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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆You are still angry with him about that? Even Swadheenta has forgiven him for it... but none of us are letting it go... 🤣


Well we start letting it go than who will get angry at ADarsh for his follies 😆😆
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Hey, I am sorry I couldn't comment earlier on the 3rd part. I read it some time ago...

As angry as Swadheenta is on Adarsh, she needs him to get over this terrible experience too. He is the only one who can heal her wounds and make things normal. So, I am glad they are trying hard and are inching back towards some sense of normalcy.

I do believe however that Jai and Manohar are getting off easily. A divorce does not begin to cover all his bad deeds. I would prefer if Jaya stayed in the house and taunted him every day of his life like he did to her for the first 5 years of their marriage... leaving him alone will make things easy for him I think.


Thanks for commenting Priti.Yes Swadheenta needs Adarsh for retaining normalcy in her life.Well we can't have Jaya taunting Jaidev for another 5 years.it will make their marriage a taunting marriage. I always believed that Jaya deserved a fair life with somebody who would respect her and Jaidev is not that person.
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Part 4
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Swadheenta woke up next morning feeling slight better than she had feeling in the last few days.Talking with Adarsh had helped her but she better not say that out loud as it would give a brownie point to Adarsh.After getting married Swadheenta had understood that in fight with husband brownie points matter a lot.Simmi had helped her understand that system. Simmi had told her one day"Swadheenta agar hum give up kar dete hai toh unhe satisfaction mil jate hai ki they are right.Never give up and never tell them that they are right"Swadheenta had religiously followed that advice and it was working as well. ...
Swadheenta was getting ready when she noticed Adarsh looking at her the same way he looked at her when he had seen her first time.Like a love struck puppy...Adarsh could not take his eyes off his beautiful wife.And she looked more beautiful in black.He noticed she looked at him with questioning looks which he decided to address.

Adarsh-Why are you looking at me with such questioning looks ??? I am allowed to look at you aren't I ?
Swadheenta-Because we are still fighting.You making this kind of face uh... well...you know what nothing...
Adarsh (smiling widely and bringing her close)Oh my god my face makes your anger melt doesn't it.
Swadheenta (Not looking at him)-Tumhe nahi lagta tum aapne aap ko bahut importance dete ho...Aisi koi baat nahi hai ok...
Adarsh (closing in on her)-Ok so it makes no difference to you if I come close to you.
Swadheenta-Uh no not at all.

Suddenly they were so close as if their noses were inches apart.Adarsh could hear his wife's increasing heartbeat...Though Adarsh was tempting to give her a kiss he knew that right now they were going on right track and he better not rush and ruin it.Everything else can wait.Adarsh was holding Swadheenta so close and protectively as if she was going to leave him and Swadheenta noticed it.

Swadheenta-You know Adarsh I am not going anywhere.You have fretting over this issue ever since I have came back.Mai yahi hu tumhare saath.
Adarsh-(getting emotional)-You have no idea Swadheenta what it was seeing you stabbed lying in pool of blood in hospital looking pale.It was as if I had almost died during that moment.Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh.Do you even realize mera kya hota ??Tum toh ghus gayi us terrorist ki den mei bina kuch soche samjhe bina mere bare mei,apne parents,mamu-mami ke bare mei soche.
And than your anger that day on me.More of emotional I got scared that you might just opt for divorce rather than staying with me.
Swadheenta-Adarsh are you insane ? I love you, yes I am angry with you but that doesn't mean that instead of working out problems I would leave you and go away.We are working our problems out that is better solution than divorce.Please calm down I am not going to divorce you.Pehle hi kaha tha tumse itni jaldi peecha nahi chotega...
Adarsh-Chalega.Mujhe peecha chojvana bhi nahi hai.

Suddenely both Adarsh and Swadheenta heard commotion downstairs which had Simmi's voice more prominent.Adarsh got worried thinking maybe Mom and Simmi had their arguments once again.But there was some other voice as well Abhay maybe...What was going on ???
Suddenly they heard one more voice.Mom...Adarsh and Swadheenta rushed downstairs to see the commotion which had raised Mom's voice.Swadheenta was shocked at the scenario in her house.Bundelas...

