manveer ff: you are mine[part 10 updated on pg 9] - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY THIS IS UNFAIR PLS UDAY;S PART YAAR KAL UPDATE KARTI PAR EK LONG WALA TO DETI PLS PLS UDAY WALA PART AUR AGAY KA PART

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update ...loved it
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
good update..but a short one...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
ok guys here's part 3
part 3
as manyata ad unnati are about to go to the conveyer manyata bumps into a boy of her age[ yup,that is uday]
she doesnt look at him and she bends down to pick up her passport
m- sorry my fault i have to rush
uday-no its ok [suddenly he notices a scar on her back and his face goes pale]
unnati- manyata cum fast
uday- choti!
unnati- dada! how are u here
uday- is that manyata
unnati-yes dada your future wife and my bhabi sa
uday-she is beautiful..ok listen dont tell her that u met me when the flight lands in london then u introduce me in the airport ok and i think i may have the seat beside her
unnati-dada i can see that your completely dead gone on her aww! love on first sight
uday- what rubbish any way u'r getting late go now
unnati- bye dada
they board the flight manyata and unnati are sitting away from each other .manyata has a bag which is strapped on to her waist. her phone falls down she bends to pick it as she sees the same boy[uday] flirting with a stewardess
manyata-[mumbling]i hope his seat is not next to me
uday walks and sits next to her
m- i think this is not u'r seat
u-but this is mine [smirk] hey by the way i'm uday
m-manyata
u-oh when we land care to join me for a cup of coffee
m-[irritated] first of all keep your flirty crap to your self and second u r to young to flirt
u-[smirks and leans closer] but not younger than you
m-[mumbling] son of a devil
u-said something
m-nope
the flight takes off while its on the runway manyata clutches uday's hand tightly when she realizes what she is doing she removes her hand
m-sorry
u-wish u kept holding for ever
m-u'r impossible
manyata takes out a book and starts reading. Uday peeps and asks
u-which book
m-thats none of your business
u-ok but it will be after some years
m-what do u mean
u- nothing
as she is reading uday starts drinking juice and spills some on her waist on purpose
m-[angry] what did u do
u- h i'm sorry
he takes a tissue and starts wiping her waist
m-[angry] keep your filthy fingers with yourself
u-ok but princesses dont talk like that
m- how do u know
she doesnt bother to wait for his answer and she gets up and goes to the washroom. As she comes out she bumps into uday who is standing right in front of her their eyes meet they stay like that for some time and they soon realize their positions and move back to their place.
its nigt now they go to sleep.
when manyata wakes up in the morning she is shocked to see her head on his shoulders and his head on her head she quickly wakes up
uday-good morning princess
m-subah subah maine iska chehra dekh liya wonder whats gonna happen
u- you missed me and my face[soberly]
m-i said tht in the sense that what ill omen might strike me
u-you shouldnt be worrying about that witth me by your side
m-excuse me!
the air hostess announces tat the flight will be landing.
the flight lands and they reach the airport manyata rushes ti unnati and hugs her
m-gosh! i missed u so much i have so much to tell you
unnati-but before that let me introduce u to my brother udayveer singh for short uday
u-hi u never know what happens
manyata-[whispers to unnati] pls tell me that this isnt your brother caus i'm gonna freak out
unnati-this is my brother
manyata goes in the wahsroom washes her face
m-are u coming with me or going with your brother
unnati-but manyata
m-yes or no
unnati -ok i will um bye dada
u-bye
they drive of and uday says
u-u r mine and u will be mine always..
to be continued...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update.plz cont soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
I loved it!!!!!!
Please pm me the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
sorry guys i will post before ths week ends pukka!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved it...
great work...
pm me whenever you update next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
sorry for the delay guys i know that you all r angry with me cause its 3 days past my due date plz forgive me and here is the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
part 4
manyata and all enter the place..
m-wow this luks amazing
as they proceed they hear an announcement made by the principal
unati-yp manyata and now we study in this place
princi-hello students i am your new principal miss morgan i am really sorry to say that u'r earlier principal miss munson passed away...so here i am going to introduce some new rules students will be given a locker to keep their things untill their dorms are decided thank u

after hearing their locker nos they go there as manyata is walking is walking wid unnati and she bumps into a girl
manyata- i am so sorry plz let me help u[she helps da gurl]i am manyata rajkumari of devgadh
girl-its ok i am nandita gupta rajkumari of shivpur
m-and this is unnati rajkumari of jaigadh[she points but is surprised to not find her there]
nandita-where is she... omg! there is a girl in jason's clutches
m- who's jason
n- he's the school bully
manyata turns to see in horror that unnati is standing behind jason
m goes to unnati
unnati- manyata go
m- wat's happening and u back off
jason-so this is miss new girl trying to help miss indian bitch
m-[very very angryand roars] how dare u...
everyone turn aroundbut miss the scene and see jason on the floor with his hand on his chin
jason-oww oww i will get u for this
m-[angrily kicks him] mext time i see u bullying anyone i swear i will ruin your face so badly that u wont be able to take another girl for a date
jason runs away
m-cum unnati ab chale
unnati- thanks manyata
m-unnati dosti mein no sorry no thanks
uday- par hum toh thanks keh sakte hai[uday blocks their way]
m- mujhe tumhare thanks ki zaroorat nahin hain
u-wow princess u r a package and btw hum toh umhe apni taraf se thanks bolna chahte thae
m-what do u mean
u- u saved your future husband from going to jail
unnati-dada aap bhi na
m-now can we go
u- btw your kick was awesome
m-agar iyna dilchaspi hain tumhe meri kicck me tumhe in toh mein demo kyun na dikhaon
u-na na na princessyeh toh shaadi ki baad hi hoga
m- u r impossible
uday pushes her hair behind her ear and share an eyelock
unnati- who is this[looking at nandita]
they snap out of their eyelock
nandita-hey so u'r unnati my pleasure to meet u
unnati- me to
then they go on with their classes then during the recess
canteen
3 of them sit on a table
m-so tell me sumthing about urself nandita
m- i have an elder bro jagat and we live in mumbai presently
a pune cumes and gives a package to manyata
m-what is it
unati and nandita together-open it
m opens it to find a small heart locket made of platinum when she opens it she finds a photo of her family and uncle giriraj's family taken when unnati was not born and uday and manyata were kids. there is also a letter saying "humari pyaari rani bitiya ke liye,from the royal families of devgadh and jaigadh". manyata quickly wears it and smiles
unnati- thatis so cute
nandita- hey listen guys i've just heard that our dorm is together
all-yippee!
m-i have heard that the terrace in our hostel is amazing we sneak up tonight...
to be continued...



Edited by mystic.charm - 13 years ago

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