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Wow.. I saw it coming..!!
I had this mere feeling since starting that the end of this case will be like this.. Daya can't betray like this.. there is some plan... there is something hidden.. Well that's that. Overall a really applaudable chapter.
It was really nice to see Daya in this new touch. And seeing him investigate and enjoying everything in it was really really soothing.
Though Daya shooting Abhijeet seemed really shocking but till then the story had reached the limits of infinity and I said loudly This is a plan.. and so it was..
I loved each and eveything..
I liked the fact that Daya didn't let anyone feel that all this is planned up.
But this last line is quite disturbing...!! And it is urging me to think on it.. and so do I am doing since I completed reading this.. lol.
anyways can't wait for the next chapter.. and let's see what future brings for us..
Hats off to you Bhaijaan and Neeme di.!!
Thank you for this great masterpiece.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
God bless you both.

WOW Daya sir is Back😊. Ek dum Dahsu Part Tha Aur aap dono ne tu KAMAL hi ker diya Hats off to both of you 😊 mein tu iss chapter ke bare mein kehna chahu gi k KYA BAAT KYA BAAT KYA BAAT 👍🏼 🤗 but last line ne hosh-o-hawas hi uda diye Ab bas agle part ke liye WAITING WAITING WAITING

part 4:

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Now part 5:

Neeme and GD just read the first 2 parts of your story Darkest hours and i am already saying its very chilling and grilling. What a story this is yaar, I read 2 parts only and i am already saying its a masterclass. Kya likha hai tum dona ne. I have no words to express myself. Kya hungama kara kardiya hai tum dona ne. Literally speechless you know. I am already getting an heart attack with suspense and Daya's planning. Its superb just superb...Ek dam mast concept and plot Neeme. I was missing your combine productions and was reminding myself of your other stories espically masterpiece Truth behind the scene. Is story ne to sab stories ko peeche hiladiya. Loved DIG and DCP million dollor question Who will be the next ACP? His attempt to confront Abhijeet..anger..tension about his sons' career...when needed scold to them..all were shown perfectly and brilliantly. Bechare Abhi ko apne bachpan ka coat nikala na para. Bahat dukh hua yaar..lol. he way you have shown Daya sir..simply awesome..I love it to the core. Sharp, dangerous and daredevil super cop. I was missing this type of stuff from Daya. Really liked the secret investigation part. Daya sir's plan..disguise..alertness..giving instructions to his gang members..connection with the informer..plan to escape Jagya from jail..using liquid fluoride to burn jail..everything was just fabulous. Were do you 2 get such ideas from its amazing. Yaar itna heart attack dene wale chijein mat likho. Tension ho jati hai, Coming to the second part ab uske bare mein kya kahu...Daya sir's behaviour towards Abhi sir, Acp sir and teammates not unacceptable but chalta hai since i know this is all Daya sirs some sort of plan but killing a little cute girl just because a guy told him is seriously shocking. Daya sir is not the type of person to do this even though he is a heartless criminal in the eyes of CID. So many questions are raising in mind i am totally confused right now...I mean Daya wasnt the type to grab ACP's postion. He can't be doing all this to get rid of ACP sir... Its was really nice to see the bond between Freddy sir and Daya sir Loved it to the core. I missing Daya's keechai on Freddy. ACP sir's mental struggle, pain of a father is really heart touching and over whelming. Loving how ACP keep getting flashbacks of Nakul and the gunshot. Good that you both reminded about him to us...I am so feeling bad for Abhi sir. He has turned into a zinda laash. His condition is totally worse then ACP sir's. I just want him to get back into his supercop job so he get the matter into his own hands and solve the case instantly. Funny element of your story was that Tony. Simply awesome attitude... Now i am definitive not liking this new Daya speaking nonsence against his own team members especially ACP sir. Daya is hurting me as well.. I mean it is going too far.. with the abuses and stuff,,,You brought back Rahul and Aman in your combine productions. Excellent loved their scenes. You written how they would feel perfectly. Both of the chapters were excellent and very well written. Both of you deserve an standing ovation for this as it's a masterpiece ab dekhte hai agye kya hota hai. Chapter 3 and 4 ka review agle hafte...