Swadheenta (Getting angry)-What are you doing here in my house ? Haven't you taken enough from me Yash Bundela ? Atleast now let me live in peace...
Mrs Bundela-Swadheenta I relaize your pain...
Adarsh (angrily)-really you of all the people undersatnd her pain ?? If you would have understood her pain you would not be here Mrs Leela Bundela.
Vanshika-Of all the people Adarsh your family should not talk about the pain inflicted on Gilanis.It was your dad and brother...
Swadheenta-(angrily)ENOUGH.You Vanshika Bundela have the guts to stand in my house and blame my father-in-law and brother-in-law while your brother murdered my little brother.
Mrs Bundela-Swadheenta I know what Yash did was unforgivable but Manohar bhai sahab...
Swadheenta-(Emotionally)For what they have done they are getting punished for it.And what Yash has done he will get punished for it Mrs Bundela.It would be better if you leave the house right away.That's why you came here right ? To see if I would forgive Yash than my answer is no.I will never forgive Yash.He killed my brother took disadvantage of the fact that Abahy was in coma almost destroyed both my families.And Vanshika you will never realize what I have lost because your brother is still here.You destroyed him Yash and for what Radhika.She hates you Yash.She was the one who requested me and Mamu-mami to get you punished for what you have done otherwise everybody would misuse their power,So Get out all of you and NOW.
Suhasini-You heard what my daughter-in-law said Get Out.You cme here thinking we would support you since the political backing you had is no more due to Yash.

Swadheenta rushed to her room to get ready.The Bundelas had made her more upset.Why did they have to come in front of her.She and Adarsh are going on right track.SHe is feeling good after so many days but no they have a habit of ruining everything it seems.She was making coffee in the kitchen for Adarsh but her mind was elsewhere and suddenly she heard Simmi's voice.

Simmi-Swadheenta are you ok ??
Swadheenta-I am fine Simmi.Yash just caught me offguard.
Simmi-Yes I saw that.Relax Swadheenta jo jaisa chal raha hai use vaisa hi rehne do.Agar zyada sochogi toh aur confuse ho jaogi.By the way Mom ne hum sab ko bulaya hai.
Swadheenta-Ok I will be there.
Swadheenta had noticed that Mom had been behaving something odd since yesterday.Jaya bhabhi had gone to her mother's house and ever since Mom looked like she was sitting on nuclear bombs.She knew something was up between Mom and Jaya bhabhi as Jaya bhabhi had been way emotional yesterday while going.
Abhay-(smiling)Mom kya baat hai ? Aapke courtroom ki tarah sab ko jama kyu kiya hai yaha par ?
Suhasini-Yeh courtroom hai to Abhay par yaha par mujrim sirf ek hai baaki sab to sirf sach sunne ke liye hai.
Adarsh (Looking at Swadheenta)-Mom all ok ?
Suhasini-Let Jaya come first than I will continue.

Jaya entered the house.She saw everybody waiting for her.She had actually came to sign the divorce papers.Suhasini told her to inform the entire family herself as she could not do it.Jaya walked in remembering all her moments in the family.She also remembered all the times she had trusted Jay during Asad's case and number of times she had told Swadheenta to back off the case.

Swadheenta-Jaya bhabhi what is happening here ?
Jaya-I needed to tell all of you something important.Mai kal yaha se meri Mom se sirf ek din ke liye milne nahi gayi thi.I have decided ke mai Jaidev se divorce lena chahti hu.I can't work on this marriage when there is no trust between us anymore.
Simmi-Bhabhi ye aap kya keh rahi hai.No Mom aap kaheye na kuch.You hate divorces right.Than stop this one.
Suhasini-How can I beta jab galti mere hi bete ki hai.
Swadheenta-Bhabhi please ek baar phir se soch lijeye.
Jaya-Soch liya Swadheenta.I have thought thousand times.This is not going to work anymore.Also can I talk to you once I sign the papers Swadheenta.

Swadheenta (confused)-Sure.

Jaya signed the papers.Manohar looked shocked at Jaya's decision but he was filled with guilt.High guilt.He destroyed Jaidev's marraige for his own ambition Abhay and Adarsh were talking with him.Adarsh and Swadheenta were facing marital troubles.Instead of all this if he had just come clean to his family about the inquiry report than none of this would have happened.But noe he had created the mess he had to face the music for it.

