Lost Love : A Swadarsh SS Epilogue page 13 updated 3/9 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: srsan12

I feel all the AUTHORS need to know the difference between grahpravesh (grah (planet) + Pravesh (Enter)) and GrihaPravesh (Griha (home/house) + Pravesh (Enter)). Knowledge is power, there is no need to be ashamed when corrected.


Hey. Thanks. Truly, no harm in learning. I would have made the same mistake 😆. Point noted!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys. ..here is the epilogue. ...hope you like it

EPILOGUE

Bangles. Necklace. Bindi. Maang teeka. She hadn't forgotten anything Swadheenta thought looking at herself in the mirror. She had got ready in haste. She looked okay considering she had barely taken half an hour to get ready.She had been running around all day taking care of the arrangements. After all it was her Bandar ' s sagaai.

She was so exhausted. She checked the clock . She would have liked to get something to drink at least
but there was no time.

She saw someone put a glass of milkshake on her dressing table. She smiled looking at her husband.

" Tum mind reader bhi ho? Bas wish kiya ki kuch peene ko mil jaaye aur tum le aaye. " She asked smiling.

" Main toh aapka personal genie hoon. Aapke wishes poora karna hi toh mera kaam hai. Itne saalon mein apni wife ko itna toh samajh hi gaya hoon. " Adarsh said and with a naughty smile continued " Bahot acchi lag rahi ho. Jaana zaroori hai? "

" Not a bad suggestion Mr Sinha. Waise aap bhi kuch kam handsome nahin lag rahe ho. " Swadheenta replied her hands around his neck.

Adarsh pulled her closer just as the door opened.

" Oops. " Jaya said smiling at them as they both blushed "Knock karna bhool gayi jaldi mein
"

"Its ok Bhabhi. " Swadheenta said smiling.

" Waise tum dono Asad ke engagement pe aa rahe ho na? Woh kya hai na time ho gaya hai. " Jaya asked.

" Haan Bhabhi . Hum Abhay aur Simmi ke saath nikalte hain. Aap aur Bhai Mom dad ke saath aa jaao. " Adarsh said.

" Abhay aur Simmi bahut pehle nikal chuke hain. " Jaya informed.

" Oh. Toh hum bhi chalte hai. Niti kahaan hai? " She asked Adarsh.

" Niti apni Chachu Chachi ke saath chali gayi. Tumhe pata nahin tha? " Jaya told Swadheenta.

Swadheenta looked at Adarsh. Shehad told Adarsh to get Niti ready as she got home only an hour back.

"Niti ko tayaar kisne kiya? "She asked in fake anger.

" Maine...Aur Simmi ne. Bahut pretty lag rahi thi. " Adarsh said chuckling.

" Pretty as in uss se zyaada badi aur heavy dress mein ?" She asked.

Adarsh chuckled again. Niti Adarsh Sinha was the youngest member of Sinha house. The four year old was her Papa ' s princess. With Swadheenta being busy and Jaya moving out with Jaidev who had been transferred from Delhi, Simmi had grown attached to Niti. She was Simmi's doll. They loved playing dress up and Abhay and Adarsh would join in. Niti mostly ended up dressed in huge frocks. The surprising part was that she actually lovedit! Swadheenta and Suhasini always joked on it.

Swadarsh reached Radhika ' s house where the ceremony was to be conducted. Asad, Radhika, Simmi looking amused while Abhay was talking to Aman looking rather serious. Niti who was with them caught sight of them.

"Papa "she called in her tiny voice.

" Does she even remember me? Papa ' s princess. " Swadheenta joked.

" Koi jal raha hai. "Adarsh said smiling.

" Mamma "Niti said asking Swadheenta to pick her up and showed her the dress she was wearing.

" My baby looks the best "Swadheenta said kissing her on the cheeks. "

"Yahaan kya chal raha hai?" Adarsh asked.

Aman came forward and held his hand.

" Dekhiye na Bade papa. Papa mujhe daat rahe hain. " He complained.

" Chottu, tu ne mere bacche ko kyun daata?"Adarsh asked.

" Aap ke dear bateeje ne ek ladke ko maara. Uss se jhagda ki. Main bas uss se pooch raha tha. " Abhay replied.

" Bhaiyya Poori baat suniye. " Simmi said making faces at Abhay and holding her son.

