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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: Metis
Firstly sorry it took me so long to read the story. I would open it everyday to read but something would come up and I would be pulled away.

Anyways finally read it and just loved it! Been so long since I've read something good on CID and this was such a well-written piece. 😳

It's no problem Shreya! You still made time and read it, and that's what matters more. 😳

And I am so happy that you liked it so much. Merci beaucoup!😛

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DUO-MRF.

@CIDlover-01

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Hahaha, going good Boss, keep it up... 😉

True, I was indeed surprised... 😃

Hahahahahahaha no comments here Boss... 😛

Ah, good for me then that I didn't fear for this thing as I don't remember FW ever did something like this with Abhijeet sir's character, showing him doing nothing and crying, thanks to good Lord, they haven't ruined his character to this extent... 😳

Joridar ko trust jo tha na that he will manage something... 😉 Thumbs-up to you deary... 👍🏼

Hahaha thank you for the tension breaker yar and thank you itni sari care k liye bhi... 😳 Ab Saturday wali episode mein main ny thanks kia ACP sir ko resign kerny k liye aur woh Sunday wali mein phir sy aa gaye, dhoka ho gaya mairy sath... 😆 😆

Hahahahahahahaha thankfully I wasn't wearing ear-plugs though that loud cry was felt like a little childish idea to me as obviously when there was no BOOM, tou bomb blast nahin hua ho ga na, iss mein itna cheekhny ki kya zarort thi, but what else to expect from this over-grown kid, hehehe... 😛

Tou bch sakna bhi nahin tha Boss, herket ki thi kya bchny wali, class tou lgni hi thi... 😆

Jee nahin, mairy Daya sir ka dimagh kabhi blank nahin hota, kyun k sir k paas tou dimagh hai hi nahin... 🤣

Yeah yar, ks ko pasand nahin ho Abhijeet sir ka purana avatar, ab tou ptta nahin kya bnna dia paker k unhien...

Umm, yar in the same episode when Daya sir presented the idea k dono k jany ki zarort nahin hai, koe aik ly jaye bomb, Abhijeet sir seconded it asking Daya sir to let him go alone with the bomb... But still its my opinion and you presented yours and its really good that we see the same thing with different opinions, bringing different aspects of the same thing or scene in light, which helps in bringing variations in our writings... 😃

Hahaha, bilkul, ab mairy Daya sir rooz rooz tou dant khany waly kaam nahin kerty na... 😛

Hahahahahaha, memory loss attack Boss, hahaha... 😆 Brry sibling hamesha bhool jaty hain, chhoton ko dant k... 😆

For sure... 😉 True yar, that's why I use to watch any old episode every now and then to see my cutie pie's that sweet grin... 😳

Pleasures deary, take care... 😊

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#363

Upcoming story:

Beyond Investigation: Episode- The Deadly Betrayal.

Posting this here just to keep myself motivated while I complete the (hopefully) one-shot.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#364

Good one....waiting. 😃

Edited by visrom - 6 years ago

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halfbloodprince

@Wistfulness

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: 23Diya
Upcoming story:
Beyond Investigation: Episode- The Deadly Betrayal.
Posting this here just to keep myself motivated while I complete the (hopefully) one-shot.

Opened this thread and that name made so many memories flash before my eyes.

Looking forward to your OS.