manveer ff: you are mine[part 10 updated on pg 9]

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊😊😊hey guys after reading many ffs i got inspired to write one hope you all read it 😊.bonquets and brickbats are welcomed...
in this manyata and uday are studying in 10th and unnati in 8th. j has a private tutor and is in india while uday and unnati are in london. manyata writes an exam and wins a scholarship to london.
part 1;
in ds office
manyata-wohoo!! i did it ds![vase crashes] oops! i'm sorry
ds-its ok beta anyway congrats but i want to know something
m-tell me ds
ds-if you wanted to study in london you could have told me why did u write the exam beta?
m- i know ds that uwould do that but i wanted to earn my seat and prove everyone tha i am capable of doing anything
ds- wah manyata beta! i am proud of u and i must say that i am leaving devgadh in very capable hands
m-thank u ds can i go and pack my bags as the flight is tomorrow morning
ds- of course and another thing you may meet giriraj uncle's children there
m- i never knew that giriraj uncle had children who are they ds?
ds- yuvraj udayveer singh and rajkumari unnati,uday is of your age and i think that u may meet him and unnati is 2 yrs younger than u but very sweet and mature
m- ok ds [manyata exits the room]
she is walking to her room when she meets her dad brijraj
she takes his blessings
brij-kya hua beta
manyata- dad i topped the exam and got a scholarship to london
brij-thats wonderful beta congrats
[komal enters the room]
komal-what happened beta
brij- komal our daughter topped the exam which she wrote ang got a scholarship to london
komal- i knew u could do it so when are u to leave
m-maa i have to leave tomorrow early morning
omal-so soon
m-yes maa i will cum here only for some festivals and will stay there till i complete college
brij-dont worry komal wahan mera future damaad bhi padtha hai
komal-oh haan
manyata- [puzzled] dad what do u mean by future damaad??
brij-noithing beta
m- dad tell me [gets angry]
komal- its time we tell her
brij- yes komal u tell her
[brijraj exits the room and komal takes manyata to her room]
m- maa whats going on
komal- manyata beta u'r roka was done in your childhood with udayveer con of giriraj uncle
m-what!!!!
komal-yes beta u both were really small and only uday remembers it the scar on your back was caused by him
m-i dont even know him maa forget that i havent even seen his face
komal- you both were best friends on the day of your roka you both were playing with plastic swordsand accidentally he hit u on your back then u started crying it was a very deep cut but suprisingly when u started crying uday broke his sword and started to pacify u
m-ok maa then why did he go to london
komal- after that unnati was born and when unnati was 2 yrs their mother died uday and unnati were heartbroken so giriraj unle sent them to london
m-oh...ok maa i better pack my bags
komal-i hope u arent angry with us for hiding the truth
m-[hugs komal] of course not maa how can i be angry with u all
komal- ok beta u pack u'r bag and take rest and when u go there please call me
m- ok maa
komal exits the room manyata packs her bag and goes to sleep
will be continued...
hope u liked it.. 😊



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this is somethimg different yaar
continue plz
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loved it
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This is AMAZING!! Can't wait til Manyata meets Uday!!:) Continue soon!!:)
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awesome ff
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thank u all so much i will update right now😃
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wow! amazing!!!! you should so continue:)
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WOWWW...

this is somethimg different yaar
continue plz

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nice start..do PM me when you update..😊
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heres the next part..sorry for this short update
part 2:
next morning
manyata- ok maa bye
komal- bye beta
ds- 1 min manyata unnati is also going with u she will be here to pick u up
m- ds u mean giriraj uncle's daughter
ds- yes...she came
unnati enters takes blessings from everyone
ds- uday didnt cum
unnati-no ds he stayed in dubai to spend some time with his friend over there he will be joining us from the flight which leaves from dubai to london
ds-ok here beta meet manyata
unnati- omg i have heard so much about u from dad but u r more than i expected[smiling]
m-wel u never know what u see i am delighted tomeet u and i have a feeling that u might be my best friend
unnati-my pleasure so cum on lets go or else we may miss our flight
scene over they leave and bosrd their flight and reach dubai
in dubai airport
m-we have landed almost in time for the next flight cum on lets go and get the boarding pass
unnati-but manyata i wanted to show u dada
m-its getting late cum on anyway he's gonna board in the same flight in which we are gonna board..ok cum on
unnati-ok
as manyata takes her baggage and is abot to leave she sees a boy of her age hugging a girl ouside the airport and he enters the airport
manyata-[mumbling]gosh! what boys!
unnati-cum on its getting late
they go and collect their boarding passes and are dissapointed to know that their seats are in different places
manyata- damn! why is this happening
unnati- dont worry its only a matter of hours
to be continued...

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