" Maine uss se bewajah ladaai nahin ki. Niti stairs ke paas thi and uss ladke ne use thang kiya. He tried to snatch her toy. Isliye I pushed him off. " Aman said very seriously.

Everyone was amused. Aman sounded so serious that they couldn't help smiling.

" Aman, ladaai karna galat hai. I will have to arrest you some day. "Abhay said trying not to smile.

"Its ok. Meri badi Mumma Delhi ki top lawyers mein se hai. Woh mujhe bacha legi. Hai na? " He asked turning to Swadheenta.

Swadheenta couldn't help smiling at her potential client. She was very fond of Aman. As if that wasn't enough Niti tugged at her. She probably hadn't understood most of what was happening but she knew that her Bhai was in trouble.

" Mumma, bhai ko bachao. " She said tugging at her mother's hand.

Everyone broke out laughing except Niti and Aman.

" Bhai ko help toh kar lenge par ladaai karna galat hai. Don't repeat this Aman. Next time hum mein se kisi ko bataana
" She said hugging the kids.

They were just then joined by the rest of the Sinhas and Aman immediately started telling his other cousin Tara everything. They looked so serious that their Dadi told them to take it to court.

" Lagta hai Sinha house ke bacche ek doosre ko leke abhi se protective ho rahe hain. " Suhasini said looking at her kids

Swadheenta smiled. The kids were so different yet so fond of each other. They saw Tara only during vacations as Jaidev was transferred having decided not to work with his father anymore. While her cousins loved her a lot they had formed a stronger bond with each other. Aman hated being treated like a little boy. After all he was the big brother. He was very protective of his sisters. Sometimes he reminded her of Adarsh. Niti on the other hand, was very sweet but stubborn. She loved her brother a lot. She would follow him anywhere. Tara was very silent and the caretaker of the three. As she watched them together she remembered her own childhood.

At the same moment she felt someone hug her . Asad. He was thinking the same.

"I love you Freedom. You are the best. "He said.

" Arey Bandar. Royega kya? Radhika sagaai cancel na karde. " She said hugging him back.

She saw Adarsh looking at Abhay and Jaidev. Some relationships never change.

Soon the guests started coming. The ceremony began. Asad and Radhika exchanged rings. Swadheenta saw Maamu Maami looking proudly at Asad. This love story hadn't been easy. But finally they were engaged to be married soon.

After the ceremony the elders left soon while the younger lot were spending some time with Asad and Radhika. They had all helped Radhika ' s parents in the arrangements. Now they were all in the living room talking. Swadheenta and Adarsh who had been with the kids entered the room to see Radhika crying. Jaya seemed to be comforting her.

"Radhika, tum ro kyun rahi ho? Tumhari bidaai toh shaadi ke baat hai. Abhi se kyun ro rahi ho? " Asad was asking her.

"Asad, shaadi kuch hi hafte baad hain. After that mujhe apne parents ko chhod kar aana hoga. " Radhika said sobbing.

"Haan. Par abhi time hai na? Bewajah aasoon kyun waste kar rahi ho? Waise Asad bbhi tum Delhi mein hi hogi na? " .

" Accha beta. Bewajah? Yaad hai tu mere bidaai ke time kitna roya tha?" Swadheenta asked.

" Tum ladkiyon ki toh aadat hi hai baat baat par rone ki aur sab ko rulaane ki. "Adarsh said.

" Tum log nahin samjhoge Adarsh. Tum log toh tab samjhoge jab Niti aur Tara ki bidaai hogi. " Jaya said.

" No. Niti aur Tara kahin nahin jayegi. " Jaidev said firmly.

" Kyun? Hum sab toh shaadi ke baad aapke ghar aa gaye na? " Simmi asked.

" Tum log baat ko kahaan se kahaan le jaa rahe ho? they are kids. "Adarsh said sadly.

" Haan bhai. Par Bade honge toh shaadi hogi na? " Abhay asked grinning seeing his brothers worried.

" Bhabhi ke chamche. Tu safe hai toh humein pareshan karega? " Adarsh said smacking him.

"Kya bhai. Main toh bas keh raha tha. Aur phir Niti and Tara are my girls too na? Aur safe toh bilkul nahin hoon. Kise pata iss baar kya hoga. " Abhay said grinning.

" Matlab? " Adarsh asked confused.

"We are expecting again. "Abhay announced.

