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waoo now dis is called a perfect romance...bechara uday got scoldings...but still luved it...
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Part fifteenth

Part 15

I skip ahead.

The royal families are back in Mumbai and it been 7 months since then. Both families are prepared for the royal wedding which will take place in 3 weeks. Manyata and uday were ordered not see each other until less it is a formal event. It was a traditional in the royal family of Devgarh. Uday hated this but obeyed it. Anyway they would be together in 3 weeks anyways. Going the 7 months Akash had caused a lot of problems for the royal families and was sent to jail until the wedding was over. Soni couldn't take it and had left him for another man. Who her parents choose. He was smart and very middle class rich man and he had fall for soni at first site. He knows her past and accepts it. Manyata was very happy for her wedding and attend it with Unnati. There she saw akash who tried to rape her in front of everyone but was arrested just in time. Unnati and Manyata were not allowed to visit the chwal anymore. Manyata was upset with the decision but accepted because it was the best for her and her families. Now the manyata went to parties and events with J,Unnati, Vijay Bhai and Uday she had new friends. Maybe even more than J and Unnati. Everyone wanted to know her befriends with her. She was very popular around the men which uday hated but her natural beauty brought her very rich men and prince like dogs. They all wanted her but she was taken. Manyata enjoyed watch uday's jealousy when other men asked her to dance or even talk. Uday just couldn't wait until the wedding.

In Unnati's room. Udat enter.unnati was get ready for a party

Uday: choit how is manyata?

Unnati: she fine. Anyway we are going to Abhi's birthday party today.

Uday: where manyata meet him?

Unnati: last week at the club. They were talking and have a lot in common. So he specially invited her to his birthday party. They are good friends. He a nice boy.

Uday was burning with jealous.

Uday: so who else is going?

Unnati: J, manyata, Vijay Bahi and me. Why?

Uday: is abhi a rich business man son. Aren't his parents looking for bride for him? Have they found one?

Unnati: no but think they have someone in mind.? Why are you asking me this? They wants someone like manyata. In fact all the boys want someone like manyata. Smart and beautiful. They are hard to find now. Your lucky don't lose her because anyone would marry her.

Uday: not anyone choit. She will only marry a prince and the prince will only be Rajkumar Yuvraj Udayveer Singh

Unnati turned around and saw her brother burn with jealous

Unnati: dada are you ok.

Uday: yes, anyways when yes the party?

Unnati: why? do you want to come?

Uday: why not?

Unnati: I through you hate him.

Uday: I do but someone need to watch you bhaashi sa.

Unnati: bhaashi sa?

Uday: manyata.

Unnati: oh you think manyata is like you any like to flirt with boys? Dada is nothing like that she just nice to everyone. So everyone is nice to her. But if you want to come I can't stop you.

Uday: so where are you to get to the mahal.

Unnati: no this time they are coming here and picking me up.

Uady: ok I'll get permission from dad and dadisa and we will leave. Call me where they are here

Unmati: sure.

Uday nodded and left to go change

Unnati quickly call manyata and told her the uday is coming and now they plans are ruined.

Manyata told J, and Vijay Bhai.

Vijay Bhai: so we have to go to the party now?

J: but what about our plans?

Manyata: they are dead now. Uday will never agree to it.

J: maybe we can try to convince him.

Vijay bahi: j bhai try to get uday to do is impossible.

J: but they is one person who can

And they both look at manyata

MANYATA: do way.

J: plz jiji I really want go to Jargat's party and you know happen what happen with his and dad. Dadisa won't allow it. Plus you and Jargat are good friends. He will be upset if we don't saw up.

Vijay Bahi: plz jiji come you can do it

J and Vijay Bhai: plz jiji plz plz plz plz plz plz plz and plz.

Manyata got irritated and said

Manyata: ok fine but how.

J: first we need to get you dress up.

Manyata: but I am ready

J: jiji know you need to look hot

Vijay Bahi: and not just hot but the hotter but there no problems caused you are really so pretty.

J: ok I will get jiji ready and Vijay Bhai you inform Unnati of our plan.

