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Posted: 18 years ago
New Promo - Part 26

Pratap: Tejali we're going to Goa for some day.

Girl: R u blind? Dekh kar nahi car chala sakte?

Pratap: I'm so sorry ma'am.

Girl: what sorry? Aahhh agar meri koi bone tot jati toh?

Pratap: Ma'am I…

Both: hummhh..

Pratap in car thinking "pata nahi kya samajhti hai kudh ko?"

Abhi: I've to find where Pratap and Tejali are.

Abhi is searching for something in Tejali's bedroom and sees torn paper, he puts pieces together and reads and is shocked.


So guyzz..find interesting??? so wait till u read whole part. 😃

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day_dreamer😊

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Important Note..
Guyz...I'll post Part 26 soon. 😃 A
I know u guyz has to wait long for the updates I'm sorry for that as now college are opened again and also its Ramazan. i'll ry to post atleast 1 part every week I hope u'll understand😳 . So please bear with me. 😊

Regards,
day_dreamer 😊
Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

New Promo - Part 26

Pratap: Tejali we're going to Goa for some day.

Girl: R u blind? Dekh kar nahi car chala sakte?

Pratap: I'm so sorry ma'am.

Girl: what sorry? Aahhh agar meri koi bone tot jati toh?

Pratap: Ma'am I…

Both: hummhh..

Pratap in car thinking "pata nahi kya samajhti hai kudh ko?"

Abhi: I've to find where Pratap and Tejali are.

Abhi is searching for something in Tejali's bedroom and sees torn paper, he puts pieces together and reads and is shocked.


So guyzz..find interesting??? so wait till u read whole part. 😃

Written by:

day_dreamer😊

very interesting!!!!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sim_indian

very interesting!!!!😃

Awww.thankyou.story will be posted tommorrow.

P.S. FC is also Updated. 😃 so do check that too. 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi. I'm so sorry for not stopping by at your FF very often. I just read over the whole story and I must you have done an extremely awesome job! I would like for you to focus on your college but please continue writing. This is a great FF. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: umi82990

Hi. I'm so sorry for not stopping by at your FF very often. I just read over the whole story and I must you have done an extremely awesome job! I would like for you to focus on your college but please continue writing. This is a great FF. 👏 👏


Aww thankyou so much uma for ur concerns.😃
btw story will be posted soon so plzz bear with us 😳😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
KOI APNA YAAN KOI AJNABEE

Guyzzz..there's a new entry in this story of this girl:

SUBHI TIWARI AS NAINA


PART 26

Pratap decides to take teji away from Mumbai.

Next Day

CIDSB

Pratap asks ACP for leave for 5 days. Coz he and teji needs to go Goa

ACP doesn't agree but after a long requesting ACP Agrees Pratap gets happy than ACP asks: Why do you want to leave? What's the reason? Pratap looks away and says: please don't aks me this sir.

ACP: I'm not asking as sir but as friend Pratap.

Pratap: Then as a friend I'll say please don't. and leaves the room while ACP is shocked.

Pratap and Tejali decides to leave for Goa.

Pratap tells teji they're going Goa for few days and that too today.

Teji is happy and little sad for leaving Abhi, but thinks this is good for all of us.

Pratap and Teji reaches in Goa and stays in hotel. While abhi goes to Bureau and finds out that Pratap and teji are on 5 days leave he gets shocked, he tries to know where they gone but ACP didnt want to tell him as Pratap requested ACP not to tell anyone where they are. Abhi gets frustrated and leaves the office.

Goa

Shine Hotel - Night

Teji and Pratap has different rooms but next to each other. Pratap is in Teji's room giving her medicines.

Teji looks affectionately at pratap): why do you care for me so much? Itna khayal mat rakho darr lagta hai.

Pratap: kisse?

Teji: kismet se..Kabhi tumhe bhi kismet mujhe abhi ki….tarhan cheen na le. Pyaar toh khoh diya par dost nahi khoh sakti.

Pratap holds her face in his hands and says: don't worry, nothing of this sort gonna happen. Then hugs her and give her a reassurance smile, and tells her to go to bed now.