Swadheenta smiled as Adarsh looked at her surprised. Simmi had told her this morning. Everyone was laughing and congratulating each other. Swadheenta moved away from them and went towards the window and looked at them worried. She felt a familiar touch on her shoulder. Adarsh.

He made her face him. "Kya hua? "

She let the tears come.

"You remember the date today? " She asked pointing to the clock which had just struck midnight.

He did. 1st June.

Swadheenta went on "it scares me Adarsh. This day. Everything went wrong. " She looked at her family laughing and having fun

"This happiness scares me. I know its been years. We are alright. But sometimes I feel this life is a dream. I will wake up and go back to that time again. I fear I will see Asad frightened and scarred again. Abhay in that hospital. Everyone broken. U. Me."

Adarsh pulled up her face and looked into her eyes as he wiped the tears. He said.


" Swadheenta, do you think anyone can forget that day? Asad bhool sakega ki uss din use ek aisi galti ki saza mili jo usne kiya hi nahin? Abhay bhool sakega ki use uss din kya jhelna pada? Main bhool sakoonga ki uss din maine apne bhai ko almost kho diya aur uska dosh apne hi biwi ki family par lagaya? Simmi? Bhai? Radhika? No . koi nahin bhoolega. Par humein ye bhi nahin bhool na chahiye ki hum uss se baahar nikal aaye. Saare rishte aur masboot ho gaye. That was not a nightmare, nor is this a dream. Woh bhi zindagi ki ek phase thi. I can't promise ki zindagi mein aisi problem dobara nahin aayegi. Par promise karta hoon I will be with you always. No matter what. "

Swadheenta smiled. He was right. She looked at the kids playing in the next room. This was her reality now

He pulled her into a hug. She let herself lean on him. Her head on his chest. This was her happy place. Forever.

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Hope you liked this story. ..I enjoyed posting it and reading your comments.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Wow, what an epilogue loved it really enjoyed reading it ,please do continue with other story soon waiting for u to write more on swadarsh u always nail it with your stories dear thanks a ton dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg what an amazing end to this fabulous ff.

Can't believe that it's over now. Please write more ff's I love reading your stories.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: srsan12

I feel all the AUTHORS need to know the difference between grahpravesh (grah (planet) + Pravesh (Enter)) and GrihaPravesh (Griha (home/house) + Pravesh (Enter)). Knowledge is power, there is no need to be ashamed when corrected.


thank u 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: parisjtaime

Omg what an amazing end to this fabulous ff.

Can't believe that it's over now. Please write more ff's I love reading your stories.


thank u dear...I am glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aimsha

Wow, what an epilogue loved it really enjoyed reading it ,please do continue with other story soon waiting for u to write more on swadarsh u always nail it with your stories dear thanks a ton dear

