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~~Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee~~

Part 27

Abhi sees a torn letter and he picks up all the pieces and then starts to put them together. While putting pieces together he realises that this torn page is from teji's diary. He puts pieces together and starts to read. The letter reads "mujhe pata nahi chal kab mujhe usey Pyaar hogaya, I love him I love" and suddenly a strong wind blows all the pieces.

Goa

Wind blows and the photo frame falls (photo of teji-pratap) and glass breaks, teji gets up and sees this and get scared and thinks "lagta hai kuch ashub hone wala hai, yeh hawayein itni taiz? Lagta hai koi tufaanane wala hai, bhagwan humari raksha karna". And she gets up goes to window and close the window and go back to sleep.

Mumbai

Abhi again collects all the pieces and one piece was missing on the piece on which the person's name was written. Abhi could not control his curiosity and searches for the last missing pieces and finally finds it and put them all togeth and reads "I love my Best Friend, my only Abhi, My Abhimanyu". Abhi gets so shocked, everything freezes, stops. Abhi just become statue totally shocked, he couldn't sense anything for him world stopped there for a moment. Abhi is soo shocked, he reads further "par Abhi toh Anu se pyaar karta hai na. Main usey Kabhi nahi kahongi ke main usey pyar" and its finishes here. Abhi is soo shocked and has tears in his eyes. Abhi "teji..mujh..se Pyaar, par phir? Yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Teji agar mujhse Pyaar karti hai toh pratab kahan se? Tejali ne mujhse Kabhi kaha kyon nahi ke woh mujhse Pyaar?

He doesn't understand anything except that Teji loves him. (hehe, mera ranhjna)

Abhi: Meri toh kuch samajh nahi a raha, mujhe teji se baat karni hi hogi, now its time for the confrontations. I've to talk to teji and I will. Now its time for teji to be mine and only mine forever. I will make her mine she'll listen to me. She will be mine only mine.

Bureau

Abhi is thinking how should I get trough teji as she's not picking the phone, ACP is not telling him where are they? Suddenly the wheels of brain starts turning and he knows how he can get teji's whereabouts. He decides to track down teji's mobile so he puts teji's number and tracks down the number.

Abhi: yes, so these 2 are in Goa. Goa here I come.

Abhi turns around and is shocked to see ACP Ajat there and so is ACP to see Abhi

ACP A: Abhimanyu, what r u doing in bureau?

Abhi tires to make excuse and Acp tells him to leave and abhi leaves, after abhi leaves ACP is shocked nd left thinking.

Goa- Morning

Pratap and Tejali go to mandir, both start praying.

Teji: god give me shakti to fight these circumstances, give me strength to become Pratap's and forget Abhi.

Pratap: God give me enough strength to keep Tejali happy, now nothing goes bad". While both are praying a girl comes in mandir and stands behind them and closes her eyes and starts praying. Pratap suddenly starts to feel uneasy.

Pratap: yeh kaisa ehsaas hai? Kyon ho raha hai yeh?

Pratap then open his eyes at this momoent that girl also open her eyes pratap turns around at the same time girl too turns around and strats too leave and so it pratap. Girl is at front while pratap is few inches behind her, suddenly someone pushes pratap and pratap falls forward and pushes girl, she was about to fall with pratap over her when she holds a wall and pratap is almost over her. Pratap sees the girl and she sees pratap and both r shocked.

Both: oh no not again.

Yepp it's the same girl who had an accident from pratap's car.

Girl: what the hell u doing here? Sharam nahi ati ladki ko mandir mein…chi chi

Pratap getting angry; hey madam its not my fault.

Girl: han han tum toh naiki ke farishte ho na toh tumse koi galati kaise ho sakti hai?

Pratap: hey, I said na its not my fault someone from behind pushed me.

Girl just look at him in disbelieve

Girl: waise toh shariff ghar ke lagte ho par harkatein itni chichurein.

Pratap: hey..watch what u are saying.

Gril: tumhe sharam ani chahiye, aik toh Dhaka dete ho upar se sorry bhi nahi kaha

Pratap rolls his eyes, thinks this girl is now getting on his nerves.

Girl: pehle bhi us raat mujhe marne ki koshish ki aur ab yeh. She makes face in disgust

and Pratap starts to say something when girl just do HUH and leaves.

Pratap gets angry and in anger hit his fist hard on wall. He looks around and sees teji and is shocked. Teji ofcourse had witnessed the whole scene. She comes to pratap, before she could ask anything pratap says leave and head towards to car. Teji had no choice but to go behind him.

In car teji finally asks him about the girl.

Teji: pratap who was that girl and what happened? Why did she said u tired to kill her?

Pratap looks at teji in anger and amusement and teji gets embarrassed.

Pratap: its nothing like this, arre aisie logon ko tamasha karne mein maza ata hai.

