The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 35

speechless. 😳

Wow Reeha!You were fantastic as always👏.If there would be oscar awards for writting these type of stories you would have won thousands already!!!and by the way, thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: shrarrti

Let me tell you what I loved about this update Reeha...ALL OF IT!!

LOL. 😆

I loved the kiss between Udhay and Manyata. And everything that came after that was just to cool to put into words. Woman, you astound me with every update. Just when I think it can't get better, you do something to out do it! 👏

Yaar, where is the flying kiss emoticon when you need it? MUAH!

Thank you Preet! I always look forward to your input! *Flying kiss emoticon* right back!😉

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I absolutely HATE that J and Akash saw that moment between Uday and Manyata. It was such a sweet moment, and the other two coloured it so horribly. Disgusting. Of course, a part of me is hoping that, although it may take awhile, J and Manyata reconcile and build a sisterly relationship. Or at least a friendship. I feel sorry for J. For Akash, not so much.

But the subtle changes in Manyata are amazing. Cannot wait for more.

Thank you for being honest Anhdara!

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

speechless. 😳

okay..let me gather myself😆...what did i love the most?

your description of maanyata's transformation? udayveer's dialogues to akash? J's temper tantrum true to her character? Brijraj and DS's pride...seriously, these i think are the exact things that will happen in the show. 👏

so i'll tell you what i loved the most: the one thing that seems impossible as of now-uv kissing maanyata on the cheek-and maanyata actually feeling all ' CONFHUSED' 😉😉 because of it! 😍🤣

loved loved the update and thanks for updating was kind of UV Chronicles deprived.😆

megz!😳

AWWW thank you Megz! Love reading your OS's as well. I feel so guilty when I read them, I think "Oh crap, I should probably finish the next segment in TUC" I hope your right, that some of these moments are universal enough to transend into the show!😊

Reeha! Awesome update!

Uff, the way you portray ManVeer, I'm always left begging for more. I generally don't like FFs but with yours, I just scroll down and down and down being completely lost in the words.

The ChiKash moment was though expected but a little of a shocker. You just put comedy into it by comparing the eyes to her permanent headset! Lolz!

The kiss on the cheek was BEAUTIFUL!!! Uday is losing it! And the line that she was the first and last girl he ever kissed? JUST LOVED IT!!!

What Royals re! They fight with words more than fists and I super admire that. Both in Uday and Manyata's case when they fought with their "rivals". The M-Brijraj scene was so sweet! Such a cutesy father-daughter interaction. Manyata's reaction to the kiss was amazing. She's caught in a whirlwind of emotions now.

Can't wait to read more now that Uday and Manyata both are feeling something something inside. Oh, it's gonna be GOOD!

Regarding Hindi - there wasn't a lot of it and whatever it was, it was good. Just two points. While writing big in Hindi (you wrote Barda), remember that you either use a R or a D for it. Using both letters looks strange. So, for such words always remember, either R (BARA) or a BADA( BADA). Also, for DS (you wrote Dadi Shab, which changes the whole pronunciation), you should spell is DADI SAAB (according to the show) or DADI SAHAB (as sahab is suffix which is commonly used for elders or masters) Everything else was alright, no need to shout about it in the PS. :P