Two Pillars Apart -pg 4- Uday Manyata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

wow,this was beautiful.Great job👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
wow beautiful post loved it!

thank you 😊 appreciate your comment

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ..Ananya-kmh..
O.M.G. Sooo beautiful it was..very well written :) :) Loved every bit of it :) :) See that's why I tell you to write more stuff..Too good :) :)

awww 😳thanks so much for the encouragement 🤗

i was stilling aimless thinking of U&M when i thought of writing this :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: smiley1000
Wow.. I wish I can write a beautiful comment on ur beautiful posts ..they are so well written. 👏. You were not less than any professional writer according to me..just great👍🏼

One to mention was that u said even he doesnt understand himself..🤣 I agree!

omgosh 🤗🤗 probably the best comment I've ever received and will receive on my writing .

Lol😆 yes Uday is a confused soul ..poor him and poor us 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: minizz
wow,this was beautiful.Great job👏

thank you so much

appreciate it 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--
beautiful post

thank you😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: _SuMmEr_LoVe_
Thanks to everyone who had read my earlier post and encouraged me to write on...
I don't really know if this makes much sense. just wrote what i feel. So i hope you like and please ignore all the spelling errors. Comments are more than welcomed

Two Pillars Apart
You and I, I and you seem to be two pillars apart yet bond together; weaken by a storm, trapped in isolation and barren by expectation.

Standing here two feet apart from you yet a distance of one placed between, so close that I could feel your soul yet distant enough to fade away. Years of distance have weakened the ground of truth, conceit and hate breeds within. Seek within and you will find emptiness, seek darker and you find memories. Memories of a lost princess that no longer exists, let her stay safe within my memories, for now tears drain from her eyes, her smiles weakens. Surrounded by foes, pushed by expectation and punished by I. The closer you get the farther distant I become, the soil of lies strengthens.

A storm swirls within you, the more I try to understand the farther I drift apart. Built with a hard exterior you make it impossible to realize what lies beneath the surface. Each time I manage to get a crack across the exterior beyond hardens. What is it that you hide beneath that smirk/smile? Standing here two feet apart yet a distance of three placed between. Standing here as a storm passes by let me strengthen the ground you stand on let me turn to dust while you rise on.

You and I, I and you so alike, we conceal everything with a smile; no one knows the longing that dwells within.

this was really amazing, your intuitiveness regarding the emotions of these characters, and the depth from which you write is truly remarkable. You have talent. all the best to you. xo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: AngelGurlr

this was really amazing, your intuitiveness regarding the emotions of these characters, and the depth from which you write is truly remarkable. You have talent. all the best to you. xo

😊 this is such an amazing comment for me😊

and really love ... i just write what i feel toward the characters

thank you so much😛