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Posted: 13 years ago
Part Fourteen

Manyata: what surprise?

Uday: just come with me?

Manyata: uday where are we going?

Uday: shhh! Princess your yelling is going to wake everyone up?

And lit her up into his arms. Now uday was crrying manyata. Manyata just stared at him with love. They entered uday's room and placed manyata on the bed and uday sat down. Uday got up and headed toward his closet.

Manyata grabbed uday's hand and said

Manyata: uday, why did you bring me here and what are you up to?

Uday laughed at manyata and her question.

Uday: princess it nothing like that. I just wanted to spend time with you. So I through that we will watch the stars on the terror. Let me change and then we will continue with my plans.

Manyata: what plans?

Uday: be patient princess. You will find out soon.

Manyata frowned and said

Manyata: I hope you have good plans. You know your keep me from my sleep.

Uday walked out of the closet and smiled at manyata.

Manyata got up and started to walk around the room. Manyata was looking at the painting in the room. Uday moved closer to her but manyata back away. This continue until manyata was against the wall. Uday ran his fingers thought her hair and all the way down to her hand. Manyata also enjoyed being closer to him but denied sawing it.

Uday: princess

Manyata nodded.

Uday: do you know that you are the first girl that I never get enough of. I always want to spend more time with you. It never enough.

Manyata smiled and put her hands around uday's neck and said.

Manyata: and why is that?

Uday: well princess you are different than other girls.

Uday put his hand around manyata and pulled her closer.

Manyata led in and whispered

Manyata: what's next?

Uday smiled and picked her up and said.

Uday; how about a kiss?

Manyata: let me think about it? Do I have a chose?

Uday put her down and awaited for manyata to make the first move.

Manyata kissed uday on his cheek and ran toward the balcony. Uday grabbed her and whispered

Uday: not so easy.

Manyata pushed uday on the bed and ran away. Uday tried to catch her.

Uday give up and a song sequence started. The song was chori chori from Lucky: no time for love. Played and uday and manyata lip sang to it in they style.

After the song they were on the terror.

They were in each other's arms.

Uday: manyata you wouldn't leave me for akash? Right.

Manyata stood up and fold her arms a with a frown. She come closer and slowly broke her frown into a smile and said.

Manyata: uday I love you and akash is history. I will never leave you not even for akash. Uday I am your princess and always will be and kissed him.

Uday pulled manyata closer and said.

Uday: I love you.

Manyata and smiled. They layered down the floor and fallen a sleep.

THE NEXT MORNING.

The families started to look for them and found them on the terror a sleep in each other's arms.

Dadisa order J to wake manayata. J walked over and whispered.

J: jiji wake up. It's morning. Look everyone is here.

Manyata woke up and realized that she and uday had fallen asleep in the terror last night. She quickly got up and saw everyone staring at her. She looked down toward the floor. She so to embarrassed to look them in the eye. Unnati walked over and got Uday up. Now both of them were look at the floor and couldn't look at anyone.

Maharaj Brijraj: so manyata beta. How was you date?

Manyata and Uday look up and surprised at the maharaj's question

Manyata: are you mad?

Everyone look at each other and busted in laughter.

Maharaj Grijraj: why beta would we be mad at you. You and uday just fall asleep watching the star. We did that when we were young too. It's nothing to be mad at.

Manyata looked at dadisa

Dadisa walked over and said.

Dadisa: now go change and meet us at the breakfast table. J and Unnati will help you.

Manyata, unnati and J left.

Uday: I'll go change to

Dadisa: wait a second.

Uday toward.

Maharaj Grijraj: uday were not mad at manyata. Does mean that you're off too.

Maharaj Brijraj: uday we should find you and manyata like this again.

Dadisa: we know you and manyata wouldn't do anything wrong but finding a girl and boy asleep together with be married. You know what people would think. We have to problem with you taking manyata out on date but wait until you're married to do this.

Komal: we wouldn't want the media bad mouthing you. Don't let manyata that we were not happy to find you two together like this. She will started blaming herself again.

Maharaj Grijraj: uday be careful next time

Uday nodded

Maharaj Brijraj: we are not mad but we are worried about your and manyata's reparative .

Uday: it wouldn't happen again.

Dadisa nodded and uday left to change.

At the breakfast table.

Everyone was there but manyata and uday. They couldn't bring themselves down but had to because it was dadisa' s order. Manyata and uday both entered the dinner area that the same time.

manyata was dressed in this.

Manyata walk over and sat next to komal and uday sat next to his dad.

Vijay Bhai whispered to unnati and J " want to have some funn?" they nodded.

Vijay Bahi: so manyata what did you and uday do last night.

Everyone smiled at each other and uady and manyata stared at each other.

Manyata tried to change the topic.

Manyata: so vijay bhai what do you like to do when you come ton Devgarth?

Vijay Bahi: nothing really. just sat around and read books. Anyway back to my question. So what did you two do. Tell me.

Everyone look toward manyata and awaited her answer. Manyata had no chose but to answer

Manyata: we watched the star and talked.

Everyone look at Uday and J said.

J: I through uday was more romance.

Vijay Bahi: that sees boring

Vijay Bahi: Uday you lose your touch

Manyata smiled at Uday who now was mad at her for talking everyone what they did last night.
To be Continued


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it that was so cute and beautiful loved it thanks for the pm

how about a romantic picnic or a boat ride
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey gal thnks for the PM!!!😉
loved it loved it n loved it really romanticly n amazingly written👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thnks for sharing my love plzz do continue to write more i would love to read more...😉😳
Edited by Angel_20 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏awesome...great scene between them...loved it it was cutte/sweet...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
great as usual... thanx for the pm.. continue to write more when u have time :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
its great 😊
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
good going..interesting..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳Awww, i loved this scene
very romantic
Awesome
Please contiue soon
Thank you for PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
again a brilliant part 👏

Please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful ... Aww. Soo Cute, they fell asleep on the terrace staring at the stars 😍 ...
Loved Vijay Bhai teasing Manyata... it's soo funny , I can imagine their height of embarrasment at the moment 😉
Amazing Update, Thanks for the PM and Continue Soon 😊

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