Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48) - Page 34

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Yeah so very right sweetheart, thankfully came here at the right time... 😃

Hehe, thank you guriya, khush raho hamesha...

Oh, thank you baita jaan for telling me about all this, will surely check your other works too... 😊 And will share the feedback with you... 😈

Love you pyari doll... 🤗

Hahaha yeah baitu, I do remember... 😉

Baitu jaan, not a recent one, as I am not coming online from god knows how long... 😛

I am talking about that decades ago time when we used to chat on FF... 😆 😆

Wish you happy and safe life sweet doll, take care... 😊

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

kal ki episode dekha?

No!! Kal episode tha?😲 I waited till 10:50 but they only showed Comedy Circus.

woha firse ACP ne Abhijeet ki loyalty pey ek sawal kiya.. and when some of fans were discussing they were angry with acp

I should have expected this. Comeback ke liye they always use this old trick 🥱

but I was looking at it from different point of view.. koi jab kisi pey bahut bharosa krta to usse koi bhi chuk expect nahi krte na accept kr pate. aqsar elder siblings ko parents se yea face krna parta

most of the stories ignore ACP ki mentality and ignore this point

😭
That is exactly what I try to show in my stories. Waise bhi, ghar pe ho ya college ya jobs me...sabse jyada daat seniors ko hi padti hai. 😆😆 Moreover, purane time me baat jyada badi nahi hoti thi. Like this case I wrote about...it was just a gift, nothing too serious.
you showed it very beautifully 👏

Thank you so much Kritika...😃

and yadeein taxa or diya yaar.. WO gari scene yaad agayi
Daya manaoying and Abhijeet ankhe dikhaying.. coatless Abhijeet babu ko firse miss bhi krwa diya 😳

I miss that angry young coatless cop every single time I watch CID Now he only takes off coat when beating up criminals. Or getting kidnapped. 😳

@bold, Meri yaadein tab ki taaza ho gayi jab ye forum active raha karta tha aur regular discussions chalti thi. Story ki wajah se phir itne friends se baat ho gayi. How I miss those days...*sighs*😔

Originally posted by: 23Diya

@Bold, WAITING!!!!!! (Impatiently)😃😛

@Italics, Oh yes, I remember those very well. Its rather difficult to forget those messages, they were sooo lonnng.😆

Hopefully I will see you here more often now. Specially in this thread with the reviews you promised😳

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Love you bchcha, khush raho hamesha... 😊

Hahaha, so very true Boss... 😆

Well yes, here I am again to fulfill at least my this commitment as unfortunately my record in keeping my commitments is not much bright... 😛 😛

So now coming to your stories, so baitu jaan, some of them I've already read on FF and had shared my feedback there, but thank you for posting them here too, reviving those old sweet memories and making me able to read SIX stories of yours the same day, hehehe... 😉 😆

So now coming to the new story, that "Missing Sandal", well to be true, reading the title I thought it would be funny one, but you have really "Ghumaoed" my mind to 360 degree darling, itna investigation, itna twisted ander hi ander Allah janey kitna kuchh ho gaya, maira tou dimagh hands up ker gaya, hehe... 😛

But I LOVED the starting, the way you described Daya sir's bike, Abhijeet sir's car and Freddy sir's scooty, opps correction, fear of everyone from Freddy sir's scooty, hehehe, I just loved and enjoyed it thoroughly... 👏 👏

About the investigative part, so you already know it guriya, my mind doesn't work much on that part but I really remained involved in it and haven't scrolled down to skip that part as I sometimes do, hehe... Remembering this much names, their alibies, the true stories, records, other phone numbers, my goodness boss, maira dimagh phir sy ghoomny lgga hai, hehehe... So very awesome attempt baitu, your grip on plot remained really strong the whole way... ⭐️⭐️

Thank you bchchy and take care sweet doll, stay safe... 😊

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

kal ki episode dekha? woha firse ACP ne Abhijeet ki loyalty pey ek sawal kiya.. and when some of fans were discussing they were angry with acp

but I was looking at it from different point of view.. koi jab kisi pey bahut bharosa krta to usse koi bhi chuk expect nahi krte na accept kr pate. aqsar elder siblings ko parents se yea face krna parta

most of the stories ignore ACP ki mentality and ignore this point
😭

you showed it very beautifully 👏

and yadeein taxa or diya yaar.. WO gari scene yaad agayi
Daya manaoying and Abhijeet ankhe dikhaying.. coatless Abhijeet babu ko firse miss bhi krwa diya 😳

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

story likhte raha karo..batein hoti rehegi.. already started waiting for next 😉

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Thank you sooo much...😳

Aisa nahi hai...mujhe to humesha apke promise kerne ke baad feedback mili hai, no complaints there from me.😛

Arre ye FW walo ki karamat hai jo itne sare characters daal diye, aur shuruat me bhi pata nhi kaise ajeeb se scenes. 🤢 Un sabko manage kerte kerte hi jaan nikal gayi thi. Ye FW ke Shaatir lekhak contest wala story hai na...

Oh yes, I remember your allergy to investigative stories.😆😆 Don't worry, jitna mujhe yaad hai, ye meri last investigative story thi. Iske baad bas ek combined work the GD ke sath. Baki individual work sab non-investigative Duo/Trio stories.😃

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

My pleasures, sweetheart... 😃

Ohhh I really love you for saying this Boss, otherwise, mostly friends agree with me on that note, hehehe... 😆 😛

Oh yes, I have read that on the starting note of your story, though couldn't get that at that time as I only know that there had happened some contest like this, though don't know the details... So thank you bchcha for explaining this, and once again, you did a brilliant job while tackling the plot... 👏 👏

Hehehehe... 😛 😛

Oh no worries baitu, I really enjoy reading investigative stories as well, by such beautiful writers like you, khush raho hamesha... 😊

And yeah bchcha, one query, what does OTT stands for...??? 😕