Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48) - Page 36

Originally posted by: visrom

Absolutely fantastic 😃 I can see this happening in front of me. 👏

Originally posted by: swathi17

Awesome Diya di! Keep it up! It was indeed a treat to read... Loved it to the core!

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Hi sweetheart, congratulations on completing 2300+ posts, where is the party by the way... 😉 😉

No party. Promotion milne ke baad hi party milegi. You'll have to help me complete another 200 posts for that😉

And now, thanks a lot dear, for writing on the episode, that too so soon, I am deeply humbled, thank you... 🤗

Yeah, I can imagine your surprise. Mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mai itni jaldi koi story likh sakti hu😆

Coming towards the story, liked the idea of using that scene and then moving forward from the same spot... 👍🏼

Kya batau, poori story me aur kuch tha hi nahi story ki grip banane ke liye🥱

The starting explanation or say the portrayal of DUO's condition was very nicely done, especially the thing about Abhijeet sir recollecting himself because that's the thing I love the most in Snr. Ins. Abhijeet, his presence of mind, in whatever situation he is in... 👏

Thank you. I'm glad they showed that glimpse of Abhijeet sir in the episode too. I was rather afraid that they might end him up crying and not doing anything for the case.😃

After getting some ride, his confusion either he should go behind Daya sir or move back to his team and then taking a logical decision of going back to the hospital, well-done Boss... 👏 Explanation of how Abhijeet sir managed to go to the hospital, was something very much needed as I too was wondering seeing him standing on an empty road, that how would he manage to go from there, pat on your back for this, yar... ⭐️ ⭐️

Haan sach...episode dekhte hue bhi mere dimag me yahi aaya ki 'jodidaar to chale gaye, abb apka kya hoga Abhijeet babu'. So, as I have taken up the mission, I just had to cover the gap that the original writers left.😆😆

The whole conversation of Abhijeet sir with both the constables and sidewise measuring it in his mind and trying to figure out where Daya sir would have gone, that whole scene, especially that "Haan", one can easily find his care behind anger very clearly... 👏

Seriously Boss, I was very seriously reading, being deeply involved and then came this line, " barely thanking the man whom he had kept on the verge of a panic attack by the speed he had taken with his car ", hahaha, and I just broke into a laugh, imagining steering wheel in Abhijeet sir's hands and the "Halat" of the person sitting on the passenger seat, loved it... 😆 😆

Mujhe pata tha na aap jyada tension le loge, isiliye tension-breaker tha wo😉 See mai inti chinta kerti hu apki ki aap tension na lo isiliye to ACP sir ko bhi pehle hi bahar nikal diya😛

The whole portrayal of the scene of encouraging Daya sir not to lose hope and keep trying, Abhijeet sir's support, things running in his mind and then the joyous cry of the latter, you did a fabulous job of explaining all that yar, love you... 👏⭐️

Thanks yaar. Though frankly speaking, that joyous cry actually scared me quite a bit when I was watching the episode because I had earphones in my ear and I thought my mother had caught me watching CID during study time, that's why the shout. 🤣I didn't understand what had happened until Abhijeet sir smiled.

The condition of Daya sir after deactivating the bomb, all those thoughts running in his mind, very nicely done yar... 👍🏼 And then those two words after seeing no message from Abhijeet sir, haha, I just loved it... 😆 Really thoughtful of sending a message on his number before leaving, dant sy bachny ki achhi try thi sir ki, hehe... 😛

Try hi reh gayi wo...bach to nahi paye bechare. Acha hua.😆

I really enjoyed the explanation of Daya sir's fear from Abhijeet sir's anger because I love this fear of him... 😳 The idea of bringing references from some past episodes in here, really made it more strong yar, a big thumbs-up for this... 👍🏼

Thanks again😳

Whole that scene of Daya sir returning to Bureau, the conversation between him and team, the reaction which was no-reaction... 😉 he had received from Abhijeet sir was very catchy... ⭐️ The latter convo. of his with Freddy about Abhijeet sir was nice though I personally would have liked it more if he hadn't left his talk there but had told him about what he was going to say but it's completely my personal view, you did a great job, dear... 😊

Again telling you a secret...mera dimag blank ho gaya tha isiliye unhe dialogue nahi mila...much like I suppose Daya sir ka bhi hoga aise situation me. Sorry yaar.

That hesitation or say blankness of Daya sir from talking to Abhijeet sir, that controlled-composed response he received from the latter, that jotting down of the full stop a little forcefully, Abhijeet sir giving full attention to the latter to speak up, hahaha, oh man, you have really nailed it yar, I was able to clearly seen that rising temperature of the mercury, though looking calm from the outside, loved the whole scene... 👏 👏

I knew it! I knew you will like reading Abhijeet sir in this purana avatar.😛 But still I was a bit nervous about your reaction. Thank god you really liked it.😃

Ahh those teasing remarks, the old Abhijeet sir, just came in front of my eyes saying "Dost tou hum bhi hain, humien tou kabhi na kuchh dia", haha, I love these teasing led-pulling moments of DUO, so precious... ⭐️

The whole convo. happened in the interrogation room between DUO was very nicely done, loved the burst out of anger from Abhijeet sir, realizing Daya sir his mistake, though I think that if the steering wheel would be in Abhijeet sir's hands, he would have done the same, remember that Jay-Veru moment in the train where Abhijeet sir tricked Daya sir to save him and himself took the danger of going from outside the train... 😉 😉

Well, in the train situation, one of them had to be down in the train to secure that route too, right. They couldn't both go from the outside. When that decision was made, then they had to choose one person for the job. If Daya sir had tricked him there, I wouldn't have minded, really. But in these situations like the one in this story, I think a second mind wouldn't go amiss. Anyways, that's my opinion only.

Though he wouldn't be so irresponsible of not picking up the calls and cut off from the team, for which I am frustrated on my cutie pie... 😡

Ah, first time I suppose?😉😆

Enjoyed thoroughly Abhijeet sir's sad expressions for not being able to snub Daya sir now,

And that too just after he did exactly that for about half an hour.😆😆

and then him stopping Daya sir from doing any promise which they both know, that he won't fulfill, that was really sweet... 😳

Oh man, the ending was really sweet and beautiful, Abhijeet sir's teasing comment and my cutie pie's shy smile, I just loved it... ⭐️

Can't let the sarcasm specialist lose his chance, can we?😉 And I miss that shy smile from Daya sir nowadays.

Once again, thanks a ton sweetheart, for taking out your time and writing something so very sweet on DUO, love you dhaer sara, khush raho hamesha... 🤗

And thank you for reading not only this story but all the others as well and then giving your feedback in so detailed a way. Thank you and a bada sa hug.🤗

Take care dear, wish you a safe life, bye... 😊

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Thank you Swathi. 😳

Though which one did you read? The one on page 40 or the one on page 45? I posted 2 stories in the past few days na...😛

Originally posted by: swathi17

I read both of them! Both were awesome 😛

Originally posted by: Shilpam56

Hmmm... Aapke likhne ke khubi aachi hoti jaa rahi hai...good good... Mere sath rehkar kuch sikhe ho... Aachi bachi...

Aaise likhte raho, hum aapke sath hai...