait for it...its full of action...🥱
pls continue soon
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Amazing!!! Eager to read more!! Continue soon!!:)
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amazing
poor uday got hurt oh... so sad
should cont sooon
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Great OS, desperately waiting for the next part😃
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OMG!!!
whats happening next??!!!
Don't Kill uday plz!!!!!!!!
Awesome OS!!!!!!!!!
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Hey nothing can happen to our prince charming...ya will update today evening...

Now our poor CV's r not showing off the heroism of our prince😭...The one showed was equal to waste i mean can u compare pakash n Uday fighting...Uday ki against fi8 karne keliye kuch to aukadh hona chahiye...so i thought i'll include it in my OS

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