Jaya-Swadheenta I am really sorry.Maine tumse bahut kuch kaha bina kuch bhi jane.Mei bahut shrminda hu.
Swadheenta-Please bhabhi sorry mat kahiya mujhse.It's of you were not aware about anything.
Jaya-Precisely why I should not have said anything.Mom hamesha kehti hai"Poore sach se zyada aadha jhoot khatarnak hota hai".That's what exactly happened with me.Mei sirf aadha jhoot jaanti thi.I should not have reacted this way.
Swadheenta have you forgiven Adarsh ??
Swadheenta-It's still work in progress but good one.
Jaya-Tumhe pata hai Swadheenta tum kitni lucky ho.Jo Adarsh aur tumhare beech hai na use paane ke liye 4 saal tak tadap ti rahi aur jab mila toh Jaidev ne sab barbaad kar diya.Mai jaanti hu ki tum Adarsh se bahut naraaz ho par haq hai tumhara us par.Swadheenta trust na bahut badi cheez hoti and I think ye tum mujhse behtar jaanti ho par tumhe pata hai us ke saath kuch aur bhi hota hai jo bahut necessary hota hai.Pyaar.Tumhara pyaar us ke liye kum nahi hua hai shyad isiliye you both are still together.Tum aapne issues aur conflicts to saath mei bhi solve kar sakte ho.Infact saath mei solve karoge to ek doosre ka support hoga tum dono ko.
Swadheenta (Smiling)-Thank You for the advice Bhabhi !!.Now I know ki mujhe kya karna hai.
Jaya-Bhabhi nahi Swadheenta.Di zaroor keh sakti ho.I will leave.Take care of yourself and Adarsh.

Swadheenta deciphered what Jaya said very quickly and she was right.The person who had hurt her was the person who could bring her out of that hurt as well.She knew she loved Adarsh very much even today.There was no reason why she couldn't forgive him and than work on their issues together.But she was scared today for the first time after Jaya said that she was divorcing Jaidev.What if they lose trust in each other or what if he loses trust that she is willing to work on this relationship as well.When she came back to the room she saw Adarsh talking to his assistant Suraj.She was just standing in front of him.He looked at her intently.

Adarsh-Swadheenta all ok.Tum theek toh ho.?

Swadheenta just hugged him tightly thinking never to leave him.Adarsh reciprocated with the same feeling but it suddenely struck him was she feeling that what happened with Jaidev bhai and Jaya bhabhi no no...He had to throw her this fear out.But they remained in each other's embrace for
few minutes before ADarsh spoike.

Adarsh-(Holding her hands) Swadheenta jo bhai and bhabhi ke saath hua hai woh hamare saath nahi hoga.Don't worry
Swadheenta-(worriedly)Adarsh what if we lose trust on each other ??
Adarsh-Are you mad ? Aisa kuch nahi hoga.That happened once sweetheart.It will not happen again.We will not let it happen again.I will not let it happen again.
Swadheenta (Hugging him once again)-Adarsh it scares me more than anything else.Tumhari aakho mai mujhe aapne liye bharosa nahi dikhta usse badi daar ki baat mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai.
Adarsh (Cupping her face)-Tell me Do you trust me Swadheenta ?
Swadheenta-More than anything else.
Adarsh (Getting relaxed)That's what I wanted to hear.We will work it out together.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear but pls no divorce for jaya and hai pls next part pls soon dear
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loved this chapter so much. So glad that things between Swadarsh are sorted out. Felt bad for Jaya though she deserves a happy ending too.
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I liked jaya's line about trust/solving issues staying together 👏 love to C happiness coming back in Swadarsh life and i like to C Adarsh's hardwork to reestablish Trust..i guess u planned something better for Jaya bcz she deserve happiness .
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I liked jaya's line about trust/solving issues staying together 👏 love to C happiness coming back in Swadarsh life and i like to C Adarsh's hardwork to reestablish Trust..i guess u planned something better for Jaya bcz she deserve happiness .


Yes I have thought something for Jaya as well.But that will be known not now.
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The Bundela's are senseless...!

Jaya, well, she is a nice girl and deserves better. I hope she finds someone good and continues to keep in touch with the family. Jai, the less said the better.

Jaya and Swadheenta's talk was nice. And the resulting effect on SwaDarsh's relationship was even better 👏
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The Bundela's are senseless...!

Jaya, well, she is a nice girl and deserves better. I hope she finds someone good and continues to keep in touch with the family. Jai, the less said the better.

