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I read first part of the story ...this time i have no words to say anything ...actualy m nt in condition to say a single word...u wrote the story in so realistic ways...i feel its all happend around me nd in the whole i was just crying, crying nd crying😭😭..nd my stomach feel sm currents while reading 😭...hw can any1 do this to Baby 😡 ...kray koi or bhare koi 😡...nd i was so included in this story..Baby's name Nakul ??...m nt expectd this bt its gud 😊 ...Namkarn Ceremony , its great 😊...the way u show Nakul's feet increases day by day was very nice [:D>] nd Daya sir cnditn cracked me frm inside realy 😭...nd Abhijeet sir too 😭...i just finger crossed ...nd today nw i feel realy a lucky person that God Bless me with Lovely Parents... Thank u God ..Thank u so much 🤗 God Bless the All with this Priceless Gift 😳

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Okay so finally done! GD you made me cry! And you know a lady on the bus even gave me her hanky because of that!

But really hats off to you! Whenever I think something will be okay, you would twist it and shock me again!

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Okay so finally done! GD you made me cry! And you know a lady on the bus even gave me her hanky because of that!

But really hats off to you! Whenever I think something will be okay, you would twist it and shock me again!

Originally posted by: shreela

I am so proud of u GD! 😃 u did a great job in this part.👏👏

Originally posted by: -Shruti

Great story Dada !! Hats off to you !!
Loved everything since the beginning. Points raised by Shreela di were noticed by me hence I don't feel like repeating them.
Part 2 was par excellence and there's nothing to point out in it. It was pure, emotional and I felt the golden era flashbacks flashing everywhere. Those dialogues were echoing through my head. Loved the concept of recollecting old memories.
CID team made a superb plan to get hold of Daya sir. He doubted them as I had guessed earlier but the plan didn't fail 😆
Overall, a great story once again.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

😲😲😲 Really U cried Alot...

I hope Pessangers were Not Swimming in Ur Tears inside the Bus which made a Huge Swimming Pool there...😆😆😆

BTW, did U give back that HENKY to the Lady or tucked it inside Ur Pocket like SHERYA did with BHAI Henky...🤣😉

Thank You so much SHERYA for giving Me such a Lovely Feedback in Few Words...🤗

Originally posted by: snehal.

Ok.. So finally braced myself and read the story and again cried. Not as much as in first part but cried. You promised me you will make me accept Daya was right and Abhijeet was wrong and give strong reasons for that. The reasons said by Daya are his personal ones. Family of kid by whatever reasons abondoned him and only came again when they got to know they can't have kids again shows how selfish they were. But still they cared and now will continue to do so i guess after knowing entire CID is with him!

I liked the part of diary and evidences overlapped. And the end of the story was the first of a kind in your stories. I liked that very much..

One more thing i wanted to ask yaar kitne baar ye dono marne ka natak karke ek doosre ko blackmail karenge? Its really difficult to even read such scenes. And Daya hamesha ghar chodke kyun jata hai? Iss baar toh abhijeet was culprit for everyone but he faced that all and never left..

(Ok some of the comments are paidaish of a certain shaitani section of my dimag 😈so don't take them personally. Not intended to hurt anyone 😃)

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

I read first part of the story ...this time i have no words to say anything ...actualy m nt in condition to say a single word...u wrote the story in so realistic ways...i feel its all happend around me nd in the whole i was just crying, crying nd crying😭😭..nd my stomach feel sm currents while reading 😭...hw can any1 do this to Baby 😡 ...kray koi or bhare koi 😡...nd i was so included in this story..Baby's name Nakul ??...m nt expectd this bt its gud 😊 ...Namkarn Ceremony , its great 😊...the way u show Nakul's feet increases day by day was very nice [:D>] nd Daya sir cnditn cracked me frm inside realy 😭...nd Abhijeet sir too 😭...i just finger crossed ...nd today nw i feel realy a lucky person that God Bless me with Lovely Parents... Thank u God ..Thank u so much 🤗 God Bless the All with this Priceless Gift 😳

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet

Now im inspired to write another uninvestigative one..!!😊😃

my gaaawd GD