The nest of dreams Manveer romance Last part - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update this is getting interesting👏❤️...so UV is trying hard to get M fall for him and M is feeling uncomfortable with UV in her surroundings...good going ...guess UV will fall first for M😉 can't wait for him to madly in love with her.

Plzzz do continue soon and thxs for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good update jasmine..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow lovd dix update manyata is a sch0ol girl lovd to knw dix bt i thnk uday fal in l0vd wid hr first bt w0nt admit it great g0ing update s0n n thnkx fr da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...! Loved it... Uv and manyatha r superb...i love manyatha more than uday...she is a school going girl ...she wants to study yaar...i felt sad for manyatha when uv is irritating her...he is like a jerk...but i love him...its well written...continue soon...eagerly waiting 4 nxt part...
Posted: 13 years ago
#15
hey jas u like long comments so here it is ur concept was a bit same as the show but in a different angle god thought to put m as a south indian girl ur 1st chapter was really a fabulous piece but this part is out of the world it really intrigued me i want to know more if u have a pm list pls do add me to it.really ill be giving u 10 on 10 for this chapter n please update lil faster for me pls pls dying to read but no pressure take ur own time but dont delay.
continue writing
god bless u
good day
urs maneta
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomely written... keep up the good work.. thanx for the pm :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot 4 d response.But only a few readers😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The nest of dreams Part 3

Plz giv me long comments

Kamala and Manyata came back home from the church.They looked very upset.
Deepak:Why do you both look sad?
Yash:If you can share with us please share.We will help you.
K:You people can't help us.Today is our parents' death anniversary.
Tears rolled down their cheeks.
Deepak,Uday and Yash felt sad.
M:We miss them.
Manyata cried hugging Kamala.
Uday felt sad seeing her tears.Kamala also burst into tears.
All the 3 boys wanted to wipe their tears and console them.But they hesitated to do so.
Kamala wiped her tears:We lost our parents in an accident.Our father was a french man who came to Pondichery long ago.He fell in love with our mother and they got married.After that he did'nt return to France.
Manyata shed tears:We became orphans.
K:Sorry for disturbing you all by narrating our story.
D:Don't think you all disturbed us.We belong to your family.
Uday:Yes.You both have us.So you are not orphans.
Yash:Yes.
Kamala was relieved hearing it.She smiled.Manyata looked at Uday unbelievingly.

Kamala and Manyata sat simply at home thinking of their past.Uday,Deepak,Yash went there.
Y:We won't allow you both to sit and shed tears simply.
D:We want you both to smile.
U:So we have decided to take you both out.
M:What?
U:Yes.You both are going to come with us.
K:But...
U:No excuse.
D:We are your friends.If you accept us as friends please come with us.
K:Ok.
Manyata looked at Kamala unbelievingly as she never expected Kamala to agree so fast.
Kamala,Manyata,Yash,Deepak and Uday went out in the jeep.
The boys sand and danced to entertain them.Kamala and Manyata laughed.Manyata laughed hearing Uday sing.Uday became happy as Manyata's anger towards him was melting.

The next day...
Manyata was studying.Suddenly she saw Uday smiling at her.
She got confused:Am i dreaming like before or is it real?
He smiled:So your dreamt of me?What was your dream about me?
M:Go man.
He went close to her.She got nervous.The parrot standing on the cage was chirping.
M:Anyways i am sure that the dream was very sweet.Tell me what did you see?

She pushed him away and took a knife.
M:I am not like your stupid girl friends.If you try to play with me i will stab you.
He got embarrassed.He was really ashamed.
U:Why did you take it seriously?I was just joking.
He went out smoothly.She was relieved.

The next day...
Uday did not wake up from the bed.
Deepak:Are you not getting up?
U:No.I am not feeling well.
He touched Uday's forhead.
D:No temperature.
U:Ya.But i have head ache.So you both go.
Yash:OK.You take rest.
They both went out.Uday went looked down from the balcony.He saw Kamala going out by cycle with flowers.He smiled.He went down.
He went inside the house through the kitchen door.He became happy seeing Manyata standing on the ladder with a broom.
U:Hi sweety!
She was shocked to see him.
M:You came here?You did'nt go to college?
Uday blinked his eyes.
U:I felt like seeing you.That's why i came here.
M:You did'nt get enough from me.Should i take the knife?
He smiled:Well i must say that scaring me with the knife was a romantic gesture from you.I loved it.
M:Oh!You are impossible.
U:Can i come up to help you?
M:No thank you Mr.Uday Casanova.
U:I can't resist myself.I will come.
He tried climbing the ladder and held her leg.
U:Ooh My Darling Darling
M:No..move away..don't come close to me.I don't like this...
Uday pleaded romantically:Please..
She pushed him down.
Manyata said in a musical tone:
I don't like you touching me.
No use of coming behind me
you stupid flirt
I don't like your tricks..
Uday said in a musical tone:
I like you
I like you my sweety
Manyata pushed him away singing:I don't like this
I don't like this...
U:Oh Oh Che Che
Are you simply fighting with me
And going?
Are you leaving me alone and going?
M: Ey
Mister... Don't waste time by wooing me with your smile.
Oh Oh ,for that you find someone else
I don't like ...I don't like ...
your tricks... I don't like you touching me...
U:I like it...i like your tricks.
M:Really?
U:You tiny naughty girl...no no no no no no no no...
M:No no no no no no no no... I don't like this...
I don't like this...
His arms circled her waist.

She ran away and took some vessels.She threw the vessels at him.He ran away.She laughed.
{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCMtXvxUB8w
This is the song from Swapnakoodu.You can imagine Manveer in this song}.


Kamala sat in the garden of the French colony to take rest.

A small girl came towards her with flowers.
Kamala receives the flowers from her happily.
K:Thank you.
Kamala kissed her.
Kamala went home and kept the flowers in the flower vase.
Manyata:Today also you got flowers from that kid?
K:Yes.
M:Why is that kid always giving you flowers?
Kamala remembered her first meeting with the kid.
That kid gave her flowers.
K:Thank you.From where did you get these beautiful flowers?
Kid:One Uncle gave me.
K:Where is he?
Kid:He went away.
Kamala smiled.

Kamala lied to Manyata:I don't know.Leave it.You finished studying?
M:No.I don't feel like studying.
K:What are you saying?How can you be so careless about studies?You don't know that you are my only hope?
M:I am disturbed by..
K:By?
M:Uday Veer.
Kamala was shocked:What?
M:Yes di.He always disturbs me.
Kamala fumed with anger.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...its very painful dat their parents passed away...its very sweet of uday,deepu,yash dat dey r bring smile 2 those sisters...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey luvd it again.pls make kamala take strict actn on it.

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