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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update loved it ,it was nice see in to j world and her thinking and her miscoception about her self and the people around loved how manyata came and spoke to her showing her even if she hated her she would still be there for her loved the update thanks for the pm

Hey thanks a lot for your comment, and I am happy that you liked reading J's world...I do think her bond with manyata will become strong the moment they begin to understand each other.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -Niha-

Loved the update. It was different but very interesting.


Loved the way how you described how Jay was feeling and how she viewed the world around her. I guess not everyone can actually seem bad, they can be nice. Most people tend to hate her or Aakash because they are getting in the way of ManVeer.

I guess every girl can relate with Jay. Jay wants to be loved, but the person she thinks she loves is ignoring her. When actually her true love isn't Uday, it's some other guy, in this case the guy who saved him.

Thanks for the PM, hope you Update soon. Will be waiting 😊

Thanks for the comment 😳...@red--yes thats just it...people hate Jay and Akash because they pose as hurdles to Manveer story, but i think both these characters will play a major role in brnging Manveer together 😃.
I agree with you that inside every girl there is a Jay, she loves someone who ignores her, which makes her love him even more as he becomes someone she desires. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

It was more than just awesome!!👏 It was no ManVeer in dis update,but still I loved how u depicted J's emotional turmoil so beautifully!👍🏼! So finally,I guess J has found her match,hun?😉 Will luk forward for their track.Loved how Manyata cared for J❤️.And already waiting for ManVeerlicious upcoming updates!![>:D<]😃

Thanks for the comment 😃...I know it was a risk to omit Manveer rom this chapter...but I think all the characters need their space in a story, as each one has a part to play, so I had to take the risk..I am glad you appreciated the part despite the lack of Manveer 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: pri01

This chapter is really nice ...hope Aditya will come back as J badly needs someone in her life to move on

Thanks for your comment 😃...yeah I also hope Aditya will come back 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Peda

Missed manveer today but this part was so different that really enjoyed it.

Thanks for the comment 😃...and i am happy that you enjoyed it despite the lack of Manveer 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Shashaaa.29

luvd d way u considrd nd portrait j point of view.dat sister bondin was ausum.nd aditya new charactr intrstng.pm me wen u update

Thanks for commenting 😃...I am happy that you liked how I portrayed Jay 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey, loved it, even without Manveer it was good,but hope to read some real passionate manveer scenes in ur next part 😉. And loved how u showed j in different perspective . And thanks for the PM.

Thanks for the comment 😃...yeah there will be Manveer in the next chapter. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: manveerlover


U knw when i read that thr wil b n0 scenes of manvr in ths part I th0ught it wud b useles to read bt i wax wr0ng i actualy l0vd jay love st0ry i thnk u shud write abt b0th storys in ur evry update

Thanks for the comment😃...you know I am taking your comment as a complement...I am glad that I made you like the chapter despite the lack of Manveer...I am happy to know that I was able change your view 😳...I cannot promise that both the love stories will be there in every update, but yeah hints of both will be there 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your comment 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good update
Please write more manveer scenes
But Jay's scnes were bwautiful too😃

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