Two Pillars Apart -pg 4- Uday Manyata

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I've been reading a few post concerned on UV's behaviour
So I decided to give my 2 cents, it's a little long though.

A Battle between the subconscious and conscious mind.

- Conscious Mind
UV, the master mind, sees Maanyata as nothing but a ladder, a ladder that will lead him and his father to power. Through Maanyata he will achieve; wealth, power, the trust of the people and the kingdom. It matters not if he does not love Maanyata or she loves him. Maanyata is UdayVeers property, his golden bird, which he must by hook or crock keep her in front of his eyes in fear she may escape. Because with her goes his dream of power.

- Subconscious Mind
Maanyata is the 3 year old girl who UV spent his tender days with; who he is still able to recall naive memoirs of her when she isn't. Before he met Maanyata, the mention of her name would change his behaviour. His stoned face would soften, his eyes would spark, is that a spark of tear, hope or of fond memoirs? Motive it definably isn't. One evening at an age of so he accidently left a scare on her. A scare that still haunts his dream, a scare that he regrets. But that very scare has now given identity to Maanyata, it isn't a scare but a proclaim, a print that Maanyata is his. She is an uncivilised, low class girl living in a cawl, working as a cleaner yet she amazes him with her pride and refusal to bow to no one. Now that he has found her, he is divided. His motives tell him to keep on task, do not fall for her smile, do not hurt for her tears .He walks with a smirk, chest handle high, he doesn't care for her, though he cannot stand the sight of someone but him touching her. He does not love her, yet he cannot hear the mention of her name taken by her "lover." She has nothing but bad mouthed him left him with bites and scratch marks. But that does not anger him instead he smiles and admires her for he had given her the haq to do so whatever she wishes to him ever since they both came in existence of each other.

- When they collide , the subconscious weights heaver

Maanyata becomes the ladder of wealth, not of greed but of love and trust. A ladder he climbs each day in hope of becoming a better man. To find the boy he once was and to destroy the person he has become in the absents of her. Though it is a long journey he isn't too far, for she stands in the middle awaiting him. Because the final steps they must climb together for these are the steps that will test they're strength of love,understanding and trust. Once they make it to the top of the ladder they become inseparable they become one.

I hope what i wrote becomes true .. if not ...what a waste of time 😆
...uuufff such a long post! I decided to at the last part or it'd been even longer 😲🥱But I do hope you enjoyed reading it ..
plz ignore the spelling errors

Let me know your takes 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Summer,beautiful writeup.thoroughly enjoyed it.just hope the CVs have enough sense to show UV-Manyata journey as beautifully as you have written😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love ur post. you have a way with words, that is so smooth and full of finesse. please do post the part you left out. i would love to read it. x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG !!! you just spoke my mind... i was having the exact same feeling...his personality is so conflicting, really its hard to understand if he actually cherishes her or sees her as a gold mine, hope his character will unfold slowly and his behaiour becomes more clear.


It wud be great to see him get jealous over manyata's constant attention to akash, and not acknowledge him at all... cant wait for them to fall for each other...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely post uday will change
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i reaaly want his heart to change but not his attitude... kuddos to ashish kapoor for playing the cool seductive devilish prince..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved each and every bit of it..Very well written :) :) I Agree with every word of yours..I could see the possessiveness he had for Manyata when the guards were told to tie her to the chair,The jealousy was experienced when he was talking to Akash regarding her,sadness was felt when he heard BR and bua bad-mouthing Manyata..Soo many layers this character has n you have explained them beautifully..will look forward to read more of your updates :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: minizz

Summer,beautiful writeup.thoroughly enjoyed it.just hope the CVs have enough sense to show UV-Manyata journey as beautifully as you have written😊



😳 thank you for reading and liking ... i hope the same :) hope the CVs are able to display it a hundred times better to what i have thought ...fingers crossed :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelGurlr

i love ur post. you have a way with words, that is so smooth and full of finesse. please do post the part you left out. i would love to read it. x


Thank you ... 😳... appreciate you wanting to read the rest however i haven't writen it..its still in the mind...Let me guess :) you like watching or reading romantic novels that are based in a certain time frame ?? jrks 😆 just taking a guess... my friends get bored when i write stuff like this ... they're often like ... what period do you live in?
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Originally posted by: poulomi12

OMG !!! you just spoke my mind... i was having the exact same feeling...his personality is so conflicting, really its hard to understand if he actually cherishes her or sees her as a gold mine, hope his character will unfold slowly and his behaiour becomes more clear.



It wud be great to see him get jealous over manyata's constant attention to akash, and not acknowledge him at all... cant wait for them to fall for each other...


haha great minds think alike 😃 UV's a very complex person ... will take loads of time to understand him.But ufff a angry UV is too hot to handle .. love it when he gets jealous...men look the best when they're jealous ...sexy 😆

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