Teji (looks at him): do u know her/

Pratap surprised: no, now lets forget about her don't need to talk to about her.

Teji just shouts her mouth.

Mumbai – CID SB

Abhi is talking in his phone.

Abhi: yes, I need to a ticket to Goa for today, next available flight.

Abhi hangs up the phone and turns around and shocked to see ACP.

ACP: Abhi u've to go with ashiwini now its v urgent.

Abhi sohcked : but sir, I've…

ACP: Abhi no excuses, ashwini is waiting go NOW.

Abhi had no choice but to obey ACP's order. Abhi goes outside Ashwini is waitingfor him.

In Car

Abhi is in bad mood ashiwini sees this and tries to ask him what's wrong Abhi just rudely says nothing and ashiwini feels bad. Abhi then just says sorry.

CIDSB

ACP thinking "thankgod I have sent Abhi with ashwini or else he would've gone to Goa where Pratap & Tejali are, its good I saw him bureau in night and came to know what he's upto. I have o fulfil my promise which I gave to Pratap".

THE END

Coming up next:

Confrontations

Abhi: Tum mujhe Pyaar karti ho na?

Secrets

Pratap: I should've told teji about this, mujhe ussey chupana nahi chahiye tha.

Lies

Teji: I don't love you.


Promises

Pratap: Main wada karta hon aur usey nibhaonga bhi.



Written by: Day_Dreamer & Sallu_Lover

Plz guys do comment😃😳



Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
haila our story is getting better yaar i just reading it over and over again 😳 😆 .


now its every one elses turn to say wat they think about this eposide
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Posted: 17 years ago
Important
Hi guyz just want to let u know that I've updated the fanclub too (took ages), so plzz do check that out and do comment. And plz try to be more active on FC. i really takes my energy and time to keep it going but if u guyz won't come so what's the point.
Do check the page 1 I've updated whole page 1 till me last post on that page😃
Regards,
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Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW!!
you both are so good, how do you come up with this
👏

you both have so much talent 😉 😃 😃 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Writer's Note:
Hi guyz just to clear confusion in our story PRATAP DOESN'T LOVE TEJALI. He's donig all this coz tejali is his best friend. I was gonig through story and realized it was written in some part but but our mistake. So i Hope everyone is clear now.

P.S. Thanx for all of u for wonderful comments. Next part will be posted today or tommorrow

regads,
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Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: payal_r

WOW!!
you both are so good, how do you come up with this
👏

you both have so much talent 😉 😃 😃 😉


Thankyou...well thats a scerect kyon bataon😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
~~Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee~~

Part 28

Abhi and ashiwini goes for investigation and come back and give acp update. Abhi asks for leave ACP have no choice but to say yes, coz he now don't have any excuse. Abhi now decides to go by car. Before he leaves he goes to ashwini and say sorry to her again and leaves.

Its getting dark now and abhi is on his way for a confratation from tejali.

Abhi (thinking): ajj chahe jo bhi hojaye main sach jan kar hi rahonga. Agar tejali mujhse pyaar karti hai toh usay muhjse kehna toh chahiye tha. Aur yeh sab jo kuch howa hai yeh kaise howa kya howa, kyon howa? I've to know the truth." he turns his face to passenger seat and is shocked to see teji there.

Abhi: Tejali tum yahan?

Tej: toh tum arahe ho mere pass

Abhi: haan, aur main tumhe apna banakar lekar jaonga

Tej: main intiezaar kar rahi hon. and teji's image vanishes, abhi is left looking and happy too.

(Background song)

Dill karta hai nadaniyaan sehta hai lakhon sitam

Dill karta hai nadaniyaan sehta hai lakhon sitam

Rahi.....chalna hai ab tere sang yonhiiii

Tujhe main dhoonta phiron meri har chahat hai tu

Tujhe main dhoonta phiron meri har chahat hai tu

Tujhe main dhoonta phiron meri har chahat hai tuuuuu…. (OMG...love this song😳😳)

Goa -

Pratap's room

its now 9 pm. Pratap and teji had a fine day except pratap's encounter with that girl in mandir. They both are sitting and chitting teji is still thinknig about that girl but doesn't say anything. Teji then wants to eat Choco cip Ice Cream and pratap says its now late and shops are closed teji tells him there's a resturant where they sell this ice cream but resturant is like 20 mins far but pratap says he'll get het that ice cream. Teji asks him to leave it but pratap says no he'll get her that ice cream.

Abhi reaches hotel sunshine, while pratap is waiting for escolator to come. Abhi enters the hotel pratap enters the lift and push ground floor bottun. Abhi goes to receptionist and asks her about tejali and pratap. receptionist tells him thier room no. He goes to escolator and puches the bottun, he's waiting outside while pratap is inside the lift. Ting...lift opens when suddenly abhi's keys fall from his hands he bend dwon to pick them up and pratap gets out from life and goes other way and abhi enters the lift.