Jaya and Swadheenta's talk was nice. And the resulting effect on SwaDarsh's relationship was even better 👏


yes there will be someone else for Jaya.She will be in touch with Swadheenta and Suhasini and nobody else.yes sometimes a slight push is needed by someone.
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Part 5
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The next morning had brought a sudden relaxation for Adarsh.He was feeling relaxed as his wife was slowly coming back to him.She was slowly trusting him again.And he had to make sure that he continued with the good progress and not ruin by something stupid.Adarsh looked at Swadheenta, she looked so peaceful while sleeping-no tensions,no worries.She looked like little angel who was completely in her dreams but Adarsh knew how this sleep had even came to her.She had suffered so much in these past 2 months.She didn't even mourn her brother's death properly.She had so much preasure.Fightning against Mom,the preasure he was mounting on her and on the top Mamu's life and Asad's name in her hands.She did everything without him.He had promised her he would always be with her.He wanted to do something for her but what.He was racking his brain when he decided to go for a run with Abhay.The doctor had advised Abhay to start with slow running as that would allow him to loosen up and join active duty as soon as possible.

Adarsh gave a kiss to Swadheenta on forehead and went downstairs and saw already ready Abhay waiting for him.

Abhay-Why are you looking so surprised ? We had decided yesterday night that we would start going on run again from today.

Adarsh-I am just surprised that you didn't shout from downstairs like you usually do.

Abhay-Yeah I know but the situation is different now bhi.Now it's not your room alone.Bhabhi is there now.I can't barge in or shout from downstairs.And plus Simmi pointed out I simply can message you on your phone.If I shout Bhabhi kya sochege Kis type ke log rehte hai ghar par ??😆😆

Adarsh (laughing)-Since when do you think ke koi kya socta hai chotu ??

Abhay-Since Simmi told me not to shout.!! 😆.I mean there is no fighting with wives.Aapki toh mujhse zyada bajegi Bhabhi toh lawyer hai.😆😆.Simmi toh zidd kar ke baat mana leti hai Bhabhi ke arguments toh valid hoge.

Adarsh-Are we really going to talk about this ??

Abhay-Ok so tell me how is the progress going on ? All going on right path ??

Adarsh (smiling)-Yes uptil now everything on right path.I am jst confused maybe you can help me with it.

Abhay-What is it ?

Adarsh-She has been pretty tensed since Asad died Abhay and than this case it has just been too much for her and even now I know she is trying hard for both of us but she is still upset about Asad.I really don't understand what to do ? Since even I am bit responsible for everything that went sideways for her.

Abhay-When was the last time you guys were alone and not fighting ??

Adarsh-Chotu !!

Abhay-No Bhai I am serious.When was the last you were sincerely happy with each other's company ??

Adarsh-Sangeet ...

Abhay-There is your solution Bhai.Go out both of you.You need some time alone.Maybe things will work out themselves.Let's sit for a while.I am still getting into grove.

Adarsh-Sure.Actualy you know what that is great idea !! Thanks.

Abhay-Anything for my sister.😆

Adarsh (sadly)-Nothing for me ??

Abhay-Nah. I think I will stick with her.Getting a lawyer in the team is great...Bhai Jaidev Bhai se baat karni hai kya ?? I mean he is alone and sad...

Adarsh-He came pretty late last night.Around 1 at night.

Abhay(surprised) Woah.I hope he didn't drink and came.If Mom finds out than it will be a disaster.

Sinha House

Swadheenta got ready and came downstairs.She knew Adarsh was awake and thinking something deep in his thoughts.But she decided not to disturb his thoughts and him.She knew that he had gone for run with Abhay.They had been discussing it with each other the previous evening.She had been trying to be happy and she was happy that things were finally working out with Adarsh but these two months had been excruciating for her but she didn't need to tell this to Adarsh as he was already tons guilty for everything.She came down and saw Simmi alone in her thoughts.

Swadheenta-Good Morning Simmi !!

Simmi (smiling)-Good morning Swadheenta !! How is that shoulder now ??

Swadheenta-It is fine now.Just have to continue with the medicines for 3 days and than finally done with them as well.I am going to make some coffee you want some ??

Simmi-Yes please...

Suhasni (Smiling and chirpy)-Good morning to both of you !!.Swadheenta can you please make some for me as well.

Swadheenta-Sure Mom !

Simmi-(Whispering) Mom I wanted to talk to you about something .

Suhasini-Ok but why are you whispering beta !! 😆

Simmi-Uh you will know once I finish my talk.Mom don't you think Swadheenta needs some change ? I mean ever since she has came into this house it has all been about bomb blast and case and courts and than she got stabbed .She and Adarsh bhaiyya deserve some time alone.

And Swadheenta and Adarsh Bhai might have worked things out but Swadheenta is still sad about Asad's death.

