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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update i like it

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Part sixteen

Part 16

Manyata went to J's room but she was not there. So she told Vijay Bhai. They search the whole house but she was nowhere and wasn't picking up her phone either. Manyata and Vijay Bhai got really worry if was not like J not to inform anyone about her where about.

Manyata: Vijay Bhai what do we do. Should we tell dadisa?

Vijay Bhai: first let try find her and than we will tel the elders.

Manyata: let call Unnati and ask her.

Vijay nodded and manyata call her.

Manyata: hi

Unnati: hi

Manyata: Unnati do you know where J is?

Unnati: no she left with her car from the party and Vijay Bhai drop me. So no. why?

Manyata: we can't find her and her not picking up her phone. I am really worried. ( manyata started to cry) anyways if you heard anything call me.( and hang up the phone)

Vijay Bhai: stop crying jiji we will find her.

Vijay Bhai and Manyata ran out of the mahal and into the car. The family saw this and asks the staff where they were going but no answers. Dadisa was furious at they act. She did not like her anyone be out so late. It was 2.00 a.m. after all.

Back at uday's hotel Unnati inform uday of J situation and how manyata was so worry. Uday called manyata right away and heard out with unnati to help.

Manyata, Uday, Unnati and Vijay bahi searched all night but did not find her. They finally decided to reture home and tell Dadisa that J was missing. Manyata don't stop crying and was blameing herself for be a bad sister. Unnati tried to calm her down but nothing work. They got to the mahal where the families awaited they arrived. They were really mad and furious.

Dadisa: where have to guys been?

Manyata: dadisa we were look for J. she didn't come home last night.

As manyata finished her sentence. She looks up to see everyone reaction but they saw so clam. Manyata look back at Uday, Unnati and Vijay Bhai. They were confused too.

Komal: manyata that nice that you were worried about your sister but why did you tell us.

Manyata: I through you guys would get over worry.

Vijay Bhai: we through you would me mad at us.

Maharaj Brijraj: well manyata and Vijay we are furious but not at you two.

Manyata and Vijay look at each other confused.

Dadisa: Brijraj is right we are not mad at you. You two were just following your duties as a brother or sister toward J but you two should not forget that you two are Royal and should not be out late.

Maharaj Grijraj: that the same for you two . uday and Unnati

They all nodded and manyata said.

Manyata: but we still don't know where J is.

Dadisa: manyata beta . J is home

Manyata was so happy to hear that she ran to her sister's room and the families followed. Manyata open the door and was shocked at what she saw. J and Jargat were in traditional outfits and look like they were married. Manyata walk in and hugged her sister as tight as she can than look at jargat and back at J. Uday, Unnati and Vijay walked in and went into Shock memo.

Manyata finally said.

Manyata: J why are you dressed like this and what is jargat doing here?

J did not answer.

Manyata asked again but no answer.

Maharaj Brijraj: manyata I will tell.

Manyata turn and saw her father standing right behind her.

Maharaj Brijraj: well your sister and jargat got married last night.

Manyata: what? How? Where? And why?

Manyata fainted.

Manyata was unconscious. Uday pick her up and laid her on the bad. Doctoar Saab come and check her up. Manyata was weak because she didn't eat anything since 2 days. Uday sat with manyata until she woke up. He told her the whole story how j and jargat got married and now jargat's family is not accept the married.

Manyata got and went to go see j. J and Jargat were having a conversation. Manyata did not go in but heared everything. Manyata decided that she would bring happinesss in her sister' s life.

Manyata head toward dadisa' s office. Everyone was there. Both families.

Maharaj Brijray: manyata beta you should be in your room. Your not well

Manyata: papa I am fine and I would like to speak to dadisa alone.

Komal : but why?

Manyata: don't ask me question and just let me.

Dadisa asked everyone to leave.

Now only two of they were in the room.

Dadisa: what wrong manyata?

Manyata: dadisa remember the day that I become a perfect princess as you want.

Dadisa: of course beta. It was the happy day of my life. But why?

Manyata: remember what you said to me " I will be a queen like no other and rule not only one kingdom but two."

Dadisa: yes and in time you will be and hugged manyata.

Manyata: well I think it time to fit in that role.

Dadisa look at manyata confused

Manyata: dadisa want to make the decision for J' s situation as queen of Devgarth.

Dadisa know nothing she would say or do would stop manyata. She was determined to solve the current situation.

Dadisa: what do you have in mind?

Manyata: first call everyone into the throne room.

Dadisa ordered the maid to inform everyone to meet her in the throne room in two hours.

Manyata went to her room and looked in the mirror. She called the maid and told her to not let anyone in her room until she say so. Manyata decided to change clothes. She was still in the sari she wore to the party. Manyata took a quickly shower and got dress. She decided to eat some before she fainted again.

Manyata change into

It was almost time to meet everyone in the throne room. She made her way out of her room and toward the other wing of the palace where the throne room was location. Both families were there already and so was Jargat' s family. The royal families was confused to see them but did not reaction. Dadisa enter and sat with the family instead out the throne. Everyone looked at her confused and asked why she was sitting there. She says "my time is over to sit on the throne" and dismissed them.

Manyata was in front of the front of the throne room. Where I maid inform her only to go in where rajamata called her to.

Dadisa got up and asked everyone to be quiet. The whole staff of the mahal and both families were in the room with jargat' s family.

Dadisa: we are here to solve that the current sitiution a upon as but only different is that today I will not makinge the decision but my granddaughter Rajkumari Manyata Singh of Devgarth will.

As dadisa finish her sentence the doors open and manyata walked in and sat down on the throne.

Everyone was surprised at manyata but not allowed to question the person sitting on the throne.

Dadisa walked toward her seat and sat down.

Manyata got up and said.

Manyata: from now on. I will make regard Devgrath and its royal family. One more thing my decision are final and can only be changed by me. If someone does not like them they can leave the house.

Everyone were shock and look at everyone confused.

Manyata continue.

Manyata: as dadisa said today I will make the decision.

Manyata took a deep breath and spoke.

Manyata: I have decided that J and Jargat wedding is accept by the royal families but we will have to form a public marriage to the media. So both families recuperative stay the same. I now that both families have they differences but it best forget now. Plus I heard that both families were think of the marriage before I come along so what wrong now. Anyway if anyone does not like my decision they may leave but J and Jargat marriage is accept. Like it or not.

Manyata finish her statement and left.

To be Continued



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sorry if there grammar and spelling mistake
i go to french school. English is my third language.

hope people like it
i want to try to write something.
there will be more romance part in the part 18 between manveer and J and Jargat and Unnati' s love interest will entry too.
my story in different than the original one
Edited by Somia3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved how she stood up for her sister well written loving this os/ ff thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏love it great job...and i am sooo happy manyata supported her sister's happiness...thanks for the pm...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

nicely written again.. i cant wait to read the 18th part for manveer's romance 😳 thanx for the pm!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part cont soon n plzzz pm me on d next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
waooo jargat nay aakar bara acha kaam kia...J ko lay gaya...now finally in next post we will have manveer's romance...waooo...
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz pm me

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