Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#931

its really a sweet story DADA luvd it 👏

n luvd these lines ❤️

da smallest gestures dat go RIGHT to da heart!!!!!!!!

a SMILE from a STRANGER wen U are LOST in a CROWD;

an OLD FRND calling from a DISTANT land jus to say 'I MISS U';

da touch of MOTHER'S hand in ur FOREHEAD wen u r UNABLE to SLEEP;

a HAND in ur SHOULDER wen it feel dat the world AGAINST u;

an UNXPECTED but badly needed HUG from da one U luv da MOST;

I pray, U get all these wen u need them a lot;

stay blessed, always...

it means alot 🤗

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Sheen

@..Princess..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Sweet and lovely story 😊

great work DADA👏👏

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halfbloodprince

@Wistfulness

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Awesome story Dada 👍🏼
Enjoyed a lot while reading this one. The song singing parts were truly hilarious 😆
I had a nice laugh reading this unique story.

The last lines took my heart ❤️

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Tami_

@Tami_

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Wow this story is awesome luv the songs of rahul sung to tease daya yaa I also ljuv the title and last words thats awesome overall fantastic story this is a diff story

when I read the title I am shocked luv story or GD

Edited by Tami_ - 12 years ago

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Soni.

@Soni.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Sorry GD i couldn't comment earlier as i was reading by phone and i wanted to say something more then ' what a wonderful story' so i came home and first thing i did was comment on your fabulous story.

Wow what an awesome story GD. Hats off to you for making this type of story. You added a mixture of comedy,a bit romance and a bit friendship. The way you described each and every aspect of the story was fabulous. I enjoyed myself a lot while i was reading this one and smiling at every single sentence. The song singing parts by Rahul was two funny. It was a total unique story. The last lines that you wrote were truly inspiring i am a bigg bigg fan of you.