manveer ff: you are mine[part 10 updated on pg 9] - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Thank u much 😃
Part 9 coming soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Hey Nice MaVeer FF 😊 👍🏼

PM me the next part 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Could you plizz pm me when you update because it is not written update or anythin on your ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
AMAZING!! Can't waittt till Manyata meets Uday!! :) :D

continueee plzzz.. :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Part 9
It is Sunday
In the dorm
Nandita-good morning unnazie
Unnati- (sitting up from her bed)ugh nandi bull …unnazie that is horrible and now is this payback for yesterdays act
Nandita-yup
Unnati-btw where is manyata?
Nandita- she went to get her notepad and charcoal pencil from the art room
U-but at this time ??
N-and yes she also went to get her pack of Oreo cookies
U-manyata can't live without them and even dada likes them a lot
N- ooh! No wonder their Roka was done in childhood
U-yup
Scene shifts to the art room
Manyata is stiffing her notepad into her jeans pocket and pushed the pencil in her hair and opens the cupboard in which she has her cookies stored
M-(to herself) I remember that I kept 3 packets here but hove there is only one ... Ab ek pack se hi kaam chalaana padega
She takes and she leaves . As sshe is walking through the corridor she sees miss Munson roaming
M-( to herself) what is old lady Munson doing here at this time
She finishes he last cookie and then takes out her pad and starts drawing whilst walking. She doesn't see what's in front of her and bumps into someone and she drops the pencil and pad and expects herself to fall on the cold hard floor but she finds some holding her from her waist. She opens her eyes and finds uday holding her in one hand and her pad and pencil in the other hand
Uday-(looking in her eyes) hey princess aap yahan kya kar rage ho
M-(standing up and taking her things from uday ) just came here to pick up a few things aur aap yahan kya kar rage ho?
Uday- please princess ab aap Hume itna izzat bhi mat do
M-anyways do u know why old lady Munson is roaming the school at this time cause she kinda creeps me out
U- don't worry princess hum hai na aapke saath and about old lady Munson she goes to the pub every Saturday night and she is 3 bottles down which puts her to sleep for a very long time and by very long time i mean a really long time(smirking the whole time)
M-(chuckles)and I guess she has this ajeeb bimaari of sleep walking
U-(smirk) yup
M-uday can u spare an hour of your busy schedule please
U-(smirk)hum toh aapke liye apne jaan bhi de sakte hain
M-(takes a step back) I am asking this as a best friend not as your fiance
U-(pretends to think)I guess I can so what do u wanna do
M-cum with me
Saying this she clutches uday's hand and goes to the 10 th grade classroom
M- I hope u don't mind if I write something about your ex girlfriend
U-(puzzled)hm??
M writes many things on the board and uday is looking at her the whole time in awe. Then she jumps on a bench and stars jumping from one bench to another
M-cum on uday
Uday-(smirking)princess I never knew that u had crazy wishes like these
Saying this he climbs onto the bench and start playing catch catch
Then they go to the music room and manyata goes to the drums and uday grabs the guitar
M-linkin park or indues creed
U-(surprised)princess u listen their music
M-of course dumbo! Yeh bhi koi poochne wali Baath hain oops sorry uday
U-(smiles)pata hain u used to call me that in childhood
M smiles and they share an eyelock
U- let's try Indus creed for a change (he said breaking the eyalock)
They then start playing music and then they cum back to the corridor suddenly m's phone starts ringing
M-crap!it's dadi saheb I totally forgot that she told me that she will call me on skype
U- no probs princess take the call and anyways it's been ages since I saw her
M- ok here gooes nothing
Saying this she takes the call . It was a video call and ds's face appears
Ds- hello manyata beta
M- ghani kamma dadi saheb and hello
Ds- hello bet did u forget about calling your family
M- no ds it was like I was busy with my studies
Ds -oh I hope u like your school beta
M- jee ds and btw ds I have a surprise for u
Saying this she called uday to the screen
U-ghani kamma dadi saheb
Ds-( tears in her eyes) uday beta aap kaise ho
U- hum teek hai ds aap Kaise ho aur ghar pe dab Kaise hain
Ds- yahan sab teek hain aur komal ko aapki bohat yaad aanti hain
U- hum bhi unhe bohat miss karte hain
M sees miss Morgan the principal walking to the corridor
M- ds hum aapki baas mein call karte hain caus now we r in the school corridor
Ds-(smiling) ok u dont need to call I just wanted to see my rani bitiya's face but now I am happy that I saw my jamaai saheb's face also
U- don't worry ds hum hain na aapke rani bitiya ke khayaal rakhne ke liye
M-(ignoring the comment) bye ds
Saying this she cut the call and says to uday
M- ab chale
Uday grabs her hand and they go
They reach the entarance of thE hostel and m and uday are panting and m touches her neck
M- omg mera chain Kayan Gaya?
U- which chain princess that dil waala chain
M- yup the same one
U- Kahin aap ye chain ki Baath toh nahin kar Rahin ho
Saying this he takes a chain from his pocket
U-kya hum aapko Pehna de
M- (blushes) ok
Uday ties the chain and then turns manyata and pushes a loose strand of hair behind her ear.
Manyata turns around and runs inside then she stops and turns behind and says
M- bye uday and don't get any wrong ideas about me I spent time with u as a friend not as your fiance
Saying this she goes inside . Uday is looking at her the whole time
Uday-(smirking to himself) princess I will conquer yor heart as you have conquered mine.…
To be continued……


