Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Reshma

@RiDzDAYAlover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

aww.. what a story GD..!! filled with soo many cute moments..!! once again an awesomest story..!! totally different concept.. very well executed !!! just too good !! :*

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: Shreya_luvs
A very good story GD. Loved the plot and the suspense and everything about it. You rocked once again. 🤗

SHERYA, i have No Words what to say to U, U are mostly the First Reader as well the Feed Backer😳😳, wesay boss ye SUSPENSE kya tha Story mein... 😆

Thank You sooo very much...🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: mano86
@Gadhadada

very nice story 👏
gr8 plot.. i must say ⭐️

THANK YOU MANU 86...😳😳

nice to have UR Feedback... 😃😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: mahrukh
woow... brilliant story theme was totaly differet but it was very well written... its brilliant loved it... :)

Thank YOU MAHRUKH...🤗

basically main Obsessed Lover per likhna chata tha...😉😉

per BHAI nay kah mujhy Baksh do...😆😆😆

yup the Theme was really Different...😳😳

Thanks alot Once Again... 😳😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#925

Originally posted by: RiDzDAYAlover
aww.. what a story GD..!! filled with soo many cute moments..!! once again an awesomest story..!! totally different concept.. very well executed !!! just too good !! :*

I really want those cute moments on screen...😳😳😳

Mujhy BHAI ko Sharmatay huay dekhna hay...🤗

Thank You RIDZ...🤗

buht Shukriya...🤗

Jeeti raho aur Khush raho...😳

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Mehak

@maggi.masala

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#926

Ossam as alwayz Dada...really liked the suspence...n aftr readng tagline of lv story i thot it wud related to obsessed lvr... Unfortunately i too hav presentation phobia..pta nhi kb jayega... Anyways thanx dada fr sweet drmz

Edited by maggi.masala - 13 years ago

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Forfriend

@Forfriend

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Posted: 13 years ago

#927

Uppss DADA 😆 Bari aankhun wali 🤣

First when I started reading I was Like arre yeh Dada thik toh hai

I am not expecting a love story from You

You you of course know why 😆

But yaar Its really nice showing really a new shed of Daya to tackle this things its lovely

gr8 Job BH 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Ika

@-De.De-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#928

Mera detail review toh pehle hi jaanti ho... once again, awesome work!!👏👏👏

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#929

I read this one...one point...

Daya's weight Weight: 120 lbs…??? 😲….this is too less….

The other thing...frankly I don't get the hang of this Rahul who pops into every story of yours. It's one thing to have a new character in one story, but if he turns into a regular CID character it becomes difficult to accept.

I am not for any romantic angles in CID, still...I don't mind if there's a girl in any of our cop's lives. This one too ended in another mini-disappointment for Daya...after Sonali and Purvi...I really feel bad if he likes a girl and it ends in a break up. 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#930

Dadu ki ist love story oops dadu ke bhai ki luv story...wink
so swt n cute..simply awesome dada
story pdhte pdhte swt si smile face pr aa gyi
thank u dada for giving dis cute doze
rahul ka aman ke lie jo pyar aur care show kia hai that s very heart touching
n in last stanza u describe abt sum swt moments r very very touching
sbki life main aise moments hote hai jo chehre pr muskraht la skte hai
thank u 4 rembering that
bs ab month main 1 -2 var aisa doze de dia kro..wink
luv u dada
n dher sari hugs for u