Originally posted by: dreamyrose

awesome love the series tht u wrote they were amazing i have a request when writting can u like add vivek kajal sonali in as characters i am a big fan of these it would be gr8 if u do thanks

Originally posted by: duoa

Nemee di and GD u r just amazing u know aap ki hr writing itni kamal hai ab to tareef karn ab ajeeb sa lagta hai k phr se wohi brilliant , kamal , mind blowing etc etc etc

But definitely kehna to pare ga another great piece of work👏 the way u showed each and every move is just amazing i was imagining while reading it i loved this chapter to core of my haert itne sare questions ka aik jhatke main answer mil gaya aur jo reh gaya hope so k next main mil jae ga 😊

waiting for next update

TC

Originally posted by: snehal.

Giving review for all the parts that i missed 😛

A Tons of THANK YOU for this...🤗

Part 3 Hmmm.. Not much comments from me due to some reasons.. I think GD knows them 😉 And hence didn't enjoyed much. But but but i really liked Rahul's increased bonding with the team and especially with abhijeet. The bhoot's and moving car through jungle was intelligent move. Overall a great update. But was shocked with Daya's reaction towards a lady when she was getting beaten up. I hope we will get a explanation towards this behaviour in future parts

😆😆😆 Hmmm GD tou itna Masoom hay, bhala Usy kya malum why U not gives Comment due to SOME REASON...😉

Thank you for Liking, Honestly RAHUL is the Only Character I initiated in CID My Stories so I have Special Feelings about Him as Character...😳😳😳

The ATMA Factor was just in a Bit Move... U knew na KD mein aaj Kal AATMA hee Dikha rahy hain na Hr taraf...😆😆😆

Thank You so much...😳😳

Part 4 Cool.. So with so much of preparations of CID team with brains their heart and good nature lost them. Though somehow its difficult to understand that all the team including ACP sir totally forgot about robbery. But again saving people was too much important for them and hence the mistake. Too many accidents but not much hurt, great plan by Daya 👏 Somehow i am liking this use of "saam, daam, dand, bhed" neeti by Daya to tackle the team.

Yes its Difficult to Digest that all Distract but already as U mentioned that Civilion Hurt was a Big Shock so Protect them was their First Priority which they all had done...😊😊

Yes DAYA Sir did not try to Hurt Much especially those who are Not come across direct to His Revenge Part...😉😉

This RED part I cant get so plz Brief it ...😕😕

BTW, Again Thank You so very much...😳😳

Part 5 And finally the suspense opens. Very action packed part and involvement of Prabhakar was a great surprise. So he helped jagya to loot his own bank? Well nice move to get money.. The students taking out their anget on Tony.. Loved it.. Why should they miss the fun right?? But ye kya DUO are brutally hurt. Daya switched of his consciousness and Abhijeet with brutal wounds have 2 strong hits on head. He fought as he got strength from Daya but what now? I hope it doesn't lead to memory loss or something more worst. I really want both my duo back but its difficult to prove innocence of Daya in front of HQ( not innocence really but afterall he was in right side.). So will he be back in CID? Waiting waiting...

Neeme n GD Hats off .. You girls have created super awesome story with superfantastic plot this time!! But i am scared with last eveil smiley of neeme's note. What's in store for us now? 😛

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Mere dimag ko shanti milane hi nahi dete ho na tum dono... OMG finally Daya back... ufff but now whats this bomb blast... Daya injure OMG yaar... yaar I am confused at a point Tony Daya ke sath tha na... fir...

upps sorry confused at one point no confused at so many points

ab jaldi se next chapter post karo... warana

meri Kamine panti pata hai na... Daya sir ki fan hue... kahi mai bhi aapna brain dare devil tarike se na use kardu...