Back at Uday's hotel.

Uday and unnati awaited J and Manyata arrived. Vijay bhai already here.

Unnati whispered to Vijay BAHI

Unnati: this plan will work. Right

Vijay Bhai nodded and said

Vijay Bhai: of course it will. Who has the guys to say no to manyata. Not me.

Suddenly the elevator's door opens. J and manyata walk in. uday drop his glass of drink. Manyata was wearing a beautiful sari. She looked too hot. No one can't take his eyes off of her her. Even the staff were staring.

this is the sari manyata wore.

Uday walk over and dragged her into his room.

Everyone got a little scary with uday' act

Uday closed the door and walked toward manyata and ran his hand thought her hair.

Uday: manyata I think you are too dressed today. It not your wedding yet.

Manyata though I am too dressed. I told j not to do this but she won't listen. Now look.

Manyata: no it just right even J is wearing a sari today and unnati. Anyway why did you pull me in here and we are not be alone before the wedding unless it a parties or event.

Uday: I know that I am coming to Abhi's birthday party.

Manyata: did you hate him.

Uday: yes but he's your friend so it time to change that. You don't want me to come

Manyata: it not that but '.

Uday: but what princess.

Manyata: you see we laired to dadisa and everyone that we are going to abhi's party but we are going a different party.

Uday : why did you laired dadisa allow you to do anything?

Manyata; I know but dad hates this family.

Uday; what family

Manyata: jargat singh' family. J and me become good friend with jargat when we wnet to goa last month and J like him.

Uday; but princess if Brijraj Uncle finds out he will be very mad

Manyata: I know but jargat is very nice and good friends. So can you let us go?

Uday walked out of the room and stared at everyone in angry. Manyata come out behind him and stand next to unnati.

Unnati whispered did it work?

Manyata: I don't know?

Uday's angry stare broken in a smile and said

Uday: princess of you can but one condition

Everyone look at each other confused and back at manyata.

Manyata: what the condition

Uday: first agree to it

Manyata looked at everyone who were nodded.

Manyata: fine

Uday: perfect princess

Manyata: a least tell me condition now

Uday: that j, Unnati and Vijay Bhai go to the party and we spend time together here in my pent house.

Unnati; but dada jargat invited manyata specially. He will be upset not see her there.

Uday; she can go for a bit but I come with you and then we will leave and come back to the penthouse and j and vijay bhai can pick her up after the party is over.

Manyata: fine.

J: but jiji

Manyata: J when you wants something you need to lose something to get it. No problem I will explain to jargat why I leave early. He won't mine. Plus he has you there.

J brushed. Her face was red as blood.

Uday: should we leave

Everyone nodded and heard out to the cars.

They arrived at the party and wised jargat and manyata and Uday soon leave.

Uday and manyata were driving around. When manyata asked" CAN WE GO TO THE BEACH?"

Uday: why?

Manyata: I don't know why but I really want to go to the beach. Plz can we.

Uday: fine but only for a little bit. Ok

Manyata smiled kissed him on the cheek. They the beach and heard towad the hotel where Vijay bhai was waiting for manyata. They said they byes and left.

Manyata: how was the party

Vijay bahi : great to bad you miss.

Manyata: it ok uday and I had a great time.

Vijay smiled and drove on. They reach the mahal and inform dadisa that they were here.

Dadisa: but when is J. did she go with you.

Vijay Bhai: yes but she drove back in her car.

Manyata: maybe she in her room. I will go check.\

To be Continued


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i go to french school. English is my third language.

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i want to try to write something.
Edited by Somia3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏love it...great jon...thabks...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

thnks for the PM babe!!😉

loved it loved it n loved it really beautifully written i loved reading about UV's jealously nicely done gal...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars for an outstanding writer!!😉😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it that was so cute poor uday he is suffering loved it what happened to j thanks for the pm
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greatly written.. really looking forward to the next update.. thanx for the pm :)

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ohh how sweet..uday yy r u getting jealous shes just made 4 u..sweets..noone can seperate u guy..both offscreen plus offscreen..

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