thanks dear...n will update asap😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey nice ss 👏 Abhay-Asad rocks & now junior Sinhas
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dear,😊
Res'ing for all the parts. Will unress as soon as I finish reading it.😳
Thanks for the pm dear coz I really didn't know about this SS.😳
And what's ur name dear? If u don't mind, may I know it?😳
Unresed.😃
Prologue was interesting.😉
Ch 1:-
This part was amazing and equally shocking part!! Loved Adarsh and Abhay's bonding.😃 Abhay-Simmi have junior Abhay, Aman. He is so cute.😳 Jaya-Jaidev have a baby girl.😃 But Adarsh was confused with Abhay's behaviour. And now here comes the jhatka!! Adarsh and Swadheenta's wedding didn't happen in the past and Karan's to be bride was none other than Swa!!!!😲😭 Adarsh and Simmi were shocked to see her. (Even I was shocked to know that!!) Only Abhay knew about it, right?? SwaDarsh met after so many years.😭 Both were shocked to see each other.😲😭 Swa met Aman, Simmi, Abhay. She forgave Simmi, Adarsh, and everyone, that's good,😊 but she moved on from Adarsh?!😲 She also got to know about JJ's li'l daughter. Adarsh was very hurt. Then he met Asad. Loved their meeting and got to know from Asad that Swa doesn't love Karan,😃 but is marrying him for her parents' sake!!😭😕 Asad requested Adarsh to stay.😳 Even Maamu-Maami were present there.😃 Thank god Swa's parents were not there.😉
Ch 2 and 3:-
OMG! SwaDarsh past is so hurtful and painful! One terrorist attack and MU between each other and they separated!! Forever!😭😭 Why did Adarsh believe Swadheenta? She tried so much to tell him the truth, but he didn't believe her!😡 Now he and Swa, both r suffering.😭 Uz penned their pain so beautifully.😳
Ch 4:-
This part was so lovely! Loved Abhay-Simmi-Aman family time. O so Suha also knows about Abhay's plan? great!😆 FB parts were very sad. Its good that Abhay didn't ask Adarsh about Swa after coming out of coma hoping that Adarsh will tell him himself after coming out of his guilt. But that didn't happen and finally Abhay got to know all from Simmi. And on the other side loved Swa and Asad's convo.😳 I really think ki Asad and Abhay have planned something together to reunite SwaDarsh.😳
Ch 5:-
This part was a roller coaster ride wala chapter! At the starting, it was Karan and Swa convo. I know Karan is a good guy and he is not at fault, but I don't want Swa to marry him.😕😡 Then I loved the part where li'l Aman unknowingly bonded SwaDarsh together. Loved SwaDarsh, Abhay and Aman part. So light hearted it was.😆😳 And here comes the heartbreaking as well as touching part. SwaDarsh, even after 5 years, still remembers everything about each other and their families. They finally let their guilt and heart out to each other. Both were shouting at each other for not understanding and waiting to explain to each other.😭 Abhay's last line to Swa made an impact on her.😳
Ch 6:-
This part was amazing! Their reconcile was superb!👏So beautifully written. Both regretted their past decisions and their silly promise of not meeting each other and apologized to each other and accepted it.😃 And they even said "I Love U" to each other.😳 And they were going to kiss each other too!☺️ But *bang*! Abhay-Simmi ne maari entry and their surprised face!😆
Ch 7:-
OMG! This was another heart breaking part!!!😭 So it was not a reunion but they were going to kiss each other, when not in their actual sense?😭 And they were regretting it!😕😭 Will SwaDarsh separate forever?!😕😭 Abhay-Simmi and Asad do something!! Another battle between Suha and Appa!😭 Oh God! What will happen??😕
Ch 8:-
Finally, Swa made her final decision. She broke her wedding with Karan.😃 Even Adarsh didn't go back to Delhi. He returned back to her.😃 This time, both reunited with all their heart!!😃 But Appa and Karan's mom's word, specially Appa's word hurt her very much!😭 But this time Adarsh is with her.😃 But I loved it that SwaDarsh r concerned for Karan too.😳
Ch 9:-
Appa was angry at Swa's decision but Amma managed to make him understand that if Swa's happiness is with Adarsh then let it be.😃 Then came Suha. Suha is happy with SwaDarsh's decision, but also tensed for Karan and his family's reaction and about Swa's parents.😳 Then came Karan that he's completely okay with Swa's decision and he knew that this was going to happen. And then the revelation of Abhay-Asad's plan and how they told Karan about SwaDarsh, etc.😃 I knew that Abhay-Asad planned SwaDarsh's reunion. And finally Appa-Amma forgave Swa and accepted Adarsh and Suha-Manohar asked for Swa's hand from them and they accepted it. And the most awaited scene. SwaDarsh's wedding!!😃 Finally their marriage happened, after a long wait of 5 years.😃 Loved Adarsh-Abhay teasing Swa while returning to Sinha mansion.😆 Loved Swa-Jaya's and Swa-Jaidev's convo.😃 Finally Swa's grihapravesh.😃
Epilogue:-
This was the best chapter!!!👏 Loved all!! SwaDarsh, Abhay-Simmi, Jaya-Jaidev, Suha, the three kids- Aman, Tara and SwaDarsh's princess Niti, Asad-Radhika, Maamu-Maami. Everyone!!!😃 The three kids r so protective of each other, just like their parents. And Abhay-Simmi expecting again.😳 And SwaDarsh moments, I just loved it.😃 Loved each and everyone's bonding so much!!😃 I loved the epilogue so much!! A happy ending!!😃
Again, thank u so much for pm'ing me about this beautiful SS yesterday. Otherwise, I would have missed this awesome SwaDarsh SS.😳

With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Thanx for pm
Nice end to ths ff .loved it .swad was so rite she will definately hav goose bumps on 1st june every year .The day that took away her love ,could also take away her dear brother.But now she knows in all difficult times adarsh will b with her.
Loved the chillar party antics ..

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