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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
hey guys here's part 6
part-6
the next morning they get ready and walk towards their respective classes[as this is a posh school there is only one section of each grade]
manyata walks with nandita and go and sit then the teacher arrives
teacher-good morning class i am miss gretchen and you'll are going to spend the rest of your 10th grade with me ok lets skip introductions and go to studies...
she goes on with the classes manyata's ring falls down as she bends down shw sees uday and uday waves a hi and she returns it witha glare. Then the bell rings and miss gretchens says something
miss gretchens-and people before u all leave i have an important announcement to make ...we are going to conduct various clubs for the eight grade and the teachers are gonna be from tenth grade
everyone murmuring
miss gretchens- ok so here is the list as follows kim for the drama club
nandita -[whispers to m] suits her
miss g-nandita for the journalism club
manyata-[whispers] never knew that u wanted to becum a journalist
miss g-lin for the culture club,uday for the sports club
manyata - i cant believe that they r making that namuna the sports head[in whisper to nandita]
miss g- falan for the music club and last but not the least manyata for the art and architecture club
m-[to nandita] omg i never gave my name...NANDITA!
nandita-[to m]sorry ...but this is your chance
and they leave uday stares at manyata with a smirk and manyata at him with a glare
its recess and they r walking as unnati joins them
unnati- hey manyata and nandi bull hw was your class
nandita-nandi bull...seriously unnati u gotta think better than that
m-cool hw was yours
unnati-fine
m-hey guys i want a pic of u with your siblings
unnati-of course w e will give u but the question is why??
n-kahin tumhe uday ka photo toh nahi chahiye
m-nandi bull u r thinking too much
n-just kiddin
they give their pic as manyata is seeing them jason cums behind and tries to snatch it but manyata gives a strait back punch
manyata- taekwondo international champion thrice try that again and i 'll break your bones
jason- owww ...why u...owww
and he ru ns away
nandita-nice punch
m-thanks
they head to the wash area as unnati and nandita r waiting at their table manyata is washing her hand. she turns back to only find uday behind her. as it is a corner he pins her towards the wall and says
uday hey princess missed me
m-what r u doing back off this instance
u-is it a crime to meet ones fiance
m-for gods sake we r just in 10th grade
u-so...
as he says he pushes a strand of her hair behind her ear and they share a eyelock[background ek tara from wake up sid]m realizes her position and looks across udays face and says
m-miss gretchen
uday-mmm...miss gretchen where!
he turns behind to see no one and manyata rushes ti her table
uday- damn it! [to himself ] princess aaj toh bach gayi lekin zindagi bhar toh aise bhag nahi sakti ho...tum humare ho aur sirf aur sirf humare..[smirk]
to be continued...





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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
awwwe so cute and sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Part 7

The clubs are going on and manyata after giving the students an assingment she stares out of the window. While she is looking out she sees uday instructing a boy how to make a goAl.
Manyata-(in thought)I hate to admit but he is a pretty good teacher
Then she goes back to teaching her club. Then when she is teaching uday looks at her and smiles thinking about the moments he shared with her.
Uday-(thought to himself) why am I thinking about her
Then the day ends.
3 weeks later
Nandita's birthday
Its a fine saturday morning nandita is woken up by the sound of her two best fiends screaming in her ears(yup now the trio were bffs)
Manyata and unnati-happy birthday Nandi bull
Nandita-mm...ugh...oh thank u (rubbing her eyes)
M-so birthday girl hw was your sleep
Unnati-seriously we shouldn't be asking her that question after waking her up like that
Nandita-no probs any ways it's a half day
Unnati- btw here is my gift
Unnati Hands over a package to nandita and another one to m
Manyata-why for me
Unnati-just take it
They open it and see a lovely diamond bracelet. There is a stone in the middle of the bracelet. There is a blue stone for manyata and a pink one for nandita
Nandita-omg! Unnati this is soo beautiful
M-unnati this is soo cute I just luv it
Unnati-oh cum on this is a symbol of our everlasting friendship see even I have one
She showed them a similar type of bracelet with a violet stone.
M-ok unnati now I will give my gift but I am telling u all don't expect too much cause it is a very simple gift
Nandita-shut up hw can u even think like that
Unnati-seriously manyata it is not the gift that matters it is the feelings with which u givE
M-anyways here r your gifts
Saying this she takes out two large rectangle shaped boxes(the boxes r medium thick )
Unnati and nandita open it to find a painting of them with their respective siblings(I.e unnati with uday and nandita with jaggat
Nandita and unnati-(tears in their eyes)omg!
They hug manyata tightly
Nandita-this is the best gift I have ever recieved in my life
Unnati-me too so that is why u asked those pics
M-yup!and stop crying,u two look like this sentimental mums from Hindi serials
N-oh shut up and btw today I am gonna give a treat tonight
Unnati-ooh
M-hey guys my gift is still not over I will give that tonight In the terrace cause it's a surprise and a special surprise needs a special place
Unnati-I can't wait
Nandita-patience my girl patience
Then they get ready and go as it's a half day school ends pretty soon.nandita and unnati go to the dorm. Manyata is in the art room doing some finishing touches to her surprise and after doing that she is returning the dorm via the corridor.she stops for a while newr the window and gazes outside at the lush grounds. Then suddenly she hears Kim(the drama head)laughing and uday speaking(yup now she could even recognize his voice) she then again turns towards the window then suddenly she finds uday in front of her and he pins her towards the window ledge
Uday-hey princess
M-what the heck! Get lost kya tum hamesha ladkiyon se aise hi behave karte ho
U-what can I do princess anyways I have cum here to make a promise
M-u do anything u want but not in front of me
U-(looks damn seriously in her eyes) princess aaj hum yuvraj udayveer Singh yeh Vaada karte hai ki hum aaj se kabhi bhi kisi aur ladki manyata ke alaawa date yah flirt Karen ge
M-(bursts out laughing)ha ha seriously? udayveer Singh making a hilariously impossible promise in front
Of a girl
Uday-I am serious
They look in each others eyes they r like that for atleast 2 minutes. Then suddenly kim walks from out of the washroom and sees them like that and interrupts them
Kim-uday sweetheart what r u doing with miss new girl
Uday-duh! What do u think
Kim-flirting but u cant do that
U-why cant I
Kim-causE u r my beau
U-(looking at manyata who has a what-the-he'll-is -going-on look on her face) since when
Kim-since 2 min ago when u wooed me-
U-oh really sister
Kim-SISTER!!!
U-yup u really should know the difference between flirting and wooing
Kim-ugh!!
She walks away
U-now where were we
M-(sarcasticly)you were gonna give way for me to return to the dorm
Saying that she pushes uday but he holds he hand
U-princess why didn't u give me punch when I pinned u towards the ledge(smirking)
M-If u weren't unnatis brother by now u would be in your grave
Saying this she goes to the dorm
Uday-(to himself) yup uday she is into you and your into her...(smiling)
To be continued...'