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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Hey guys this is just to tell you all that as I'm a newbie and I don't have any practice in sending pms so I won't be sending pms for this ff but I will send pms for my future ffs and ss and I have also typed half of part 10 and will update it soon…and thx for reading my ff and do comment on it …
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
hey i read all the part together they are so beautiful👏👏👏👏 do cont. soon 😉😉 i hope manyata realises her feelings for uday in the next part😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
it was interesting...plz do add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
i am soo so so sorry for abandoning this ff and i swear that this will never happen again soo save your chappals and tomatoes for my update
part-10
days pass and the comes the 10th std farewell night
manyata unnati and nandita r getting ready
m-r u sure that i look gud
u- of course manyata
n-ladies we better hurry up or else we might reach when the party ends
m- ok cum on lets go...[thought] how am i gonna see the shooting star thet passes by every 3 yrs i've been seeing that since childhood
they go and when they enter the hall the spotlight was on them . m was dressed in a very tantalizing indigo coloured half sleeve full length gown and unnati was dressed in pale pink gown and nandita was dressed in a pistachio green coloured gown
n-guys why is the spotlight on us
m-yup i feel really creepy
unnati - shut up guys just walk and take your seats
they go and take their seats as m anyata is walking towards her seat she bumps into a person
m-oh ...i am so sorry[she looks at the person]uday!
uday- hey princess guess some one stole the spotlight
m-oh cum on
u- ok princess chit chat baad mein go to your seat
m-ok see ya
u- oh u bet princess
then all the programes go on and then comes the farewell dance
principal-ok children now the dance floor is all yours go ahead and enjoy..
m was checking the time on her phone constantly and so was uday
uday-[thought] its getting late i better go to the terrace but asking my princess for a dance wont hurt
he hurriedly goes to manyata
u-princess care to have his dance with me
m- of cour...[her phone starts ringing ad so does udays phone
u-let me guess shooting star..terrace
m-exactly cum on what r u waiting for..christmas??
saying this she pulls udays hand and the go to the terrace at the nick of time and they see it passing
m-beautiful
u-yes princess
m- u know uday i have been seeing this since i was 3 and i feel like this is a part of me like as if it is attached to my soul
u-it is princess actually it is a part of our soul
m-what do u mean
u- 2day is the day when our roka was ...we were 3 atthat time
m-surprising...and uday i want to tell u something
u-bolo princess
m-whenever u feel sad depressed or angry or lonely always know that your best friend i.e me am there to console u
u-voh toh hum jaantae hain princess
m-and another promise me that u will be my best friend forever and no one mind me no one will take my place as your best friend
u-promise princess..
b4 he could say manyata hugged him tightly uday felt that he was on cloud 9 . it was not a romantic hug but it was a hug of 2 best friends manyata broke the hug
m-now we gotta go back to the party
u-[in a trance] yup
saying this they go back
to be continued...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hey nice one.cont soon n pliz pm me if u can.

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