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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

awesome update loved it that was perfect love how the relationship is molding and bonding finally she is starting to act as the princess she was born to be akash is such a pain love how uday handle the situation that my is mu hero he smash him without putting a hand on him loved it one of my favorite part was when she told j that he will always want her (manyata ) and another was when she called rajmata dadisa finally she is accepting her family thank you for the pm and a fabulous update

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

i loved the update..Udayveer is just so good..i really like the budding relationship between Uday & Manyata..it is simple, soft & yet very beautiful...i was picturising each of Udayveer & Manyata's scenes... very well written..keep up the good work..now i'am eager to read more...please continue as soon as you can..😊

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647655

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

I love when you update! It always makes my day seeing ManVeer!

I would love to help you with outfits and other things! Cause I love this FF! Except Hindi, I suck too, probably worse than you. 😆 I'll PM my suggestions for outfits.

Lots of love,

Kajol

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Sumanpreet Ojla

@suman4evr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Super update Reeha.. 👏.totally loved it...ooo manveer first kiss😍 ...even if it is only on the cheek...a kiss is a kiss.😉 ..too bad the reporters werent there to capture the moment in a picture ... But also glad they werent there because that was a private moment for them...ohhh i hate that akash... 😡 ..sheesh he saw manyata happy with uday so he comes up that she is being forced to like him...com'on akash she hasnt even called you for the past couple of days...get the picture.. 😡..u are so out of her life...now there is only one man in her life...uday... What does uday have in mind now...wuts gonna happen on this date...first time hand kiss...second time cheek kiss...omg is the next one gonna be lip kiss???? 😳 update soon reeha and thanks for the pm 🤗

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: limbu.simmy

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With J, I've got nothing to say.. You have nailed it- " He always wanted me and always will".. It can't be get any better than this.. ROTFL 🤣 🤣 at J..

UV and Akash confrontation: Least said Better.. UV's got 10/10 from me 😉..

Best thing: "Every girl kisses few frogs before she finds the real Prince " 😍.. Haiii I'm dreaming abt UV now.. I Tell You Reeha ( imagine in Vijay's style), you do come up with best quotes to support what you've to say..😛

Ok Finally.. Thanks for keeping Chikki as well on this part.. So Chikash can actually happen 😆.. Poor Chiki she must be totally broken hearted 🥺 WhenMajnu didn't even offer her a ride😆..
. She looked at him with worried eyes, almost as large as the two orbs dominating her head.
Red : Reeha this is just EPIC.. 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Thank you Simmy! I always look forward to reading your response!🤗

I was wondering if I should have made M say that to J, but I think the moment was called for when she accused Manyata of being desperate for Uday (ironic nah?😉) And I really needed a moment where Manayta has her own room...you'll see why in part 12😃, so I thought this situation fit, and would force Manyata to have some class and dignanty. You, know continue the transformation that hasnt happend on the show yet😡

I was smiling when I wrote the frog line, I'm sorry I gave Akash the last word, but it is necessary, so bear with me!😊

And I'm so happy you loved the Chikash Moment! Had to give our favourite Headset girl a shout-out😉

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Suman_4_NivRen
Super update Reeha.. 👏.totally loved it...ooo manveer first kiss😍 ...even if it is only on the cheek...a kiss is a kiss.😉 ..too bad the reporters werent there to capture the moment in a picture ... But also glad they werent there because that was a private moment for them...ohhh i hate that akash... 😡 ..sheesh he saw manyata happy with uday so he comes up that she is being forced to like him...com'on akash she hasnt even called you for the past couple of days...get the picture.. 😡..u are so out of her life...now there is only one man in her life...uday... What does uday have in mind now...wuts gonna happen on this date...first time hand kiss...second time cheek kiss...omg is the next one gonna be lip kiss???? 😳 update soon reeha and thanks for the pm 🤗

@ Bold : Wait and read my dear, just wait and read!😆

I'm glad you liked it: and thanks for reading! 🤗

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@be-happy-always

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

lovely...

enjoyed reading it 😊

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Awesome job Reeha, I loved it! It was nice to see Moniya finally transformed into Manyata. And the gradual understanding and relationship forming between ManVeer is so adorable. Continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊

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Preet

@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

Let me tell you what I loved about this update Reeha...ALL OF IT!!

LOL. 😆

I loved the kiss between Udhay and Manyata. And everything that came after that was just to cool to put into words. Woman, you astound me with every update. Just when I think it can't get better, you do something to out do it! 👏

Yaar, where is the flying kiss emoticon when you need it? MUAH!

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#340

I absolutely HATE that J and Akash saw that moment between Uday and Manyata. It was such a sweet moment, and the other two coloured it so horribly. Disgusting. Of course, a part of me is hoping that, although it may take awhile, J and Manyata reconcile and build a sisterly relationship. Or at least a friendship. I feel sorry for J. For Akash, not so much.

But the subtle changes in Manyata are amazing. Cannot wait for more.

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