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Shashaaa.29

@Shashaaa.29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

nice update dear.lvd d game kiss.thnks 4 update

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luvuday

@luvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

great post , pls update soon very interesting :)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

good going..keep it up...update soon..😊

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow ...such a beautiful story ...cud nt stop once I started ...even Jay was handled so beautifully ...jus was unable to imagine this wonderful guy...Aditya...who can play him ...may be vivian d'sena...dunno ...

About UV-maanaa...u have done an awesome job...its the right mix...flirty n senti ..dats wat I wud like to call it

keep up the good work ..n frm now on ...add me in ur pm list

luv ya

akki

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

My gosh!!! I was feeling breathless during the whole 'What If' game!!! It was just too beautiful!!!😍 ManVeer took me into my own fairy-tale!! And they kissed!! 😃 I was in dream-land!!❤️

Manyata is growing mature,and has started to understand her responsibilities..I wish something like that wud have happened in the show as well!!!😳

thanx for the PM dear!🤗! Plz continue soon!!

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Wow this is awesome ...love the way M is fighting with her inner feelings and can't sense the reason why she is missing UV😉. The game part is simply beautiful and Manveer kiss☺️☺️...the last part is amazing the way UV told M if he has forced her for anything and he isn't sorry for the kiss hayyee

Plzzz update soon can't wait for the next chapter...hope Holi will bring Manveer closer😉

Thxs for the pm

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Wrackspurt

@Wrackspurt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Peda
Thanks for a really really wonderful update.
Too bad every day isnt Holi cause then we'd get awesome updates everyday.

I'm the first to reply cause I was re-reading your ff when I got the pm

which I have to say thanks for by the way. Also thanks for posting that vm...its really nice.

Cant wait for the next part.

HAPPY HOLI

Originally posted by: Peda
Oh I forgot to tell you that I really liked the small changes in Manyata like the clothing and asking Unati to call her by her real name...an did I mention that it was just awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

@red-- Glad you liked the part 😳...I hope I can make it like Holi on every update 😆

@blue-- I was really tired of seeing Manyata in her rags , and her fixation to the name Moniya in the show..though she has changed a bit there too..but its so negligible , I wanted to stress that all her training is indeed affecting her 😆

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Wrackspurt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update loved it that was beautiful maanyata is changing her world is opening up no longer is she moniya no matter how much she intend to perceive herself she is changing for the better and is afraid of letting go of the past her comfort zone uday makes her feel thing akash never made her feel so she is unsure and scared and uday is bring her out of her comfort zone so she is fight back loved it and how she told unnati to call her maanyata love how he played what if with her and her reactions were expected the more he forces her out of her shell the more she will fight in her mind he is already maanyata she just has not realize she already made her choice and her memories from child hood will un luck that awesome up date loved it this started out as two lines and look what happened my bad thanks for the pm and sorry for the long comment

Thanks for such a lovely comment 😳...Manyata is now confused with her feelings, and is also having inner conflicts...yeah she is attracted to Uday, may be she has even fallen for him..but whether she will accept it..thats to be seen 😃...and no need to say sorry for long comments...actually I am happy that you gave such a long comment 😳

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Wrackspurt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Oh gosh, the update was amazing, and the line I'm sorry if
I hurt u but i'm not sorry for kissing u, made my day... Pleaseee no more rifts between them in Holi, bring them more close to each other.😊

Glad you liked the update 😳...as for rifts...hmm ...I too hope Holi brings them closer 😆