Edited by mystic.charm - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
#34
i love this n want the update right now right now now now
hwy by the way mystic im a senior member so i can help u just tell me or pm me wat ur prob is n i shall solve it or at atleast try to do so
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Thank u soo much maneta and don't worry about part 8 I shall update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Plz update next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
I freaking dieing to read part 8
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
this is manveerlicious 😉
part-8

that night
m blindfolds them and takes them to the terrace. Then she opens the blind fold unnati and nandita have paintings in their hands wen they turn tom see the painting they r shocked and also happy. it was an oil painting of all the three of them
nandi-OMG!!!!!
unnati- seriously m this is like mind blowing and why did u give seperate paintings for me ans nandi bull
m-[smiles and looks at the stars and says]we wont be possibly living together our whole lives thats why i gave u each a painting and another thing promise me that when you go to india both of u will hang it in your bedroom
n and unnati-promise
and the 3 share a cute hug and go back to their dorm. when they reach there they find the same type of painting hanging there
unati-let me guess u made a painting for each one of us including u
n-ok enough chit chat lets sleep i am darn sleepy right now
m-yup gud ni8 guys
she doesnt get a reply cause they were already snoring. manyata rolls in he r bed but she couldnt sleep so she takes a pack of oreo cookies an goes to the terrace.she opens them and starts eating[here m has a very wierd habit of staying awake and eating at night].
she is staring at the stars when she suddenly feels a presence beside her
uday-beautiful aren't they
m almost falls down but instead of falling on the cold floor she lands in a pair of strong arms
m-tum!
u-sorry princess but i didnt mean to startle u
m catches udays shoulder and helps herself to stand upright
m-whatever!anyways what r u doing here
u-i came to meet choti but as she was deep asleep i came to my most favourable place and btw nice painting do paint one like that with both of us for our wedding
m-whatever [she turns and looks at the stars and says] sum times i wish that we'd never grow up and stay like this forever...here have a cookie[she offers him a oreo cookie]
u-[takes it and says] funny isnt it when we were we both used to eat oreo cookies day and night
he smiles remembering those days.m sees that and starts to act in a friendly manner and started to talk with him as if she were talking with her childhood friend
u-god those days were glorious
m-yup now i do recall some memories but it has been a long time since these things happened but u remember it as if happened yesterday
u-yes cause those days were the most wonderful and best days of my life and i shall treasure them in my memory forever
m looks in his face and she sees uday, the one with a heart and they share an eyelock then he starts smirking again
u-i dont have to treasure those cause the person with whom i shared these will be with me forever
m-hoa!😲anyways its getting late i have to go or else i may end up getting up late tomorrow
uday cums near her and pushes her hair behind her ear
u-but princess kal toh sunday hain
m-i know but i am not a late riser like u
u-hw do u know princess
m-unnati anyways[she pushes him behind]see ya
u-hmmm i didnt hear you
m-[a little louder] i said bye and btw thanks
u-kiske liye princess?
m-[smiles]for returning my childhood
saying this she leaves . uday says to himself
u-no thank u aapne hume apni feelings bathaye aur humare feelings ko bhi samjhe...yup princess u r falling for me and i have to admit that even i am falling for u...
to be continued...
writerjenny thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
hey u always write beautiful
hav no words to describe yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
That was beautiful, more please ;)

Simran :D...

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