Suhasini-Hmmm Good point Simmi.They need some time out.They have heel of start to their married life.I almost forgot all this with Jaya and Jaidev mess.Let's think of some place.

Simmi-Mom what about that resort.That is just over 100 kms away and it's really beautiful place.And plus it's way outside the outskirts of Delhi.

Suhasini-Good Suggestion.I will talk to Adarsh.

By the way where are Adarsh and Abhay ??

Simmi and Swadheenta together-Jogging !!

Suhasini-(Laughing) Ok !! Swadheenta how are your parents doing ??

Swadheenta-They are fine Mom.They will be leaving tomorrow for Chennai.

Suhasini noticed that Simmi was correct.Swadheenta was still down about Asad's death and knowing her first experience she also knew Swadheenta would not share it with anybody except Adarsh.She suddenly saw Adar and Abhay enter the house and signaled Adarsh to come into study.Adarsh understood her signal and went to study with her.Simmi understood what it was about.

Suhasini-We didn't get a chance to talk in the past few days Adarsh.I am really sorry beta.How is everything ?

Adarsh-Mom there is nothing to be sorry about.I know you have been stressed about Jaidev Bhai and jaya Bhabhi.

And everything is going fine.We are finally getting back on track.But it is still work in progress.Swadheenta is still you know upset about Asad.I need her to get that out.

Suhasini-(Worriedly)Yes I noticed.Everything has been too much for her Adarsh.And I think after her first attempt at trying to talk about Asad she will not share anything with any member of this family.

Adarsh-Mom she is not that emotional or sensitive that is what makes things difficult for her.Don't you remember how much time she took trying to convey her feelings to me ? And Asad was one person who understood her without her saying anything.

Suhasini-(smiling)-I know.You know whenever I used to see those two together it reminded me of you and Abhay.Any ways I have some suggestion for you.Why don't you guys leave for some days for a holiday.It would be good for two of your relationship and for Swadheenta as well.

Adarsh (smiling)-I was going to talk to you about same thing.

Suhasini-Well I am bit ahead of you.I did the bookings already.I will send you the address and the booking details.I want both of you out of the house by 3 this evening.

Adarsh-Are you sending us on holiday or throwing us out of the house Mom ?? 😆😆.

Suhsini-3 this evening.And remember I want her smiling when you return so work hard for it.

Adarsh-Yes Mom.

Suhasini-BTW have you seen Jaidev.Haven't seen him since this morning ?

Adarsh-Mom don't all nuts but he returned really late at night.Around 1 at night.

Suhasini-WHAT ?? Was he drunk ??

Adarsh-I have no idea about that.Me and Swadheenta were chatting in the balcony when we saw his car that's it.

Suhasini-(calmly)I will deal with it once you and Swadheenta leave.Now Go and get ready !!

Adarsh (smiling)Ok Ok relax Mom.

When Adarsh went to their bedroom he noticed Swadheenta reading a book.God she read a lot.She loved to read.Asad had once told him that when Swadheenta read that was the best time to make har agree to anything.She is so absorbed in it that book of hers that she hardly responds to anybody else.But she looked so cute while she read.

Swadheenta-Why are you looking at me like that ? WHat is running in that mind ??

Adarsh (coming close to her)-Can't I look at my beautiful wife ? I have something very interesting running in my mind by the way.

Swadheenta (curiously)-What ???

Adarsh (Happily)-A Trip.

Swadheenta-What trip ?

Adarsh -(Holding from her waist) Look I know you are upset about Asad but don't you yourself think that we need sometime away from this place.YOU need sometime away from this place.You have been through enough already and you need to talk to me about it.Which is why we need a trip.

Swadheenta-Ok but When do we leave ??

Adarsh-Before 3.Mom's ultimatum.

Swadheenta-(Chuckling) Ultimatum !!

Adarsh-Yeah !!

Suhasni marched towards Jaidev's bedroom.She needed to get him straight.His marriage fell apart that was his own mistake.His brother's are not talking with him-his own mistake.His career was falling apart-his mistake.Everything was on that one choice he made and now he had to live through it.

Suhasini-Jaidev Get up !!

jaidev-Mom I am already up.I just don't feel like getting out of bed.

Suhasini-Wel than get out of the bed.I wll see you in my at 4 in the evening.Consider it an appointment.
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I know.Very less SwaDarsh.But promise next three parts will be just SwaDarsh and less of others.


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