Abhi reaches the floor and goes to teji's room after 2-3 knocknig he realises she's not in her room so he decides to check pratap's room, he knocks the door and teji opens the door thinkig its pratap.

Teji: Pratap..itni chaldi ag..

Teji gets so shcocked, could not beleive what her eyes were showing her. She wanted to scream to shout to say something but her voice refused to come out. While abhi was sooo happy to see her after 4 days btu these 4 days were like 4 janams for him. His eyes were constantly looknig at her, memorising her beautiful face😳. she was looknig more beautiful than usual. Teji tries so much not to look in his eyes, tires to steal glances from him. teji finally looks at him and find him staring at her and she mistakenly looks in his eyes and both share an eye contact, both's eyes are locked, both seemed to forgot about world around them. *faints*😳

(background song)

Naina ki mat maniya re naine ki mat suniyo re

Naina ki mat maniya re naine ki mat suniyo re

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

jag te jado phunke ge re jhag te jag te jadu

jag te jado phunke ge re neendein banjar karlienge

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

Naina thag leinge naina thag leinge naina thag leinge

(Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳)

Finally teji breaks the silance and say: What r u doing here? why u came now? just leave ok.

Without waiting for abhi's answer she tries to close the doro but abhi put his hand in between so teji could not close the door. Abhi feels the pain and teji could see pain on his face so finally she lets him in.

Abhi: tejali..main

Teji turns around so she could not face abhi and says: just leave abhi, jsut go, mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.

Abhi: aur main yahan apne sawalon ka jawab lene aya hon aur woh leye baghar nahi joanga.

Teji: kaise sawal, kounse sawal? mere pass tumhare kissi sawal ka jawab nahi hai.

Abhi: hai sirf tumhare pass hi hai.

Teji: i don't want to answer ur any questions u just leave

Abhi gets angry and goes near her and hold from her arm and makes her turn around and look at him. Both are looking in each others eyes, abhi wants to hold her, kiss her soft lips. Teji is feelnig butterflies in her stomach

(background song)

Naina raat ko chalte chalte sawarga mein lejawein

Maigh malhar ke sapne bijaein haryani dekhlayein

Naina ko zabaan pe bharosa nahi ata

Likhad padhe na rasedh na khata

Naina ko zabaan pe bharosa nahi ata

Likhad padhe na rasedh na khata

Sari baat hawai re Sari baat hawai re

Teji tries to free herself but abhi is holding her tight.

Teji: abhi leave me, abhi its hurting

Abhi this instant release her arm, last thing he wants to do is to hurt her, give her pain. (awwwwww😳😳😳)

ABHI: i want the answers

Teji: which answers u talking about?

Abhi (shouts): YEHHH. and shows her that page from her own diary. teji is so shocked. Abhi shouts "READ THIS" and teji jolts and tries to read and is in totally shock, she doesn't know how to react. The truth she hid from him for her whoel life now is no longer hidden.

AbhI: i hope know u know which questions I'm talknig to u about?

Teji has tears rolling down her cheeks and she's standing life statue. Seeing her in this state abhi feels bad.

Abhi: teji plz speak, plz tell me the truth, I want to know the truth. Is it true?

Teji is still not reacting.

Abhi: plz react teji, plz do. kuch toh kaho kyayeh sach hai? kya tum mujhse?

Teji is still not looking at him

Abhi goes near her he then holds her face and teji gets shocked, wants him to stop but has no strength left in her. Abhi holds her face and makes her look at him. Teji feels an electric current flowing thorugh her body.

Abhi (looknig in her eyes): do u realyl loved me? always?

Teji did not dared to answer him he was still loonkgi in her eyes for an answer. teji lowers her eyes tears are fallnig like reain drops from her eyes and abhi could not see her like this. He uses him thumb and gently wipes her tears.

Abhi (wisphering and teji could feel abhi's breath on her face): bolo tejali kya yeh sach?

teji lowers her eyes, abhi sees this and is shocked.

Flashback

Abhi: teji, I really wanted to know anu if she loves me or not.

Teji: so did u confess ur feelings to her

Abhi nods his head as "YES" like a little boy

Teji: did u ask her if she loves u or not?

Abhi again nods his head in "YES"

teji: so

Abhi: So she just lowered her eyes and left

Teji: YESSS...

Abhi (in heartbroken voice): kya howa?

Teji hits him on head and says: arre budhu thats mean yes she do love u

Abhi: woh kaise?