Pratap then goes outside and from hotel and goes to beach its quite late night and beach is isolated. He sits there for a while a thinks about how things are going in his life. "I never thought this is how my life is going to be, I never planned it to be my life like this. Why is our lives going not right. Tejali loves Abhi but marrying me because of child we both dont love each other but this world is cruel, that if tejali is not married she will be very insulted, if she goes anywhere people will say that she is a mother but not married. I don't love tejali but marrying her because she's me best friend I'm marrying her coz she is my best friend n at this time and condition she needs her friend more then anyone esle. And abhi I don't know what does he wants? Why is he doing all this? All this is happening because of him" he sits there some more time and think about his future and then after stands up and leaves.

Shine Hotel – Tejali's Room

Tejali is trying to sleep when her phone rings and she looks at the phone it showed private number so she picks up the phone as she thought it might be emergency.

Teji: hello

No one speaks from other end Tejali says Hello..helloo 2 -3 times.

Teji: hell…Then she gets shocked to realise that its Abhi's call.

Teji: A.bhi..tu..m hona? I..know its u. Main tumhari awaaz hi nahi par tumhari khamoshi bhi pehchanti hon.

Teji the nrealises what she said and curse her self for saying it. Abhi while on the other hand is soo happy to hear what teji said his happiness has no limits. Before abhi could speak teji cuts the phone. Abhi then again dials the number but then hangs up and decides that he has to find where teji and pratap are.

Goa

Pratap is driving the weather is stormy but his mind is still on the thoughts of what happening is his, abhi's and teji's life as he is driving he is thinking wat has been happening in their lives, and he is saying to himself that if things doesnt settle three lives will be destroyed.. When suddenly he sees a girl front of his car and puts his foot on brakes and car hits the girl and girl falls in front of Pratap's car. Pratap quickly gets out from car and goes to help the girl he couldn't see her face as her long hairs have covered her face. He tries to help her to get up her back is at pratap, he tires to help her and touches her shoulder as soon as pratap touches her shoulder she turns around and her long her hits pratap's face and pratap closes his eyes when he opens his eyes he sees a innocent beautiful face as the moonlight struck that beautiful face. Pratap is lost in that beauty. Girl is looking at pratap and screams and Pratap jolts back to reality. And is shocked.

Pratap (getting scared): r..u..Al..right???

G: R u blind? Dekh kar car nahi chala sakte?

P: r u al..right? I'm v sorry

G: sorry? What sorry? Ager meri hadhi tot jati toh?

P: par toti toh naih?

G(getting angry): Toh kya tumahara dil hai ke meri hadi totti?

P: u r misunderstanding me.

G: No..I understood u very well.

P(getting pissed): well, appko jo samajhna hai app samajhaye

G: kitne besharam hain app, pehle muhje takkar mari phir iss tarhan se baat ki (in a little girl crying voice) aur upper se sorry bhi nahi kaha.

P: arre..kaha tha maine, par ab nahi kahonga. Glaati tumhari hai tum car ke samne ayi.

Girl finally gets up pushing pratap out of her way and says.

G: apne khayalon mein gum hokar car tum chala rahe thay, yeh nahi dekha ke koi samne hai ya nahi.

Pratap tries to say something but she cuts her off and says ajeeb insaan and both says "HUHHH" (wasu: mota bhai's HUH" lol) and goes to separate ways Pratap gets in the car and drives off, this time carefully (Lol).

Abhi is determined to find where teji and pratap are, so he goes to Teji's house (Or rather breaks in) and goes to her bedroom. He the looks carefully at each thing in her bedroom touches all her things with soo love. He sees a teddy on the left side drawer of her bed he gifted her on her Bday and goes to the teddy and hugs him, while hugging his eye catch something behind the bed and there are some torn pieces so he picks them up and then starts to putting them together. When a wind blows all pieces so abhi again starts putting them together, he realises this page is from teji's diary. He puts all pieces together and starts reading it and is shocked to see what is written.

THE END


Written by: Day_Dreamer & Sallu_Lover




Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
woderful,magnificent!!!!
words are to liitle to describe!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
^^^thanx for liking it. Btw I've updated fanclub with abhi-teji's new pictures so do check it out. 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
today i returned from a trip & studied the updated parts. The story is going so well. Keep it up.

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