manveer ff: you are mine[part 10 updated on pg 9] - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys i've edited the post so plz plz plz read and comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
can't wait until the next part
plz pm me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
hello guys ! i'm back with the next part
part-5
night in the dorm...
manyata-nandita got the flashlight
nandita-check
unnati-ok relax we got everything
m-lets go
they reach the terraceand are amazed to see the view manyata tells them
m-u guys saw the pic in my locket actually it was a painting done by me...to bad i didnt include u guys
unnati- manyata that was wonderful
nandita- seriously damn wonderful..btw we have clubs and the club teacher is usually a 10 studtent
and u can give your names
m- hey thats good... wait a minute plz no not my name
unnati- why not manyata u dont want to share your art secrets with anyone
m- not like that but..
suddenly they hear a pot fall and they turn to see uday
m-you! what r u doing here and this is the girls only section
uday-hey princess[smirking]and relax i am here to talk with choti
u-dada aap yahan!
nandita- mr. casanova..here to see your fiancee
uday-no nandita not now..
unnati-dada chill manyata also knows
uday-[relaxed] oh how sweet princess aap humare tasveer ko apne dil ke paas rak rahe ho
manyata-how do u know![angry]
she looks at unnati and gives her a i-will-kill-u look and unnati nods disapprovingly
unnati-dada telll me what u want
uday-this is a secret give me u'r ear
unnati leans and uday whispers
uday-choti i have cum here to see manyata and whats the latest news about her
unnati-[whispers]dada seriously... this is not the time and the news is she is a fantastic artist
uday-[whispers] da vinci as my wife ..not bad
unnati- nd that is the last thing i am telling u about manyata caus she is not any other girl and she is my friend and dada u cant ask me everything about her to impress her u need to do it by yourself com on dada be a man..
nandita cuts in
nandita- guys i think chit-chat time is over cause old lady munson oops... i mean miss munson the warden is inspecting the dorms
m- shit we gotta go cum on unnatiand tell that brother of yours to get lost
uday- princess hum toh aapko help karne aaye the..
saying this he grabs unnati's hand who grabs manyata's hand who in turn grabs nanditas hand and run through the corridor
they all crouch behind a wall and uday sends the girls one by one in the last when it was manyata's turn miss munson tunrns around and uday grabs manyata and she turns and bumps into uday's chest.they share a hug and realize their awkward position and move away
m- i think miss gretchen has left
uday-umm... yes i think i have to go bye
m-[turns around to leave and again turns back] thanks uday
she leaves uday is shocked as it was the first time she had called him uday he felt as if his heart was doing a back flip. he had never felt this way..
uday-[to himself] am i falling in love..
in the dorm..unati and nandita fell asleep manyata lay in her bed thinking
m-[to herself] is this love...
to be continued..

Edited by mystic.charm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
very nice post and plzzz pm me when u update...
Edited by dekhaekkhawab - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
just read and i think its absolutly wonderful...cud u pliz add me to ur pm list and pm me wen u update as it would be greatly appreciated...thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Hey guys thanks for your comments and as i'm new to this website I need someone to guide me in the basic actions like how to pm my future updates to people so...anyone willing to help????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Really good I just read part 5 as I didn't know it was up!! Anyways it was really good n I'm eager to read the next part!! Plzzz do update soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
This is a very interesting and different FF.
Please update soon 😊
I wish I could help you out with it but I'm new here too. And still trying to get the hang of it 🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Thanks guys 😊 and I bet this is gonna be a very big ff 😊 😉 and the best part is I will introdce akash as a v.v.v bad character so plz plz plz keep reading and I will update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome update :)
pls pm me when u update
Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago

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