Teji: arre baba when a guyz ask girl if she loves him or not and if girl lower her eyes that means yes

Abhi gets happy and jump in air

Flashback ends

Abhi feels on seventh sky, when suddenly teji moves away from him and turns away. Abhi become restless and then asks her

Abhi: teji I know u love me and now I want to tell you this too that I've realised that I too love you. U r my love teji, not anu. U were rite it was infatuation with anu but u r my true love. I love you.

Teji has so shocked and overwhelmed the 3 magic words she wanted to hear from him now she heard them. Teji turns around.

Abhi: teji but 1 thong is bothering me if u loved me for ur whoel life then how come u r with pratap? and how this Pratap's Baby? What happened?

Hearing this a thunder falls on teji's heart. Pratap's Baby teji could not bear this and now she knew what need to be done.

Teji with so much courage turns around looks at abhi and then speaks.

Teji: I think we need a correction Abhi. Main tumse Pyaar karti hon..

Abhi was on seventh sky

Teji: hon hani balke karti THI….

Abhi feels like someone has thorwn him down from seventh sky. His all dreams scattered ()

Teji: yea Abhi, I did loved u, but not anymore. Because you loved Anu na, remember Anu.

Abhi could not believe what he's hearing.

Teji: and now, when she dumped you and come to me and say that u love me? HUH…

Abhi trying to speak: teji..main

Teji (raising her voice): Main kya hah? Main kya? Ajj kehte ho ke anu se infatuation thi aur mujhse Pyaar hai kal kahoge ke muhjse infactuation hai aur tumhe kisi aur se Pyaar hai

Abhi shouts "Teji".

Teji: don't shout Abhi, I can shout too. Abhi the truth is I'm very happy with Pratap and we are going to begin our new life and I'm happy. Aur sach kahon mujhe tumhare es Pyaar par bharosa nahi hai.

Abhi goes totally red as someone has given him real tight slap, teji just shouts at him tells him to go away from there and from her life as sh'es happy with Pratap and she doesn't trust his love.

Teji: anu ke saath nahi nibha sakey mere saath kiya nibhaoge?

Teji pushes Abhi away and Abhi is totally scattered, his dreams were crushed. He just leaves in shocke teji closes the door and cries hard.

Car

Pratap has got the Ice Cream and is way back to hotel.

Pratap: mujhe Tejali se chupana nahi chahiye tha, mujhe usey batadena chahiye tha us ladki ke bare mein, pata nahi Tejali kya soch rahi hogi.

Hotel

Abhi goes out with his lost senses and Pratap comes in the hotel but both misses each other again. Abhi is completely scattered.

Pratap goes to room he knocks the door but hear teji's crying he then knocks but teji doesn't open so he the take out the keys and open the door. Pratap goes inside and is shocked to see teji sitting on floor and crying very bitterly and hard. He goes to her and asks her what happened teji just hugs him tightly and cries bitterly and loudly. Pratap could not bear to see teji in this state and asks her what happened? Teji still sobbing tells him all what happened between her and Abhi. Pratap is shocked to know all this and more shocked of what teji did.

Pratap asks her why she did this with Abhi as now he could've been hers as this is all she wanted in her life? Teji tells him: how Abhi still don't remember that night and how he thinks that I have relation with you and this baby is our, our MISTAKE, moreover if we tell him that then this baby will be burden on him remember he doesn't like the children much, I'll be burden on him which I don't want. And also I don't trust in Abhi's love rite now, I don't know why but I just don't. (😡, how dare she)

Pratap is heartbroken to know this, he really wants to tell truth to Abhi but can't. Pratap "maine wada kiya hai tumse aur main apna wada nibhaonga"

Pratap: lets go Tejali, lets go back. And teji just cries.

Abhi is walking on road shocked remembering Tejali's words and each word was breaking his heart each time in thousand pieces. Abhi breakdowns and fall on his knees in middle of road and cries really hard and looks at sky and shouts "WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY????" and cries really hard.😭 ( i can't see my abhi like this)

THE END

Written by: Day_Dreamer & Sallu_lover

Coming up:

New Entry coming soon.

Abhi: I'll make her believe in my love, she'll believe in me and my love.

Fight for love has begun.....

P.S. This is the longest part I've ever written😳
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Part 27 - page 33



Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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OMG....guyz I'm soooooooooo happy...I'm getting AWARD for BEST STUDENT😃 OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGG,...
I'm soooooooooo happy 😃 i'm on seventh sky 😊 Muje bohut khushi hai ajj..Awww i feel like so blessed, Thankyou Allah😃
i got the award last year too but that was for highest achievment in ICT examz. but today me getting for BEST STUDENT...Me sooo happyyyyy 😃 😃
But award evening is tonite and I can't go coz that time its Iftar but still i'll get my award tommorrow 😃 happy dancing...YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE lets party people 🥳

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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sorry double post😳

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very good 👏 👏
aww... these parts are so sweet... 😉
👏 👏 👏

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